IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 64

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Many young people move out of their homes to live alone or to live with their friends. Some people think this is a good idea. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Its an contentious issue whether to move from parents in a young age or stay with them for a longer time. I concur living on your own or with friends is a better option to fully understand the reality of adults life. In this essay I will elaborate on why I strongly stand for it.

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Some peopel say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports faciliteis. Others, howevesat that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Some people tend to suggest that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. However, other people say that this would have little effect on public health and that other efforts are required.

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In many countries, the government prioritises economic growth above all other concerns. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.

In many countries, the government emphasizes economic development above all other concerns. The benefits of this are it increases the annual income of the general public, and improves the infrastructure of a country. The drawbacks are the other important sectors of a country experience neglect, and the environment gets polluted.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Many people try to achieve success through their career or education. What can success mean to different people? What is your view of success? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words.

A proliferation of high-achieving students globally prove that youths are reliant on obtaining outstanding grades. Moreover, adults are also chasing their dreams, pushing themselves to secure holistic jobs. However, can this be an indication of success? Does it mean those achieving lesser are failures? Therefore, I believe that success is subjective and depends on the curation one depicts about it.

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In some countries, there are not enough medical or educational facilities in rural ares. Therefore, some people believe newly graduated teachers and doctors should be sent to work in rural area for sometime. Other people think that people should be free to choose where they work after graduation. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Some people think that teachers and doctors should send to rural areas to work for sometime to increase the medical and educational facilities of these areas. However, others believe that these professionals should have that right to choose where they will work after graduation. I personally believe that while rural areas have lack of medical and educational support, each professional has that right to work where they like.

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In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

Recent years, it is discovered that the average weight of citizens is facing an upward trend. At the same time, their health and fitness levels are plummeting which means that they are facing more health problems. Personally, I think the main reasons are the appearance of unhealthy food and the convenient transportation systems in the cities.

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The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Driving is always a convenient way for people to go out. Since the appearance of the first car on British roads in 1888, vehicles are used more frequently. Currently, it is not surprising to see plenty of cars, buses, etc running on the roads. In view of this situation, it is suggested that more types of transport should be promoted and laws should be made. Personally, I agree that there is a need to do something in order to alleviate the problem of such a large amount of vehicles on the roads.

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a growing population is a big problem in many countries. should the government provide new homes in the cities or countrside?

There is no doubt, number of countries are troubling with problem og growing population, which might be solved by making some new buildings. However, some other measures could be taken to alleviate this trouble. I shall shed light upon statement by covering a lot of ground in further paragraphs.

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Being a celebrity - such as a movie star or professional athlete - brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity has more benefits or drawbacks?

There is no denying the fact that living as a famous person could have disadvantages more than advantages. I agree with this statement, it has more drawbacks. In this essay, I will talk about this problem and express my opinion.

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It is better to learn the way people lived in the past through films and video records than written documents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are numerous numbers of films and videos that are belonged to people lived in the past. In addition, we can derive some beneficial information through books and written papers that are passed to us from past people. For better understanding, both of them can be refered. In this essay, I will outline these ways in more details.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

The growth of online shopping has significantly transformed the way people purchase goods and services. While it offers significant convenience and variety, I disagree that it will lead to the complete closure off all physical shops in town. Some argue that this trend could eventually lead to the closure of all physical shops in towns, but believe that online shopping will continue to expant, it is unlikely to completely replace traditional stores.

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Some people think that good health is a basic human need, so medical services should not be run by profit-making companies. Do the advantages of private health care outweigh the disadvantages?

In this day and age, some people hold a belief that private health care should not be operated for commercial purpose. While the private sector could admittedly raise some concerns, I would argue that its benefits are more substantial and should not be dismissed.

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Some people believe that governments should have access to people’s mobile phone call records and messages for safety reasons. Others believe that this information is private and should not be available without permission. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

There is a strong debate whether the government shuld has access to check the private messages and calls of the citizens or not. It is agreed that people phone calls and messages must stay confidential and private but as long as this access will safe life and protect the community, then I am totally agree with letting the government to check messages and calls to serve the country. However, this essay, will discuss why such an information should be reachable and give examples to illustrate the condition.

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The plans below show an airport in 1980 and following its development in 2020

The given maps compare how an airport changed between 1980 and 2020.

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In some countries, the role of a mother differs in some ways from the role of a father. Why do you think these differences exist? How might parental roles develop in the future?

Parental responsibilities vary from domain to domain. I would argue that this situation is heavily related to the traditional position of women in society. However, fathers are expected to take more active role in terms of childcare as more female citizens will be working.

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Some people believe that traveling alone is the best way to experience a country or a culture. Others feel that it is better to travel with people you know. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A lot of people claim that the greatest way to descover the country is by traveling alone, while others believe that the best to travel with your family or friends. However, this essay will discuss both perspecetives and provide my own opinion.

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Crirtical thinking skills are often highlighted as essential for success in both academic and professional settings. Why is the ability to think critically so crucial, and how can individuals develop and apply these skills in their daily lives? Provide examples to support your explanation.

Taking criticism in the way we think is one of skills that are crucial for people to be succeed in both professional and educational settings. Being able to think critically is essential for personal development because it will help people to overcome problems that they might face. Subsequently, it propels creative thinking to make an innovation that will be beneficial for economic development.

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Some people believe that in the future, environmental problems will mean that we are unable to live on this planet. In order to survive, the human species will need to find another planet that can support life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Due to the Earth's damage done by human activities, many agrees that this planet will be no longer inhabitable for humans and other creatures. Therefore, they believe it is our responsible to search for another Earth-like planet. I am strongly disagree as this will raise another upcoming issues and a waste of time since the search will be a doubt.

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Nowadays more and more older people who are looking for a position have to compete with younger people for the same jobs. What problems does this cause? What are some possible solutions?

Nowadays finding a job is becoming an increasingly difficult process.Even middle aged people have to compete and keep trying to get a job.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A teacher's ability to relate well with students is more important than the ability to give knowledge.

The issue of the capability of well-related teachers with students is adequately more significant than the capability to teach the knowledge, which is often debated, with varying perspectives. In my opinion, I firmly agree that a strong relationship between teachers and students is the most important, as this approach seems more effective to give the learning.

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