IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 67

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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There is a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically. As a result, some people believe that non-academic subjects, such as physical education and cookery, should be removed from the school syllabus so that children can concentrate on academic work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the modern times, there are a lot of burdens on the young generation to succeed in an academic sense. So , some people have an opinion that non-educational subjects such as physical education and cookery should not be included to the syllabus of the schools in order that children can focus on academic work. I completely don't support this idea and i will explain my thoughts on this topic

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Health care should not be provided for free. The health of the person is in his own hands, and they should pay for it themselves. What is your opinion?

Health care, nowadays, is the most concerning issue in the world. The health of the people is their responsibility only, so they ought to cure it for their own money. This essay disagrees with the statement. This essay will first discuss that there are some natural incidents that can not be controlled by humans, and then will show that the severe diseases require a lot of costs for the treatment.

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here is a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically. As a result, some people believe that non-academic subjects, such as physical education and cookery, should be removed from the school syllabus so that children can concentrate on academic work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the modern times, there are a lot of burden on young generation to succeed in an academic sense. So , some people have an opinion that non-educational subjects such as physical education and cookery should not include to syllabus of the schools in order that children can focus on academic work. I complatelly dont support this idea and i will explain my thoughs on this topic

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Some high schools require all students to wear uniforms. Other high schools permit students to decide what to wear to school. Which of these two school politics de you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Wearing of uniforms are a prerequisite to their students for some high schools. On the other hand, there other schools allows student to choose and to wear appropriate clothes in attending their class. In my opinion wearing of prescribe uniform is better than those who doesn't. School uniforms is an important image of a school that they are enrolled. This will also give student a sense of belongingness, pride as well as cost efficient and less hassle for student to think on what to wear every day in going to school.

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It is better to buy just a few expensive clothes, rather than lots of cheaper clothes. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write atleast 250 words.

It has been increasingly common for consumers to purchase a few luxury clothes, rather than a large amount of low-priced ones. This trend may be driven by various factors, and arguments are valid for both sides. From my perspective, it is more beneficial to keep a few expensive clothes.

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With the scale of globalization today, it would be of unquestionable benefit to have a single world currency. To what extend do you agree or disagree.

There is no doubt that the world population is fast growing. Therefore, globalization is rising on day-to-day basics, making the use of common currency worldwide prominent. While i agree that spending of single currency globally could be beneficial , especially in times of regional economical maintenance and could promote equality, i also believe that it could cause a loss in the market, especially for international traders.

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If old people are no longer physically, mentally, or financially able to look after themselves, younger family members should be legally responsible for supporting them. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

As people grow old it gets tough to look after every aspect of life, some might struggle to maintain health and finances, at that time it should be a responsibility for the younger members of the family to look after the elderly. I agree with the statement, it is a moral obligation of the children to take care of their parents in old age.

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most of humans believe the government should need take care of human health but the other believe it is individual . discuse about both view

Different people in the world think it might be the Government's problem to take care of human health. However,it could be difficult to not refer to this concept to them but also is not all about the health programme which the Government provided.On the other hand, people need to keep themselves healthy before they require health treatment.

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Some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their own health. Others believe that the Government should make sure that their citizens are healthy. Discuss both views.

Different people in the world think it might be the Government problem to take care of humans health. However,it could be difficult to not refer this consept to them but also is not all about the heath programme which the Government provided.In other hand, people need to keep themselves healh before they require health treatment.

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It is important for all towns and cities to have large public outdoor places like squares and parks. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Many people believe that entertaining outdoor places and squares are significantly importent to be held in the towns and cities .I totally agreed with the statement since those places will allow the individuals to spend their lisure times outdoor in addition to provide tourism areas for overseas people .

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Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that in today's world subjects like Science and technology are more important than History. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example form your own knowledge or experience.

Nowdays there are people saying that history is the most important subject among the courses. Parents and elder people feel like their kids and the youth of the country should know well about their country's history and they must commemorate it. This is an understandable thing because people of the homeland in the past might have fought hard to protect their land. There are also citizans that claim science and technology are more important.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some students prefer to learn additional subjects besides their main profession, while others argue that it is better to concentrate on their main field of study. Although I acknowledge the advantages of learning extra subjects, I strongly believe that it is better to focus on one main subject.

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Some people think that it is suggested to learn history. While some pople think it has a little knowledge in it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

According to some, history is s topic that should be learned. Others believe that it is not necessary since it contains limited information. I believe that it is a crucial subject that everyone has to know. This essay will explore both notions and give my perspective.

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These days, more and more people are going to other countries for significant periods of time, either to find a job or to study. There are clearly many benefits to doing this, but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties. Discuss tge advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country.

In the contemporary era, a foreign country is the country which is out of India including many countries like Canada, Brazil, USA, China and Japan. In this period, people are going to abroad for doing services and others at Permanent Residency. But, some folks suffer difficulties. In my notion, it is a positive development. In this essay, I will justify my opinion along with some of the reasons.

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Some people believe teenagers should focus on all subjects equally, whereas other people think that they should concentrate on only those subjects that they find interesting and they are best at. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is no denying the fact that must of people think that teenagers have to equally focus on all types of subjects, also there is onther opinion opsis it, other people believe that teenagers must only focus on subjects they have interest at and they are good at. In this essay I will talk about both point of views and my opinion as will.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In todays world, almost every children have smartphones and spend significant amount of time using it. Although there are some beneficial sides of it, the extreme usage of that technology may cause some troubles such as healt issues, mental problems and so on. This essay will discus these asspects, give examples and explanations about the topic

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It’s important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What sort of punishments should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

During we learn what's right and wrong, punishments from our parents are inevitable. In my opinion, it's okay to punish our children in order to direct their way for two reasons. But certainly, we should not punish our kids physically because it could make traumatic memories.

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Some people believe that young people should choose the jobs that they want, but other people think should be more realistic and think more about their future. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Someone debates that, young generation should choose that job which they are interested in, while others think they should be realistic and consider their future. In this essay will be discussed both sides of this concept and explained why choosing that job which they want is more better.

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Nowadays, children watch a lot of TV and play video games. However, some think that these activities are not beneficial for a child’s mental health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent times, due to the technological advancements such as Smart televisions and virtual games children are prone to spend a lot of time on entertainment rather than studies. Some people believe that these activities can pose great threat to child's mental health. Moreover, playing video games and watching television for prolonged period of time can cause detoriation in the cognitive function and predispose to mental illness. I completely agree with the statement and will discuss some of the drawbacks.

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Nowadays people usually retire at the age of 60 or 65, but some want to keep working as long as they can. Is this a positive or a negative development? Give you own opinion and relevant examples.

It appears that todays individuals prefer retire at the age around 60 to 65, but certain of them want to keep working as long as they can is a controversial issue. These are benefit development, where as would be discuss on this essay below.

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