IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 913

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting. Write an essay expressing your point of view. Give reasons for your answers and provide relevant example and experience you might have.

Nowadays our population is getting bigger and new parents have their own ways of taking care of their children. Because of that, many of us arguing in overall who do a better job raising our children the mother or father. In this ,essay i will express my opinion regarding this issue. First, I believe that all parents want the best for their children it only depends on the level of society where they belong.

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Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Teenager can learn a lot through working in community in their free time. Many people believe that this can be advantageous to the community and the childrer because services like picking up garbage, helping elders can teach teenages to keep the place clean and tidy, and to respects their their elder. I believe , however , that they should be paid for their work and time rather than doing for free.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinino? What sort of punishments should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children.

Learning the difference between right ans wromg at early age is vital for children. Some people think penalty is essentail to help them learn this discirmination. This eassy disagree with this idea because parents and teachers can use other ways to teach appropriate conduct to children.

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In the past, shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby. To what extent do you think this is a positive trend?

In the past, people use to do shopping only for their functional necessities. However, nowadays modern people has made shopping as the leisure activity. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate my views for favouring the positive and negative impact of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.

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In some parts of the world it is becoming popular to research the history of one’s own family. Why might people want to do this? Is it a positive or negative development?

With the development of technology, it is now possible for people to study the history of their ancestors. There are several rationales that encourage modern citizens to conduct this research. In my perspective, I assume that this may be a breakthrough movement of human beings to identify their roots. In this essay, I shall put forth some ideas to exemplify this positive development with some lucid examples.

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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

However in this eassy, i am fully agree with second statment about undevelop

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Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

First impression is very important to someone who doesn't know you. All companies have their unique dress code for their emloyees to follow. Most of people think that companies will appreciate their employees who dress smartly rathan their work performance. In my opinion, we should all value people who dress smartly at work as work as their work performance.

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Now a day many people want to buy famous brands of clothes, cars and other items. What are the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive and a negative development?

In Contemporary era, Preference for Brands is seen to be proliferating. In recent times, many people are interested in purchasing Clothes, Cars and Other products of eminent brands. This could be mainly done either to maintain social status in the society or one is influenced by an external source. In my opinion, I believe that this change can have various negative effects on society.

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In some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

Nowadays, many objects in our world have been changed such as fashion, jobs and especially human’s interests. In some countries, many house owners want to aware several historical information about their capital. I will look for reasons of this action and find answer to solve their problem.

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As countries develop, their populations tend to live individually or in small family units. What are the causes of this trend and what are the effects on society?

Nowadays, an increasing number of people are more willing to live alone or in nuclear families. There are some factors contributing to this phenomenon and I firmly believe that it is a negative trend to our society.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishments' is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? what sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

Discipline is crucial for teaching child what is good and bad behaviour from the beginning of their school lives. I agree to a certain extent with this statement and this essay will explain a few reasons and will illustrate some alternative beating that I believe are safe.

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Some people think shopping online is better, while other prefers going to the shops. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The debate has been going on that shopping from the comfort of your place is better in comparision to the traditional in store shopping.In the upcoming paragraphs, i will be discussing from the both point of views.

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City and local governments should provide community-wide free Wi-Fi. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In recent years more and more people have been using smartphones to communicate and laptops to work outside of the office. Some people may think that community-wide Wi-Fi will be beneficial for everyone and should be provided for free by municipal governments, whereas others may think tax money should not be spent on Wi-Fi. I personally believe that it is beneficial for local governments to provide community-wide Wi-Fi, if such a measure is implemented wisely.

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The crime rate in urban areas is usually much higher than in rural areas. Why is this? What can be done to address the problem of crime?

In recent times, it has been evidently witnessed that their is surge in the crime rate in cities, in contrast to countryside areas. There are several reasons for this and to ameliorate the issue certain steps can be taken in this direction which will be explicated in this essay.

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In many countries it is common for families to own and run their business. Some people think it is the best way to run a business while other consider this a potential source of problems. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Despite the fact that some people think that family business is the best suitable model, I believe that there are several drawbacks that potential cause businesses own and managed by families are not successful. In this essay, I will discuss both views and provide reasons and examples supporting my standpoint.

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In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their level of health and fitness is decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent decades , being overwieght has become a major problem in several countries while, it can be seen that more and more people are becoming unhealthy and less activate . This happening has brought some problems into humans lives which can be solved throw different solutions .

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Even though globalization affects the world's economies in a very positive way, its negative side should not be forgotten. Discuss.

In recent decade, there has been a common argument exist in relation to how transnational influences the worldwide profitable. While some believe that globalism has boosted dramatically economic opportunities around the world, others think that it has caused detrimental results instead. However, I believed that it produces great overate though jurisdiction should have paid more attention to the negative outcome.

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Some Experts Believe That It Is Better For Children To Begin Learning A Foreign Language At Primary School Rather Than Secondary School.

It is said that take in foreign language in younger age at primary school would be more beneficial compare with starting it at secondary school. I think the benefits of learning another language sooner are more than the drawbacks.

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Some feel that school should be mixed with both girls and boys attending while others feel the genders ought to separated. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

People are divided in their opinion regarding what educational system will be more beneficial for the students, is it separate school for boys and girls or studying combined ? Many suggest that both boys and girls should be educated separately. On the other hand , a number of people believe both genders should be taught in combined schools. After analyzing both sides I will give my own opinion.

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Tourism is an ever growing industry. What benefits do you think tourism brings to individuals and society?

Tourism is one of the industries that has been growing at a fast pace since travelling has become easier than ever due to the enhancements in transportation. How rising of tourism changed the lives of the locals and society? This essay will elucidate the advantages of this phenomenon with examples.

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