IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 917

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is believed by some that it is completely justified while others consider it unfair. In my opinion, every profession is equally important and professionals should be given equal salaries according to their contributions.

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The media pay too much attention to the lives and relationships of celebrities such as actors, singers or footballers. They should spend more time reporting the lives of ordinary people instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, the lives and relationships of celebrities such as actors, singers or footballers get more media attention than the lives of ordinary people. However, with personal opinion, I totally ague that this should be fair between famous people and normal persons.

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Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep?

These days, the majority of people are facing with unable to get enough rest on their daily basis.I believe that there are various reasons causing these issues. Such as stressful and physical illness,whereas there are possible solutions to solve the problems,which could be done by practice meditation and taking holiday.

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Some people say music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

There are many concerned individuals who feel that, crowd from various cultures and generations can be brought together through music. Others, however, feel that it can not be a proper way of connecting our society. I completely agree with the former statement and in this essay, I will support my view with examples.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today’s world.

In this technological era, widespread usage of internet has mostly positive impact on life of people. I completely agree with this notion and relevant reasons will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.

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tourism bringing environmental problems, what are the causes and suggest some solutions

Nowadays, travelling has become favourite past time of people as in free time they love travel to distinct places. But, tourism is a bag full of advantages and disadvantages as it sometimes causes environmental degradation. I n the upcoming paragraphs, it is discussed that how tourism effect nature and what is solution to this problem.

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The children have unsupervised access to Internet and socialize with others that can lead to dangerous consequences

The parents are being criticized for giving children unsupervised access of Internet to interact with others, surf bad websites, use social media and to play games. In this essay, I will shed the light on disadvantages of the unsupervised access of Internet and how we can tackle this issue.

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Some people spend a lot of money attending cultural or sports events. Is it a good or a bad thing? Give your opinion and examples from your own experience.

On festive days or on some cultural days few individuals like to spend alot of money on events. This essay will intend to look at the view that is it agreeable or disagreeable according to my opinion one should not spend on a huge amount on festive events or on sports event.

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In some countries young people have become richer, healthier, and live longer but they are less happy. What are the causes? What can be done to address this situation?

Juveniles are experiencing great level of life in contrast to their parents which encompass more amenities, while they are more depressed and not enjoy their life as much as their parents. It seems that easier achievements and comparison their life style with others obstruct them from enjoying their own life. There kinds of views have roots in childhood years and should solve on that years.

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Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people might agree that it is completely justifiable for successful sports professionals to earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. While others might argue in contrast to that view. In this essay, I will discuss both the sides. In my opinion, I firmly believe that there are people in other important professions who should earn more in comparison to successful sports professionals.

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It is often argued that it is difficult to get children to read. Why do you think this is? What measures could be taken to encourage children to read more? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Being literate is one of the most crucial indicators of high intelligence, thus all parents are inclined to teach their offspring how to read at a relatively young age. However, it appears to many people that children often do so with reluctance or only under parental coersion. From my perspective, this can be attributed to the lack of interest in books in general and the solutions to which will also be presented in the following essay.

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In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what is your opinion should be done about it.

Regarding the current situation, job positions are highly demanded from people around the country. Likewise, competitive qualifications require experiences from graduates. With limited human resources and economic conditions, this has affected significant numbers of talented people to be unemployed after graduation. In this essay, it points out various factors and solutions of the problems.

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Some people think that social networking sites have a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

Recently, some people claimed that social media websites may bring worse influences to our life.However,I cannot agree with that perspective ,and I believe that more pros than cons can be found..

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Cultural tourism, where people travel in order to visit museums, monuments, and archaeological sites among other things, is a growing industry. Having so many visitors may sometimes benefit a nation’s cultural heritage, but can also cause problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Mankind always aspires to travel around the globe. They are always keen to learn new things & culture, as well as desire to see various wonder across the world which lead to the growth of tourism.

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The news media have become too much influential in people lives today and this is a negative development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Stepping into the 21st century, state-of-the-art technologies have set their foot in almost all spheres of our life. Whether the news media has enslaved or liberated people's lives nowadays has long been a subject of debate. While I agree that there are some cases that human beings are negatively affected by the coverage of wild news media, I still believe that it is a breakthrough of mankind that brings a great deal of benefits.

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Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other. Others argue that people have become more independent. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is considered by some individuals that nowadays people more relay on one another while there are others who think the society has grown to get more autonomous. This essay will discuss these two distinct perspectives of this topic and provide my opinion that I firmly believe new technologies bring more opportunities to be independent.

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In some areas of the US, a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.

Teenage is the most vulnerable and important phase of life. To protect teens, the state has deployed a curfew in some areas and adolescents must be accompanied by an adult if they still want to go out. I partially agree with the aforementioned for the reasons that are explained in the following paragraphs.

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Some people think that criminal behavior can have genetic reasons, while others believe that only circumstances can lead some people to crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are some arguments about what may cause the criminal behavior in a person: nature or nurture. It seems to me, both points of views can explain the reasons of criminal actions.

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The internet has made knowledge immediately available to people through computers and smartphones all around the world. Much of this knowledge is also free. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend

Modern technology have opened a vast chest of information to mankind through various gadgets. Most of these are offered without a price instantly to cater our needs. The impending essay will discuss how this has revolutionalized the learning process and also the aftermath if any.

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Discuss the differences between the way of life in your country now and the way of life in the past

During the last years, Colombia has undergone many positive changes in different aspects that make the city much better now than in the past. In this essay, I will discuss some of the changes in my country now and the way of life in the past.

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