IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 64

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disanvantages of giving children this message?

I would strongly agree that in some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. As we all know that nothing is impossible. Let's deeply understand it how.

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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food,clothes and entertainment)is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes.Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are contrasting views on whether allowing children to make their own choices on daily matters. Some people believe that it will result in a society of self-centered individuals while others consider that which is a essential part during children’s growth process. There is no final correct answer to this argument, and both these views have their own reasons.

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The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to control violent crimes in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this action?

Had been argued, that countries should modify the amount of violence and crimes in any entertainment industry.Onthe other hand, others believe that it should be the citizen's responsibility and that the nation does not have the right to control it. I believe that the country should minimise the amount of aggressive content in televisions and movies.

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Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn news. However, others believe that they can learn news better through other media. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Newspapers used to be the traditional way to spread news, until the advent of social medias, which replaced the newspaper to get oneself updated with news. Some people argue that newspaper should remain the best way to learn the news, others contend that social media is much better. This essay will discuss both sides' opinions before tendering my own.

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In the future, all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

It seems that all cars, buses, and trucks will be driven without the control of individuals and the passengers will be ridden in a vehicle having lack of the driver. The merits and demerits of this are discussed as follows.

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Some people believe that governments should make laws about people’s nutrition and food choice while others argue that it is their choice. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some believe that officials are supposed to make new rules about food choice and people's alimentation, whereas others think that it is up to them. In my view, as we are living in the independent world, humans have to have rights for free choices, because otherwise people are not willing to obey the laws and occur a surge in crime in the future.

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At the present time, the population of some countries include relative large numbers of young adults compared with the number of older people Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? Give the reasons for your answer and include any relative examples from your own knowledge or experiences.

In the contemporary world, the ratio of youngsters is more than the number of elderly people in some parts of the globe. Although, it is very beneficial to the growth of the economy as more talented youth will join the workforce, at the same time there is a small drawback of losing culture and traditional values that are passed on to the younger generation.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

In recent years, growing number of people are curious about the history and past events of the buildings they live. There are various justification for this such as gathering information about the past event which took place on that buildings and peopel who live there in the past. There are several methods for those seeking these data such as inquaring from older neighbors and searching on real states documens.

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An increasing number of people are changing their careers during their working time. What is the cause of this trend and is it a positive or negative development?

In this modern era, many people are deciding to choose career due to plenthora of reasons while severing in other jobs. In this essay, I will elaborate more detail about the beneficial and adverse aspects of this thread before coming to the final conclusion.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Scientifical research has widely influenced various aspect of humans' lives. Recently, it has been a controversial issue whether this research should just concentrate on enhancing human beings' satisfaction. I completely disagree with this statement and the following essay will reveal my supportive reasons.

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Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, many undividuals allocate majority of their time to their work and do not have sufficient free time. Despite long time working could cause some advantages, its drawbacks outweigh. This essay discuss positive and negative points and will provide comprehensive reasons.

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Some of people believe that unpaid community service should be compulsory part of high school programs(for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is an ongoing debate over whether volunteer social work should be mandatory or not. Many individuals believe that these services are able to negatively affect the students as a means of drop in academic performance, while I mostly agree that these actions should be compulsory for various reasons.

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children can learn effectively by watching television. Therefore they shoud be encouraged to watch television regularly at home and at aschool. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Waching Tv as an impretive route for children in order to learn shold be cinsidered, which is admited by some, including me. While the opponent believe that its demerits conquer in many aspect. However, both the profits and the dire consequences are negotiated here.

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The qualities of a person to be successful in a real world cannot be learned from a university or similar academic institution.

The discussion about whether or not the characteristics to be a successful individual can be learned from a university or similar institution is a very controversial one. There are people on both sides of the argument who have very strong feelings.

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Some people think that buildings such as flats and houses should be designed to last a long time. Others believe that it is more important to provide accommodation quickly and cheaply. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowladge or experiance

Some believe that the purpose of building's design like flats and houses ought to last for a long term, while others are of the opinion that accommodation should be supplied rapidly and cheaply. In my view, long dated buildings must be prioritized rather than establishing to sell more and for a reasonable price, because the background will be strong enough to resist again earthquakes or tornados.

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Some people think that children should be raised by all family members like grandparents, uncles and aunts and not just parents. Discuss both side and give your opinion?

As a part of society, we tend to live with our family where we born and brought up by our parents and family members. Some people think that family member can contribute to bring up the children along with their parents. In my opinion, for a children upbringing besides his or her parents the relatives also play a vital role.

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Many people think that the most important things in our life cannot be bought. Do you agree or disagree? Give your answers with examples from your knowledge and experience.

Attaching a price tag to a valuable thing is not widespread practice while it is true that many things in our society is free but we cannot buy the most expensive things like love and happiness. I am totally agree with this statement and explaining all points in upcoming paragraphs.

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Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. The Relationship Between Age and Crime, last year Types of Property Crime in the UK, last year

The two diagrams present data regarding criminal activity in the UK during the past year. Specifically, the line chart demonstrates the frequency of criminal acts

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In some countries, more and more people are hiring a personal fitness trainer, rather than playing sports or doing exercise classes. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or a negative development?

More and more people tend to hire a fitness trainer to help them to get a better shape and create a individual plan of training sessions. This essay answers what are the reasons of such trend and why this could be considered as positive development.

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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. -> topic: traffic, transport Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In some countries, some believe that huge amount of money should be spent on building brand new railway lines for fast trains among cities, while others are of the opinion that current public transport ought to be upgraded. In my view, creating opportunities for fast trains has more potential so as to increase the budget of country in the next decades.

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