IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 88

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people are of the opinion that children should be awarded for good behavior: others think they should be punished for bad behavior discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people opine that children should get award for generous behaviour. However, others believe that children should get punishment for bad behaviour. I personally believe that while punishing children helps them to remember their mistakes, children should be awarded for good behaviour because it encourages them to behave better in the future.

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Animals are always better off the wild. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that in most of the cases animals living greater off the wild rather than in the wild. While zoos and sanctuarys provide the safe place, consistent food and first aid if needed, many argues that there are more benefits of animals living in wild.This essay totally disagrees with that statement. I, personally, believe that animals degrade in zoos and keeping them in zoos destroying whole ecosystem.

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News stories on TV and the newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures so we will see Landis pictures are more effective than words. What’s your opinion about it?

In this contemporary era, the ways of presenting News are changing day by day. Nowadays, in every News whether on the television or newspapaers editors prefer to add photos in the stories. The main reason behind added images is that attracting viewers; therefore news editors contend images speak more than words. According to my prespective words and images have its own values.

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Childood obesity is an increasing problem in Australia as many as two thirds of children are now obese. Schools have a responsilbility to monitor what their students eat and the amount of exercise they do. To what extend do you agree to this statement?

In Australia one of the emerging problem is childhood obesity, where almost more than 67% infants are now overweight. I certainly agree with the many people, where they think that educational institutions have a duty to regulate their eating habits as well as their timing spent on physical education.

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The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend. Do you agree or disagree?

A normal weekend involves two days in almost all countries. In the past, it was only one day and governments decided to make it two, gradually. However, some argue that even this amount should be higher. In this essay, I will outline both views' possible good or adverse effects.

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Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion

These days it is easily apparent that technology is facing some developments and it is becoming widely in use in many activities such as shopping, advertising and communicating. This process has changed many lives and it has made it easier for some people, whereas some people disagree with this thesis. This essay is going to discuss both positive and negative views.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

In few countries, the majority of individuals are interested in finding out the past of their house and building they are living in. The main for this, as the method of constructions had been changed in last few years, people finds it interested, how their house or building was build few year back.

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What are the differences between working for others and running your own business?

there is always an argument about whether we should work for others or ourseleves, to become the man of our lives. This essay explores different cases to show which one might be a choice based on different personalities.

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Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and intrests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this infomation may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that giving individual details like their marital and hobies statues about themself to the companies that they apply for a job is not necessary while the others think they may make a sense. This essay will discuss both sides although I believe it is not safe to gie tehese information on the applyin process.

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Some people think that the Olympic Games is an exciting event and can bring nations together. Others, however, think that it is a waste of money. Discuss both these views and give your own opinio

Some people believe that Olympic Games which excite most people has a significant importance to get people together while the others think it is an unnecessary organization where money is wasted.

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Nowdays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure . Some belive this travel has a negative impact on the countries travelled to . To what extent do you agree or disagree

The graph illustrates the daily consumption of three spreads per person in a country from 1981 to 2007, measured in grams.

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Some people prefer to use E-books while others prefer to use regular books what do you prefer?and what are the pros and cons for each ?

In the beginning, the books were always one of the oldest and most important instruments that helped people to learn and achieved a great progress throughout the education,and in last recent decades the E-books appeared and it is an electric books that are available to purchase on the internet or on the electric devices and,there are a lot of arguments about which is better the E-books or regular books,so we going to discuss the pros and cons of each

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In many countries, children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In this contemporary world, more and more children incline to employ in rewarding jobs, for supporting their well-beings'. Some people argue with this statement, as in in their ages they should study rather than work, while others insist that it is work experience that can be useful in the future live . In this essay, I am going to discuss both views, before getting my own opinion.

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A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.

In the era of globalization and industrial development expanding factories is one of the expected responses of companies. I personally believe that this issue can have many advantages and disadvantages, in other words, this is two sides of a penny but in my personal perspective, the disadvantagesadvantages of this issue outweigh the advantages due to the reasons which will be discussed in the following paragraphs.

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Some people want governments to spend money looking for life on other planets. Others, however, think this is a waste of public money when there are so many problems on earth.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

While it is widely debated that whether the government should continue their extra-territerial search on other planets or not, others argue that they should rather emphasis on resolve issues on Earth first as that plan might be such a waste of money. Both aspects and personal view toward the latter statement in term of will be discussed further in this essay.

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Some people believe that using a bicycle as main from of transportation has a lot of advantages, whereas others think that it has many disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people think that using a bicycle as a primary mode of transportation has a lot of benefits, while others believe that it has a lot of drawbacks. I personally believe that while bicycle is an environment-friendly vehicle, it is not a suitable transport option to travel everywhere.

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Some people think that newspapers are the best way to get news. However, others people believe that they can get better through another media platform. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A group of individuals consider that the better method to gain news by prient paper like newspapers, while others think that the best way to get news by social media. I will explain both views including my opinion in the upcoming paragraph.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is believed that passengers will travel inside vehicles including cars, buses and trucks without any drivers. This essay will argue that the advantages of this outweigh the drawbacks. The essay will first demostrate that the level of punctuality will rise whereas we would not be worried about air pollution caused by automobiles, followed by an analysis of how the primary disadvantage, possible job loss, is not valid.

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In the past people liked to store knowledge in books. However, in the present, we prefer to store knowledge on the internet. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

The number of people using the network for searching information is increased day by day. Although, there are some negative effects of using the internet instead of the books to find information, I believe it has more possitive effects than the negative ones.

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Governments should focus their spending on public services rather than on the arts (eg. Music and painting). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Arts and Public survices are significant factor for developing nations. According to me, goverments need to prioritize on public survices like health system and Education and infrastructure factors but arts can be important as well.

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