IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 917

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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In many parts of the world, there is continuous coverage of sport on television. Some people believe this discourages the young from taking part in any sport themselves.

Whether live sports on television avert youngsters from actually playing sports in real life is a controversial issue and deserves a thorough discussion. In my opinion, participating in different sports is far useful than only enjoying it on television, though watching a few games does not hurt. In this essay, I will discuss the view and present my opinion.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statements ? with the help of technology , students nowadays can learn more information and learn it more quickly.

In today's modern world, technology found it's way within many fields such as: workspace, educational settings and entertainment. Education and academic fields are one of the main fields that benefited from the technology and it's tools, I highly agree that students nowadays are more knowledgable and able to learn faster with the help of technology, because of higher access and reachability to data, also having access to lots of different mediums of media that can suit their learning styles and help them learn different types of information faster.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Providing Internet access is just as important as other services, such as building roads, so governments should offer Internet access to all of their citizens at no cost. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Nowadays internet usage has become predominant everywhere. Unlike other services, Government should try to provide internet free of cost to everyone in the country like paving roads. I do not agree that Government should take the responsibilty for this , as It can be disregarded that the necessity of internet availability is similar to other services.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

In certain cultures, children are often told that if they strive to work hard they can achieve anything they wish. By perpetuating this idea to children, it could shape their perspective about their goals and work hard to achieve it. Meanwhile if these individuals forced themselves with this notion, potentially it could drive them to feel overwhelmed which leads to anxiety and often feel not enough for their life and future.

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In many countries, the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. Does this trend have positive or negative effects on society?

Nowadays, with the increasing of technology and living standard, the average life expectancy has been alleviated, which leads to a larger proportion of older people. This fact has more negative effects than positive effects to our society.

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some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out bout the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

In a number of nations, an increasing number of people have growing interest in figuring out the past stories of the apartment or flat they dwell in. There are multiple reasons to this and various ways for people to study this.

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It is expected that there will be a higher proportion of old people that that of young people in many countries in the future. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

The vast majority believe that modernization has changed the way people live, particularly in producing offspring to create regeneration. The trend of not married and child's free have answered that assumption. Thereof, the proportion of old people in many countries later will be higher than the population of the young generation.

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Too much money is spent on looking after repairing olg buildings. They should be knocked down and we should build modern insteads. Do you agree or disagree?

History is changing and one of the things can we remember is the building now the researchers can help us with what happened by some information from this building,so we should talk care about it.

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Many offenders commit more crimes after serving their first punishment. Why is this happening and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem

A large number of criminals who release from prison after having the first punishment do more crimes. All is happening because of unemployment, and rehabilitation . There are some effective solutions that should be implemented to deal with issues.

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some people believe that children should not be given homework everyday, while others believe that they must get homework everyday in orter to be successful at school. discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Some individuals feel that youngsters should not be assigned homework on a daily basis, others feel that in order to be successful in school, they must complete homework every day. In my opinion, give homework everyday can build pressure of the student and make him/her hate the school.

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Most people prefer shopping in supermarkets nowadays. How does this affect the local shops? What are the positive and negative impacts of this development?

These days most of the human like to buy day to day essential item from supermarket. Because overthere plenty of varieties available and convenient way to purchase daily essential.Therefore, shopping with single retail shop dramatically reduced. Then I would like to discuss in this eassy positive impact and negative impact.

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In many countries, the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. Does this trend have positive or negative effects on society?

Nowadays, with the advancement of technology and the improvement of living standards, the average life expectancy has increased, resulting in a larger proportion of older people in society. This trend has more negative effects than positive effects on society.

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In many countries, prison is the most common solution for crimes. However, many think that better education is the most effective way to prevent people from committing further crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

In recent times, crime rates increasing especially in urban cities. In some countries, implemented severe punishment law on offender. However, some people harbour a belief that education is the feasible solution which prevent people to not involve in the crime activites. From my perspective, the partially agree with the given statement. In this essay, I will elaborate on the beneficial and adverse aspects of this thread and thus lead to a logical conclusion.

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Mostly the popular issue in metropolitan areas is traffic jam since many people prefer to live in this place to get better life. Because of this issue there are any two problems that give bad impact in the earth , but there have two solutions to tackle these problems.

Mostly the popular issue in metropolitan areas is traffic jam since many people prefer to live in this place to get better life. Because of this issue there are any two problems that give bad impact in the earth , but there have two solutions to tackle these problems.

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Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world. What are the reasons for this and suggest solutions

The world has been witnessing few significant changes in youngsters life. Most of them egazing toward the bad offends,which effect in rising of misdeeds among metropolis.This eassy will articulate causes as well as solutions in looming paragraphs.

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People are surrounded by advertising, which has an increasing effect on our lives. Do you think the positive effects of this outweigh the negative effects?

Advertisements influence the human being drastically in the last three decades .It provides a strong impression on our lives, as most of the time we are surrounded by ads. I believe that, it has ample of positive impacts when we compare it with the negatives.This essay will discuss the effect of Advertisements on humankind in either way, whereas there are high advantages as compared to demerits.

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As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities . To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Apart from making profit, firms must play an important role in social responsibilities. In my opinion, I agree with this statement as corporate gain money from society, therefore it should also returned back it to society.

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Prison is the common way in most countries to solve the problem of crime. However, education and training are better solutions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are several crimes happening all around the world. Most countries use imprisonment as a punishment for people who are identified as a defendant by law . Some countries have good facilities for prisoners and some countries do not contain the basic facilities for prisoners. Most countries try to rehabilitate and empower prisoners during their jail time by introducing different pathways. There are a lot of people who have committed crimes because they have financial problems fulfilling their daily needs. In my opinion education and training provide the prisoners to empower their lifestyle and prevent further crime in future and it will be a great solution to reduce the crime rate in the country.

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Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on society. Others deny that these have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

Nowadays, there is a growing awareness among parents that visual stimulation from television and computer games is having a negative side to their children's behavioural growth. While some argue that it has little to no effect on kids' motoric skills, I believe that spending more time playing games and watching television would bring more disadvantages to younger generations.

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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems asa result. Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

Nowadays, many public are missing the opportunity to perform physical activities in the course of their working day or in their leisure period. Consequently, they suffer from many health-related issues. This essay will discuss the reasons behind it and remedies that can be taken to address the issue.

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