IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 89

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people believe that employment over the age of 60 is not right and creates lots of problems. So people should retire after 60 and not work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that working after the age of 60 is wrong and causes many issues. They believe that people should stop working after this age. I disagree with this idea because older people can still contribute to society, and working helps them stay active and healthy.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Language is the most basic and important component of a country.Therefore, when a person move to a country which he/she have to speak a foreign language this can cause some dificulties. However, some people are against this notion and they believe speaking a foreign language will not make problems. In this essay, I will analyse both views and present my own opinion.

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Government should regulate the level of violence in films in the television and in cinema. Some think they should not be regulated. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Concerns were expressed about the amount of violence shown in both the television and in cinema, meanwhile some others think that it doesn't matter if it is included in movies, shows, or even documentaries. This essay will explain each opinion with examples for better understanding as well.

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Some people say that there is too much harmful content on the internet. They say the only way to make the internet safe is for the government to censor the content of websites. To what extent do you think the government should control what information is available on the internet? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

With the advancement of technology, lately numerours harmful content has been spread on the internet. Not a few people argue that the only solution to handle this issue is for the government to control by censoring the content of websites. I concur with the opinion since the government have the authority to control the content that spread among the citizen on the internet.

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The first impression you have of a person is the best way to judge a person. Do you agree?

People find out the best way of Judging is by their initial impression. I agree with this mindset

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In spite of improvement in the healthcare by governments many people in developed countries are suffering from overweight and obesity. What are the causes of this and what other the impacts

One of the most significant concern nowadays is obesity . The government spends a lot of time on ensuring well-being and a good quality of life. This essay will elucidate the reasons and consequnces.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Some people argue that punishment is necessary to help them understand this distinction. However, I completely disagree with the notion that punishment is the best way to achieve this. While parents and teachers can use certain disciplinary measures, there are more effective and constructive approaches to teaching good behavior.

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It is important for everyone, including young people, to save money for their future. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, everyone needs to save money for their future life, especially young people have to do this. Personally, I totally agree with this statement for some reasons mentioned in this essay.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is argued that the enhancement of the quality of people's lives can be targeted as a crucial subject by sciences and researchers.While, humans can become lazy and absent-minded, some people would suggest . However, I strongly agree with the subject of improving our lives on some bases by depending on science since we should modify our health and well-being.

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Nowadays, many people choose to be self-employed, rather than work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed

Today, more individuals tend to work for themselves, instead of having a boss or mentor. It seems to be because of independent work without controlling by others and pursuing a passion. However, the irregular salary and lack of company benefits, such as health insurance and pensions, are the main drawbacks of this statement.

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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

Many individuals state that insufficient amount of garbage from houses were being reused. For that reason, they also said that the government should create rules and regulations to rise the amount of salvaging. In this essay, I will examine both point of view and will provide my thoughts.

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A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets plenty of exercise, and avoids stress. What should people do to stay healthy in your country?

To start with, there are different ways to stay healthy during the life and people are trying to follow any of them. Usually, we get used to one or two techniques that we continue doing.

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In some countries, government are encouraging industries and businesses to move to regional areas outside the big cities Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Government authorities are nowadays motivating many industries and businesses to expand themselves to other regional areas rather than confining to only big cities. This movement from big cities to other small towns has both merits are demerits which will be discussed in the essay below.

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37.Young people who commit crimes should be treated in the same way as adults by authorities. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Write an essay with no less than 250 words.

It has been argued by some that authorities must punish the young criminals in the same manner as the adults. I strongly support this viewpoint because mild punishments may lead to higher chances of repeating the crime. Apart from this, less stricter treatments might reduce the seriousness of the offences in the minds of the young people. This essay will further elaborate on this topic.

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Some people think that economic progress is the only way to measure a country’s success, while others think that there are other factors which can be used to measure a country’s success. What are those factors? Which, of all factors, do you think are most important?

There are some arguments about the country's success. Some believe economic development is the only factor that shows success while opponents think other factors are also important. This essay will discuss all the factors which contribute to a country's accomplishment and some of the important factors from my point of view.

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In many professional sports, there is an increase in the numbers of athletes using banned substances to improve their performance. What are the causes of the phenomenon and what are some of the possible solutions.

Nowadays, there are many athletes play significant roles in world-class competitions. While some people argue that there are growing rates for those athletes who take drugs in order to win at any cost. Although there will undoubtedly be some negative consequences of this trend, societies can take steps to mitigate these potential issues.

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Some people think that men and women have different qualities. Therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some job are suitable for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people think that men and women have different qualities and duties. This paragraph will determine what jobs are suitable for men and women. Furthermore, a lot of people have an idea that male and female are equal in so many things in life . In the other hand , many think that men and women have their own qualities , and they are good at it .

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‏Some people think that one of the best ways to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuels for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Transportation has become an indispensable part of people's lives. In recent years there has been a frequently discussed issue of whether increasing the cost of oil for buses and cars can contribute to save an environmental problem, or whether it poses risks. I firmly agree that increasing fuel prices contributes

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In spite of improvement in the healthcare by governments many people in developed countries are suffering from overweight and obesity. What are the causes of this and what other the impacts

The increase in obesity rate, particularly in developed countries has become vital topic of debates. Although the healthcare services in rich countries have increased dramatically, the obesity rate has risen excessively, too. While there are important factors toward this issue, harmful impacts should be considered, which will be discussed.

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Some people say that the best way to reduce crime rate is to increase the number of police on the streets. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no denying the fact that some people think increasing the number of force on roads reduces case rate. While it is a commonly held belief that this idea is the best to decline the crime rate, there is also an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, I consider that increasing the figure of law enforcement on the streets may shrink the atrocity amount.

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