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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people say that what children watch influences their behavior. Others believe the amount of time they spend on television influences their behavior most. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

While it is true that watching TV affects children, it is difficult to determine whether it is the content of the programs or the length of time spent watching them that has a more significant impact on children. It seems to me that although the amount of time does affect youngsters, it is the content of the programs that has a more marked influence on them. On the one hand, the consequences of watching TV for long periods of time can be deleterious. Firstly, the longer children are exposed to TV programs, the more likely it is for them to become addicted to watching television. When children become over-reliant on television for entertainment, they might neglect engagement in outdoor activities. This may result in a sedentary lifestyle that is highly detrimental to their physical health. More importantly, excessive TV watching impairs children’s communication abilities, so they find it hard to play or live in harmony with others. As a result, children would feel discou...

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our times is the loss particular species of plants and animals. Other say that there are more important environmental problems.

Some people say that are significant concerns that affect the climate. From my point of view, I thought that everything is connected which are the destroyed plants and killing animals, thus I think everything around us is equally essential.

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Some people think planning future is a waste of time and people should focus on present .To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

It is beyond doubt that aims for life are extremely essential in this recent period so that individuals can gain success in their life .Along with this certain masses believe that making ideas for future is not significant and they should concentrate on the present. However , future goals are crucial for to be successful .Thus this statement is not accurate with my point of view.

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Some think that climate change reforms will negatively affect business. Others feel they are an opportunity for businesses. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

It is believed that weather changes will have a bad influence on the business by some people. While the rest think that it is a good chance to make money. I think these reforms will affect negatively and both sides of the argument are discussed in the forthcoming paragraphs and my opinion as well.

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Cutting down forests is a real environmental threat; yet, this is still happening at a great rate around the world. Why do you think forests are being destroyed? Are there any benefits from the destruction of forests?

Deforestation, evil to nature, has been continuing for a long time around the globe. However,lately it has accelerated at an alarming rate. This essay will focus on the reasons behind these activities and the devastating consequences of the operation.

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Some think that climate change reforms will negatively affect business. Others feel they are an opportunity for businesses. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Nowadays one of the main problems of humanity is global climate change. Accordingly, many scientists are working on this issue trying to find the beneficial sides and avoid the risks of unpleasant consequences. Thus, many sectors such as business industries are under damage in the meantime are expecting to get high profits. This essay will discuss both given views and give my thoughts below as well.

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Should criminals be punished with less jail terms or re-educated and rehabilitated using community service programs, before being re-introduced to the society.

No one is born as a criminal but circumstances and situation often make them culprit. Some segments of society reckon that offenders should be punished with a long-term jail; however, counterparts of society insist that they should get chance to learn skills through some rehabilitation programs. Although there are arguments on both sides, due to my own beliefs I agree that they should be trained rather than punishing them with lengthy jail. These beliefs will be discussed in support of my personal stance in the following paragraphs.

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In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In our new age of independence, a notion is spreading widely among the young society to have a one-year break between secondary school and university, for the purpose of either having leisure time or gaining experience. I assume that there are more disadvantages than its advantages.

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Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it. Others think that school time should be used in learning important subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is a constant debate on whether students should learn about the science of food or spend time on important subjuects at schools. In my opinion, I think it is essential that students are educated about the science of food at schools.

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Some people believe that teenager should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can be benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Community service is a great deed and some people think that no wage community work if done by adolscents in their spare time can be fruitful for not only community but themselves too. However, I do not fully agree with the above statement and this essay will discuss the reasons below.

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Some people think that dangerous extreme sports such as rock climbing and sky-diving should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

Over the last two or three decades, sports has been rising tremendously among the humankind, therefore, they like to participate in all kinds of sports even peril games too. However, some believe that dangerous sports should be prohibited, such as rock climbing and sky-diving. I strongly disagree with this statement and this game should not forbid, this essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.

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Some people think that it is the responsibility of governments to take care of the environment, while others believe that it is the responsibility of the citizens. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is a huge debate about who should be responsible of the environmental aspect in a country. This discussion has evolved into two different groups that the first believes that the government should be the one who take cares of the plant, while other believes that it is the individuals’s responsibility. This essay will examine both sides of this argument in will following paragraphs I agree with the former.

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Some people believe the purpose of education should be helping the individual to become useful for society, while others believe it should help individuals to achieve their ambitions. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

One of the main reasons why education of people plays a very important role in society is that it will give them an opportunity to help other people. For example, educating people who want to be teachers is very useful as, once they graduate, they will teach other students and help them to have more knowledge. It will result in more people receiving education and that is very important. Doctors are another example. Their education is considered as very useful because they will be able to cure ill people and save many lives. If society does not invest in educating those professionals it can have a huge negative impact on the well-being of its people.

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Should animals be kept in Zoos or are they better living in natural habitat? Discuss and give your opinion?

In this contemporary era,animals play a sine qua non-role in maintaining the ecosystem.Therefore,some intellectuals perceive that wild animals ought to be protected in zoos while others however refute the claim that,they should be lived in a natural environment.I partially agree with the given statement and my inclination has been elucidated in the further paragraphs of this essay.

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Some people think that children can learn about history by visiting museums, while others feel that there are better ways to learn about history. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that nothing is as good mean as visiting museums in acquiring historical familiarity while others feel that there should be a wiser way to do so. Is going to museums really the best way and if not, what can be the alternative one? Seemingly, browsing historical stuff is plausible to learn pertaining things effectively; however, not until children have enough historical background to grasp it that intellectual stimulation could emerge. In light of this belief, I am thus of the opinion that first and foremost, they ought to read up on historical books in preparation for the immersion.

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Some people think that children can learn about history by visiting museums, while others feel that there are better ways to learn about history. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that nothing is as good mean as visiting museums in acquiring historical knowledge while others feel that there should be wiser way to do so. Is going to museums really the best way and if not, what can be the alternative one? Seemingly, browsing historical stuff is plausible to learn pertaining things effectively; however, not until children have enough historical background to grasp it that intellectual stimulation could be emerged. In light of this belief, I am thus of the opinion that first and foremost, they ought to read up on historical books in preparation for the immersion.

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To meet the growing needs of food for the increasing population, country should make use of edible insects as foods. However, some people believe that insects are not only unhealthy but affect negatively the nature too. What are the benefits and drawbacks of eating insects?

As the population of the world continues to rise, the demand of the food grows within it. Some people believe that the government should make insects as a food, while others argue with that for several reasons.

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The relatively recent development of games on phones, computers, and TV consoles is extremely popular with people all over the world. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such electronic games?

Whole crowd most using electronic stuff in present date because day by day development up a high level and every parson try to do essay job but now life individuals most spend free future in phones and watching Tv like one they are playing games it is a big effect on health. In my ,opinion i consider that disadvantages of this way community lose the helth and advantages of this public spend a short moment on games.

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You recently on a photography competition and your photo is going to be shown in an exhibition. Invite your friend for the exhibition. Please describe Competition and prize About the photograph Invite your friend.

I hope you are healthy and safe. Today I am writing this letter to inform you that, as you know at present I won a photography competition and my photo is going to be displayed in on exhibition and I want your presence there.

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Many parents today organise extra classes for their children after school and at the weekends. Do you feel that this a worthwhile thing to do or do you feel children have enough education at school?

Most of the parents send their children to extra classes and tuitions which are mostly available after school or during weekends. In my opinion, children do not have enough education in school, extra lessons are compulsory to provide better them better understanding in each subject and allow notes exchange between students.

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