IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 74

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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It is generally accepted that exercise is good for children and teenagers. Therefore, physical education and sport should be compulsory for all students in all schools. What do you think?

Exercise is beneficial for everyone, especially young children and adolescents. Therefore, physical fitness and games should be made important subjects in all educational centers. I totally agree with this statement because they enhance students’ intellectual skills and help maintain a healthy life.

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some people think that having a set retirement age of 65 for everybody, regardless ocupation, is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retaired and receive a pension at an earlier age do you agree or disagree

It is thought by some that having a fixed age of retirement at 65 years old for everyone in relationship with their's occupations, it is not fair. They think that some kind of professions should deserve to retire and obtain a pension at sooner stage. I totally agree with this statement and I will argue the reasons in the ensuing paragraphs.

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Some people think that having a set retirement age (e.g. 65 years) for everybody, regardless of occupation, is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age. Do you agree or disagree?

It is thought by some that it is not fair to be allowed to be retired just when turning 65 years old. They believe that some of the employments should be done until an earlier stage of life. This essay completely agree with this statement, I will argue the reasons in the ensuing paragraphs.

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Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree or dis agree?

A lot of millennials believe that government should not spend money on the arts , but it should be used on something more valuable to the society. I partially believe with the statement, government should try to maintain a striking balance while spending public money for the welfare of the society. In this essay, I will shed light on both views and put forth my opinion on the matter.

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Some people think that universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In modern word, most of people argue that male and female are equal. Both gender has same ability and can do everything they want. In entrance of university, it is debatable whether limiting gender portion is necessary or not. Some argue it is needed to make them learn from each gender and others disagree that since students should be evaluated by their own ability.

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In many countries around the world , rural people are moving to cities ,so the population in the country side is decreasing Do you think it is a positive or a negative development

These days many people are migrating from small towns to the metropolitans, resulting in a decrease in population density in the towns. Therefore, many of us opine that this is a negative trend, whereas, other thinks it is a positive trend. However, I found the latter viewpoint more persuasive and reasons to support my stance are elaborated in the following paragraphs.

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Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better for children than watching TV or playing computer games.’ To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Reading is a very good habit that one needs to develop in life. Good books can inform you, and lead you in the right direction.It argue that books increase the creativity and imagination for children than catching a movie on TV or playing electronic games.I believe that stories can help children learn about important values , exercise their creative thinking ,support their cognitive development and improve their language skills. In fact,book play a significant role in children life regarding knowledge , it help them improve their skills and lead to a successful achievements in school . According to a recent study from the American Academy of Pediatrics, reading aloud to your child from birth helps build key language, literacy and social skills.Furthermore Reading requires focus and concentration which can improve attention for children.Moreover reading enhance the vocabulary expansion which supports the child in writting.As well, studies have shown that reading helps reduce stress b...

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Most of the people in older time used to stay in the same place. Now many people keep changing places and move to various places during their life time. What Are the reasons for this? Do u think that it is a positive or a negative development?

It is an wide spread phenomenom moving to diffrent places. There are many reasons for moving for sure, I think people's interest is the main reason among them. For example some people who have interests in caring would move for give better educational envorionments for there child, while someone who likes farming would move to suburban.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

One of the most debated topics today is related to environmental problems.While some people believe that the loss of particular species of plants and animals is the main environmental problem,others argue that there are more significant environmental problems that need to be figured out.In this essay,i will examine both perspectives and explain why i agree with the former.

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Some people think that visiting museums is the best way for children to learn history, while many others think there are several better ways. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Visiting museums are often considered an effective way for children to learn history, while others believe there is better alternatives. Both views have valid points, and it is essential to glance them before giving an opinion.

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【2023.02.04】Some people think they have the right to use as much water as they wan. Others, however, believe that the government should control the use of fresh water as it is a limited resource. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

One of the most controversial issue today relates to Use of water resources.While many individuals consider that people have the unrestricted right to use water as they wish,,some people tend towards the viewpoint that water resource should be controlled by the government due to its limitation.In this essay,I am going to examine both points of view and provide my own opinion.

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Some people think computer and internet are important in children's study , but other think students can learn effectively in school and with teachers . Discuss both sides and give your own opinion

A downright variance of view has been observed among the masses regarding effective tools for studies. A segment of the society contends that having instructive guidance are vitally important for adults for their academic work,opponents meanwhile,adhere to the notion of utilization of internet for the same agenda.The ensuing paragraphs will proffer an insight into both the doctrines and explain that why it is important to considering internet for their academic work acts as foster tool to learn about studies

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In some countries, people who are unemployed receive a weekly payment from the government. Some people think that this payment should be stopped and that people should be made to work for their money. Do you agree or disagree?

These days unepmloyment has increased due to growth in inflation but what is most effective method for dealing with unemployment is by getting weekly stipend by the government. Some people believe that individuals should work to earn living rather than relying on government programmes. I completely agree with statement and in this essay i will support my opinon with examples.

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In the future, no one will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything online with out paying. to what extent do you agree or disagree? with this statment

It is predictable that in the upcoming years, everyone will give preference to read E-books instead of buying printed newspapers or books. I strongly agree with this approach and I believe it will happpen soon.

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Developments in science and technology have caused environmental problems.Some people think that a simpler way of lift will protect environment, while others believe that science and technology can solve environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is argued that, science and technological developments contribute in environmental problems, while some people assume that science can solve these atmospheric issues. The question arises in our mind, what are the issues and how technology has reduce these hurdles? I completely agree with the idea and will support my opinion with examples in this essay.

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Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as novels and poems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Schools are the Mecca for education various subjects and equipping diverse skills. Recently, it has been a topic of discussion whether teaching literature at school is vital for students or not. Opponent believe that there are other important lessons to educate and literature should not be included in school syllabus, however I believe totally opposite and this essay will discuss my reasons for this

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In many countries around the world , rural people are moving to cities ,so the population in the country side is decreasing Do you think it is a positive or a negative development

These days, in numerous nations, an increasing number of people have been moving to cities from countryside so that rural resisdents has decreased. It is thought by some that this trend has negative development. I strongly agree with this argument becasue it leads to a lack of workforce and affects city image.

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Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and five your own

It is true that some people believe boys and girls should be taught in separate schools. while others think that it is beneficial to study them in the same schools.As far as I m concerned, I strongly agree that they should be educated in different schools. In this essay, I will discuss both points of view.

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Many people think that money is important to achieve happiness. What is the importance of money to happiness? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your experience.

In this 21st century, every individual is in the race to make more money than everyone .People think that in achieving happiness money plays a vital role. In this essay, I will discuss the ways how important money is to be happy.

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youger people need to be treated like adults if they commited a crime

Many teenagers commit crimes but get treated differently than adult criminals. Despite that many people think its important to punish the younger generation in the same way as adults, I would argue that it is not fair and logical. Younger people brain functions differently and punishing them in the same way as older people will be a lot damaging for their future careers.

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