IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 91

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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An increasing number of children are overweight which could result many problems when they grow older both in terms of their health and healtg care costs. Why do you think so many children are overweight? What could be done to solve this problem?

Recently, many children are overweight, which leads to their health problems. Outweigh in children is most often associate with several factors such as poor diet, a sedentary lifestyle and psychological factors. This essay will examine the reasons and solutions

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some people believe that alone children to make their own choices on everyday matters such as food clothes and entertainment is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes .other people believe that it is important for children to make decision about matters that are affect them.

Nowadays, an increasing number of people think when children make their own choices, they will achieve confidence and be independent in the future and many other advantages. While other believe if children are giventhe choice of everyday matters, it will result in a selfish generation. I personally think given kids the choice for their daily matters it's so important to build their character but it should done wisely with some limitations and rules.

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The money spend by the governments on space programmes would be better pent on public services such as schools and hospitals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no denying the fact that governments spend alot of amounts money on large projects like space programmes. While it is a commonly held belief that it benfits the saince to help us to discover our plants, there is also an argument that it is more usefull spend money in humans needs like school and hospitals. This eassy will analyes this topic from both points of view and express my opinion.

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Some people believe that allowing their children to make their own choises on every day matter (such as food,clothes and entertainment ) is likely to result in a society of indevisualse who only think about their own wishes .other people belive that it important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, increasing number of people think when children make their own choices, they will achive confidence and being independent in the future and many other advantages. While other believe if children given the choice of everyday matter, that will result in a selfish generation. I personally think given kids the choice for their daily matters it's so important to build their character but it should done wisely with some limitations and rules.

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Some people asert that it is good for college students to have part-time jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people insist that it is beneficial for college students have part-time jobs. I totally agree with this idea for several reasons like working experience and acknowledging the value of money.

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In recent years virtual tourism including virtual reality tours, 360 videos has emerged as an alternative form of travelling reshaping the way people explore destinations and connect with cultural heritage from after. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, tourism has begun to improve. Museums and other common visited places started virtual tourism including virtual reality tours. Travelers can just sit in one place and see 360 virtual videos. This essay will look into advantages of virtual travelling and answer given question.

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Some countries have implemented mandatory community service programs for young people. In these programs, children aged 16 to 18 do charity work, help old people or work with animals. What are some advantages and disadvantages of this for young people?

In some regions, it is compulsory for youths to work on community service projects for a period of time. This essay will discuss both benefits and drawbacks and argue that there are more advantages to having this program.

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1)Studies have shown that in many countries the income gap between the rich and poor is ever increasing. •What problems can arise from this situation and what could be done to address this situation?

According to research, there is an increasing trend of income gap on numerous countries between the rich and the poor. This essay will state the possible problems that may develop on financial margins and the possible remedy on the situation.

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Some people think competitive sports have a good impact on the individual and society. Others think it has negative impact. Discuss both views and give your opiniion

In my opinion, yes, competitive sports have a positive impact on ondividuals, I have no doubt. I can not say what impact it has on the society I do not think, that there is some bad impact, but anyway I wil try to explain my opinion and discuss both views.

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Some people believe that to reduce the amount of time people spend commuting (travelling to work), parks and gardens close to city centres should be replaced by apartment buildings for commuters to live in. However, others disagree with this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Parks and gardens are ending up and this is the contentious issue .Although a lot of people argue that parks and gardens ought to be turned into residential building,but i firmly disagree with this statement.In the Impending paragraphs, i will elucidate why the walkways are essential why they should not be eliminated .

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More and more people decide to eat healthy food and exercise regularly. What are the reasons for this trend? What can be done to encourage more people to eat healthier and exercise?

Now a days, unhealthy food and ailments associated with it has become the contentious issue.Recently,people are aware of this pressing issue and are taking measures negate the impacts of unhealthy food.In the impending paragraphs ,I am going to elucidate the causes that compel the people to opt healthy food and excercise daily.

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Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

These days, every where you turn on the TV or flick through the pages of a news paper, you see news about international students and their sufferings. The question arised in our mind, whatmakes them suffer there? Many people give different reason about the students who are dealing with anxiety and time managment issue. I completely agree with the statment and will present my solutions, that I believe is best for them.

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Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

These days, everywhere you turn on the TV or flick through the pages of a newspaper, you see news about the importance of individual's participation in the society. The question arises in our mind, how can one become a better member in the colony? Many people think that parents can guide their children in this regard. Whereas the others assume that they should be taught about it in the schools. I completely agree with the ideas and will support my opinion in this essay with examples.

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Some people think that media have the right to publish details of people's private lives, while others think it should be controlled. Discuss both views.

In this technology era, in every corner of the world people will find paparazzi for getting exclusive news. Few masses says that reporters can publish all the privates lives of people to everyone one, Whereas others says that there should be a control on revealing life of people to others. In this essay, I will discuss the both points.

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Many people see animals as tools to be used by humans to better their lives. They believe animals should help feed us and keep us healthy by being subjects to experiments that will lead to new medications and medical processes. Others believe that animals should have the same rights to a good life as humans. Discuss both views and state your own.

A lot of individuals have their own perspective about animals as devices to be used by people to improve their live. Some argue that animals need to feed human and keep them healthy through experiments which become the subjects to research new medication and medical processes. While some individuals in the opinion that animals supposed to have the same equal to a better life as person. This essay will discuss two statements from my perspective

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In some countries, girls and boys are educated in different schools rather than in the same school. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

It is often argued that, Most of the countries prefer co-education while in many countries boys and girls are skilled in distinct schools.In this essay, I will discuss both merits and demerits of education in different schools.

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The rise of social media has affected personal relationships and society as a whole. do the advantages of using social media for communication outweigh the disadvantages?(KN)

In this modern world, it is without a doubt that the usage of social media has increased exponentially. Relationships and community are indeed affected by social media. While some think that social media can be harmful, I strongly believe that the usage of social media have more advantages than disadvantages. Not only it serves as a form of communication, but also an incredible platform to gain knowledge.

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Some people believe that university students should be required to attend classes. Others believe that going to classes should be optional for students. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is argued that attending classes at university should be an option or requirement for university students. Some people believe that attending university classes is a must whereas others do not agree with the nation. In my opinion,I believe that itis acontroversial topic and this essay will discuss both sides views in detail with potential reasons.

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There is no doubt that globalisation has benefited the world by bringing together people, business and nations. People who criticise it stand in the way of progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Globalisation has bring so many advantages to the planet by connecting people, economics and nations across the globe. However, some people see this as a negative approach, which disturbs this process. I strongly agree that globalisation has provided more interaction to the people worldwide, as well as making business more successful and bring peace to countries.

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Some people believe that the only purpose for anyone to learn a second language is to travel or work abroad. Others argue that this is not the only purpose why someone needs to learn a second language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinions.

Some argue that the only reason for anybody to learn new language is to travel for another country to work or study, while others claim that there is another purpose to learn a second language.However, in this essay, I will discuss both perspectives and provide my own opinion.

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