IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 797

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Nowadays there are more opportunities for women than there were in the past. Some people think this situation has caused more problems than it has solved. What are your opinions on this?

It is said that in the modern ,era there are a lot of accessibilities for women than it used to be in the past. The majority of people claim that freedom for females leads to incidents. From my point of view, freedom is the main stage of a person’s life, and that’s why both genders should have equal authority.

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Advertisements are becoming more and more common in our everyday life. Is it a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, advertising become a part of our life. Some people believe that advertising creates a significant impact on people’s purchase decisions. While other people believe the bombardment of advertising creates it less attractive and people no longer pay attention to it.

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Public libraries should only provide books and should not waste their limited resources on expensive high-tech media such as software, videos or DVDs. Do you agree or disagree?

Public libraries are a source of free knowledge for those who visit - the resources can be in the form of books, or they can be in the form of different media, which is why I disagree with the statement.

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Some people think that having a set retirement age (e.g. 65 years) for everybody, regardless of occupation, is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age. Do you agree or disagree? Which types of workers do you think should benefit from early retirement?

In most parts of the world, there is a fixed age to get retire, mid 60's for instance. Most people deny this and believe that certain jobs require an early retirement. I completely agree with this notion and will explain why and which type of workers need early time off in this essay further.

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Many people use written language in a less formal way and in a relaxed way than in the past. Why is this the case? Does this development have more advantages or disadvantages?

Many individuals use more informal and conversational language to write in this day and age. There are several reasons for this phenomenon and this trend brings more demerits than merits for users.

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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year . Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevemt.

The provided maps depict information about the developments which are planned to take place next year.

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In most countries, young people form a large proportion of those who are unemployed. Why this is the case, and what can be done to solve the problem?

Consideraby, unemployment for young people has become a main concern in many countries. Although this phenomenon is believed to have certain causative factors, effective policies can be adopted to remedy this situation.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to will all shops in towns and cities closing.

In recent years trend of shopping has increased .Reasons is that now a day’s technology more gathering with human’s life. With these environments peoples so busy with work life. Many believe in this situation one day lead online shopping shop will closed. So, I part lily agree with above statement. I would like to explain my point of view and give with some relevant examples further paragraphs.

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What are the advantages and disadvantages of leaving your country to or study abroad?

Nowadays many youngsters are trying to move to another country in order to study overseas or to find other chances. There are some advantages and disadvantages regarding this issue which I will describe below.

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Some organizations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance.

In today's world, employee appearance is debated. The importance of smart dressing is emphasized in some companies, while the importance of quality work is emphasized in others. Throughout this essay, I will discuss both perspectives.

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Students perform better in school when they are rewarded rather than punshied. To what extent do you agree, disuss both views and give your opinion.

Education plays a significant role in the early childhood growth. It is believed that, there are some children who score better in their academics when they have exposed to special gifts on scoring much better, instead of penalizing them. I totally agree that rewards will definitely benefit the students to perform better. In the looming paragraphs, I will discuss each aspect in detail.

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Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead.

It has been increasing the number of crime all over the world by years. Therefore some view that nothing can be done to prevent it. Personlly, I disagree with this by several factors.

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Behavior in schools is getting worse. Explain the causes of this problem and suggest some possible solutions. Bad behavior- social media influence, lack of proper guidance from family and peers Solution- parental control, sessions and moral values development course at schools

The classroom fifty years ago was a very different place than what it has become today. With the growth in literacy rate, the increase in bad behavior displayed by students in schools has also increased and therefore, is a major concern worldwide. In this essay, I will outline the main causes of this issue and possible strategies to deal with misbehaved youngsters.

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Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industries to move to regional areas outside large urban centres. Do you think the advantage outweigh the disadvantages?

Large companies and industries play a vital role in the growth of the economic condition of a country. It has been argued that multinational groups and big factories should be relocated to rural sites in the nation. I believe that the benefits of this notion are less than the drawbacks. This essay will elaborate on the negative side of this notion and also provide one advantage of this essay.

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Many blieve that living in a city offers greater benefits compared to life the countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The debate between living in a city versus the countryside has been a topic of discussion for many years. While some argue that city life offers greater benefits, others believe that life in the countryside is more advantageous. This essay will discuss both perspectives and provide my opinion on the matter.

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nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of thechnology. in what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? has this become a positive or negative development?

It certainly true that technology altered the methods of individuals to communicate. In my opinion, technology make our globally and convenient, and I believe this a negative trend.

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When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

When deciding a job, salary is the first thing to consider. Personally, I agree with this statement but in my opinion other factors such as working environment and job satisfaction should be taken the same consideration as well, when making a job desicions.

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Organized tour to remote areas and community is increasingly popular. Is it a positive or negative development for the local people and the environment?

There are those who think that there has been a gradual increase in the popularity of the tour that people can go to isolated locales. In my opinion, this advancement would generate some adverse impacts on the local societies and their circumstances, and the reason will be elaborated in the enlisted paragraphs.

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Some people think the government should pay for health care and education, but others believe it is not the government's responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, With the development of society, people’s life pressure is increasing. So, government whether it needs pay for person’s medical treatment and education is a controversial issue. In my opinion, I think the government should provide some welfare and help to everyone, but at the same time, there will also be some troubles after doing.

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In some parts of the world traditional festivals and celebrations have disappeared or are disappearing. What problems is this causing? What measures could be taken to counter this situation?

It is an undeniable fact of modern life that traditional carnivals and holidays are gradually vanishing in diverse parts of world. While I accept that there will be some negative consequences of this trend, societies can take some steps to mitigate these potential problems.

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