IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 797

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relativity large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, the number of population in some countries is significantly fewer older people than young adults. In this essay, I will discuss both pros and cons, and provide some examples according to the given statement.

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the perventage of australian men and women doing regular physical activity:2010

The bar chart provided reveals the proportion of males and females who participated in physical activities regularly in terms of six age groups in Australia in 2010.

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In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

Nowadays, people are more inclined towards a sedentary lifestyle and ignore their well-being in terms of health. Thus, lifestyle of people is getting worst day by day as a result more and more people are getting affected by obesity and other ailments.

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In many cities more people are living alone. Why is this the case? Is it a positive or negative development?

In recent years a general trend has been witnessed in several cities, many people are taking the choice to live alone probably in need of escaping metropolitan chaos and being just alone. Are we looking at a socially negative trend that may have an impact on people within urban communities? Consequences could be worrisome and issues like mental and physical health are at stake.

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It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

A recent trend among young diplomates has been on the rise, many of them take the decision of undergoing a gap year before starting to study again. Such choice comes with a legion of different benefits and downsides. Personal growth aspect related on the former, lost of time and the risk of never going back to study that are on top for the latter one. Is there a right decision?

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In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount that people can earn.Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Around the world, regardless the political, economic or social system in place, someone will always be able to find income gaps between different population bands. Many have a strong belief in supporting the chance of pooling huge wealth claiming it as an enhancer for the overall state economy. On the contrary, some others would put an end on this kind of disparities, in favour of wealth redistribution. Personally, I found myself half way between the two stances.

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Unemployment is one of the biggest problems of contemporary society. What do you think are the main causes of unemployment? What solutions can you suggest?

Many countries’ one of the main issue is unemployment. This issue is caused by many factors such as migration to improved cities, low salaries and redundant graduates for certain possessions. I think, status of the case can be fixed with some regulations by government policies.

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Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that in many cities around the world there are constant traffic jams. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from owning cars?

The rates of traffic congestions in cities have lifted since last thirty years due to increasing of car numbers per individual. I mostly agree with this statement because private vehicles cause to jamming in traffic, particularly at junctions. Governments may claim additional taxes and they may improve public transportation webs in order to ratify this situation.

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Some people think young people should follow the traditions of their society. Others think that they should be free to behave as individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is a common discussion among folks that community norms should be followed by youths, whilst others say that they should act whatever they like. In this essay, I will scrutinize both sides’ views along with some examples and will suggest my own perceptions on this matter.

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Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam'. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

In the last years, traffic congestion increased really fast within big towns due to the rise of car's popularity. I believe that this statement is true and this essay will give evidence of my belief and will also propose some ideas to cope with this issue.

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Paying all workers the same salary in a company promotes harmony and repect among colleagues To what extent do you agree or disagree?

We consider the issue which concerns education in the university. There are a lot of countries where students don’t prefer to choose science subjects. How can this situation influence society?

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Even though doctors advise old people to get more exercise, many old people do not get enough.What are the reasons for this? What are some possible solutions for this?

It is an unfortunate reality that elder elderlypeople are not doing required physical workouts even if( though) doctors recommended them. ( Although there are manifold factors that have shaped this scenario,) It is possible to alleviate this problem by adopting effective measures

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Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of high school students having part-time jobs. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples.

In this concurrent era, work is a necessity of life. There is a discussion going on, that many pupil like to do temperory work along with their studies. I will discuss both merits and demerits of this notion in forthcoming paragraphs.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise their products are new in some way

The new product is an important advertisement for companies recently. In my point of view, it is a drawback perspective to develop their business because creating a new product needs more budget and time for producing and advertising.

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Some experts believe it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

The certain number of experts disagree with starting to learn an exterior language only at secondary school , they claim that it would be better if they begin it at grade school. In this essay, I will pay attention to both advantages and disadvantages of this statement, and compare them to find out which of them outweighs another one.

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some people say history is one of the most important school subject. Other people think in todays world subject like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion?

There some people who consider history as the major lesson to learn in school , while others give priority to science and technology . Although this essay will discuss bothe of these ideas , I am on the view that these two subjects are equally important in class rooms.

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A rise in the standard of living in a country often only seems to benefit cities rather than rural areas. What problems might this difference cause ? How might these problems to be reduced?

There has been a concern that a rise in the living standard in a nation is often good for cities instead of rural districts. Personally, lack of education resources in countryside and unbalanced incomes between both areas are the most serious problems, while increasing benefits and setting up occupation areas are two solutions to solve this development.

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More and more families are choosing fast food over home-cooked meals. What are the reasons for this and how can they be addressed?

Admittedlly, food is a necessity of life. There is a discussion going on, that number of families like to eat junk food more than homemade meals. The causes associated with aformentioned notion along with remedies will be enlightened below.

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Some people think that children of busy parents should be sent to day-care centres, while others believe that they should be cared for by their grandparents.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are two different views on who should take care of children whose parents are busy, one is that they should be looked after by day-care centres and the other is that they should be looked after by grandparents. In my opinion, I think it is best for the children's grandparents to care.On the one hand, some people say that these children should be taken care of by their grandparents. Firstly, the children will be able to bond with their grandparents, as they will have more time to spend with them, and the grandparents will be able to share their life stories with the children, so that they can get to know them better. Secondly, the children will be cared for more carefully because the grandparents will have more time and energy to spend on the children and the children will be cared for like a parent.

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Today, people's life expectancy is much higher than before. some believe that older people should continue to work. what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is irrefutable that average lifespan of human beings has increased with the advancement in It is irrefutable that average lifespan of human beings has increased with the advancement in medicine, leading to new discoveries and treatments, every day. I agree with the given statement that the elderly people should continue to work till a later age. I shall support my point of view in the upcoming paragraphs.

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