IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 64

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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whether or not children spend most of daytime in phones

The topic of whether or not children spend most of daytime in phones has sparked a heated debate. While some people consider that this will lead to the generation’s degradation, I strongly believe that this tendency could have positive consequences.

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As part of their education, students should spend a period of time living in another country to learn its language and culture. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today’s modern era, many believe that students should live in another country to enhance their language skills and culture. However, some argue that it comes with financial and emotional challenges. I totally disagree with this statement.. This essay will account for both issues.

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Some people think that human needs for farmland, housing, and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals. Do you agree or disagree with this point of view?

In my opinion, both human and animals needs are important. Nowadays, ecological diversity is facing different issues, such as global warming and overfishing which may affect the living environment of animals. These problems become more noticable with the advancement of human development. How to balance between human and animals needs is a controversial topic. Some people think that it is essential to prioritize the value of environmental friendly in the toppest place as human also be included in the ecology. However, it is really need to pick a choice between human and animals? If we can have a better land management for filfulling the requirement of both human and animals, we can make a balance in the human development and environment. therefore, i do not agree that human needs for farmland, housing and industry are more significant than saving land for endangered animals, both choices can co-exist.

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Many people strive to maintain a successful career and happy family life at the same time. What problems can this situation cause? What are the possible solutions? Assel

Many people struggle to keep a prosperous career and cheerful family life simultaneously. The main problem is the lack of time. However, if family members help each other and employers show understanding, it becomes much easier to handle both responsibilities.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

In certain countries, there is a growing number of people getting interested in exploring the history behind the place they live in. This essay will discuss the reasons why the trend is formed, and offer several approaches to get involved in the research.

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All education and healthcare should be funded by the government and free for everyone. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

Government has to provide free healthcare and education for the citizens.I completly agree, because its cinsidered as an investment when it comes to free education. this will help decrease poverty, so it will have a huge impact on the country's development while unpaied healthcare will encourage people to not neglect their health which will limit their health problem from becoming worse, and this will protect people's lives.

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All education and healthcare should be funded by the government and free for everyone. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

The government has to provide free healthcare and education for the citizens.I completly agree, because its considered as an investment, when it comes to free education. this will help decrease poverty, so it will have a huge impact on the country's development, while unpaied healthcare will encourage people to not neglect their health, which will limit their health problem from becoming worse, and this will protect people's lives.

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recent years, the number of crime committed by young people in major cities throughout the world is increasing. discuss this issues. give reasons and suggest some solutions.

With every passing day, a sudden surge is observed in crimes especially by the young generation in mega cities. Several reasons are behind this behaviour. This essay will shed light on the causes and the possible solutions for this problem.

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Some people think they have the right to use as much fresh water as they want, while others believe that governments should strictly control the use of freshwater as it is a limited resource. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is no denying the fact that every individual has the right to use a fresh water as much as they need. While it is a commonly held belief that governments should be more strict in controlling the use of fresh water, there is also an argument that, people have the right to use the water without any control from their government. This essay will analyse this topic from both points of view and express my opinion.

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Science and technology are transforming the world nowadays. Some people claimed that university students should study subjects that could enhance them and socialise in the future rather than their passions. However, there are both advantages and disadvantages to this idea.

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In some countries, an increasing number of children are overweight or obese as a result of eating too much fast food. Banning fast food from school canteens is the best way to fight this problem.

Obesity or excessive weight have become one of the major issues among children. Some argued that banning the supply of fast food at school could be a solution to prevent childhood obesity. In my opinion, I agree that giving a strict restriction to offer fast food in a school canteen could address this problem.

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many criminals commit further crime as soon as they releasde from prison. what do you think are the cause of this. what are the possible solutions can you suggest.

It is often observed many offenders reoffend after released from prison.This worrying trend can be attributed to various society and systematic factors .However, with the right measures , this cycle of crime can be broken.

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many today feel that families should take account for the young generation to guiding them on how they can be an ideal person in society while others think school should do . As we know both parents and school have a massive effect on children's personal growth and development thus, in my opinion, both equally are responsible.

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Nowadays managers and team leaders in different organizations are much younger compared to the past. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, there are a lot of young generations become leaders in several industries, while in the past, the managers were almost always seniors. However, this is a negative situation and this essay will discuss the specific reasons for this growth.

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Some people think that children going to single-sex schools are going to have better life prospects than co-educational schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this day and age, the topic of gender in educational has undeniably become a crucial issue for the general public. While some individuals argue that younger generations applying in single-sex schools are going to have better life overlooks. Some maintain that co-educational schools equally play an integral part in youngsters development. This essay will provide thorough examinations about these contrasting perspectives.

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Each year, the crime rate increases.What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal

In today’s fast-paced world,the number of crimes rises every year.The problem should be solved by both the government and the public,since people are forced to suffer from offences.This essay will explain the causes of the issue and show measures that lead to people tackling it.

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Music has been and will continue to be the universal language of mankind. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is an undeniable fact that music is the universal language of mankind, it connects people from different culture and languages. In strongly agree with this statement that music had played significant role in history, and it will also continue to do so in future.

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Some think that parents reading books for entertainment to their children is a waste of time and they should only read them serious educational books. Do you agree or disagree?

These days, people think reading books should be often used for academics, While others argue that it should be used for entertainment purposes too. I completely disagree with the given statement which I will explain in the following essay with relevant examples.

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Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others suggest that the circumstances of a crime, and the reasons for committing it, should be taken into consideration when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both views and give your opinion

People have a variety of opinions when it comes to punishment implementation. Some think that punishments must be standard for all types of crimes while others, believe that governments should take the circumstances into account. This text agrees with the first point of view and will explain the reasons behind this agreement in depth.

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Is it better to run your own business than to work for someone else? To what extent do you agree or disagree? (X)

Nowadays, many people dream of becoming entrepreneurs instead of working for companies or organizations. Some individuals believe that having one’s own business provides more freedom and success, while others think that working for someone else is more stable. This essay will discuss both views and explain why running a business may not always be the better choice.

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