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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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The most important function of music is that it helps people reduce stress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Music has been the most favourite entertainment medium for people from ancient times. It is widely believed that it’s most important use is mitigating the stress. I partly agree with this notion and this essay will discuss why I hold thin viewpoint.

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Nowadays eating habits of people are changing causing them many health problem including obesity. Why do people tend to eat so badly? What can be done to improve their eating habits?

In recent times, the style of eating by many individuals are around the globe has changed which has its affected to their health, as well as, it causes many diseases. In this essay, it will be considered the issue of problem solving.

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Some people think that children should receive formal training at schools on how to be a good parents in future. Do you agree or disagree with the statement

Many people think that children must receive formal education at school on how to be a good parents in future. I agree with this statement due to several reasons.

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The most important function of music is that it helps people reduce stress.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Music has been the entertainment media for people from ancient times. It is widely believed that it’s most important use is mitigating the stress. I partly agree with this notion and this essay will discuss why I hold thin viewpoint.

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These days, many people have their own computer and telephone, so it is quite easy for them to do their job at home. Does working at home have more advantages or more disadvantages?

With the development of science and technology, people can finish their work without going out of home. However, there are some arguments on working at home has some disadvantage, but here I will argue that there are more advantages of working at home.

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A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world.

Nowadays tourism generate significant contribution to countries economy and provide many advantages, whereas it is thought by some people that without proper management, tourism can cause several disadvantages for a country. In my opinion, I believe even though, tourism causes few drawbacks a country can earn more benefits from tourism.

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Many people believe that international tourism has negative implications on their countries. What is the reason for it? What can be done to change the negative attitude towards international tourism?

Contemporarily, a significant number of people are of the view that international tourism has some negative impacts on their nation. I believe this might be due to some reasons such as inadequate exposure to some relevant information about the benefits that a state derives from opening its tourist attractions to foreigners, and the citizens' fear of losing traditional culture. This essay will expatiate on these reasons and some possible solutions will be shared.

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Psychologists have known for many years that colour can affect how people feel. For this reason, attention should be given to colour schemes when decorating places such as offices and hospitals. How true is this statement? How far does colour influence people’s health and capacity for work?

Scientists have found that colour has a great impact on our feelings. Due to that fact, people have to pay more attention while creating a design of working places. In my opinion, choosing right colours is very essential thing which might affect on different spheres in a person life.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

In some cultures, it is essential to own a house compared to the renting a home. This situation might be due to feel safe and become an adult. This essay will explore the reasons why people choose to buy a house and explain why I think having your own is benefical.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

In today's world, economy and money have a huge place in our society and daily lives. Most people tend to save money in order to but their own houses and they think that this is a better option than renting someone else's home. This essay will try to find the reasons of this idea and also provide information on its positive effects.

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•In some countries, some of the criminal cases in the low courts are shown on the television, so that the general public can watch them

There is no denying the fact that publishing criminal cases on tv is always arguable. While it is commonly held belief that penalties should be heard by the public, other people see that some cases need to stay private. This essay will discuss the benefits and disadvantages of showing trials on television.

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some people believe that the salaries paid to professional sportspeople are too high while others argue that sports salaries are fair. Discuss both views and give your opinion

people have different views about the huge amount of salaries paid to the sportsman. some people believe that this excessive amount of salaries justified them, while it seems to me that that sportsman's salaries should be in limitation.

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Some people think that modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable.

To begin with, a lot of people believe that the internet is making human chatty, but others think it is making not sociable. I agree with the first opinion, because a lot of people can find common topics and chatting. This essay discuss two sides and explain why I agree with first people’s opinion.

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Prevention is better than cure. Out of a country’s health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventive measure. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a fact that prevention is more beneficial than cure. The government budget should be allocated a high proportion on health education and prevention measure rather than treatment. I agree with this view.

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Some people prefer to directly help or support people who need it in the local community. However, others prefer to give money to the national or international charities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give your opinion.

The significant development of society and living standards has made nations tend to care about the disadvantaged . While some nations refers to directly helping or supporting folk who need it in the local community, I am of the opinion that giving funds to national or international philanthropy is a better way.

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Some people think that job satisfaction is the most important factor when looking for a job. Others think that having job security is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some individuals believe that the main point when seeking a profession is career satisfaction, while others say that having a stable job is more serious. The aim of this essay is to discuss both issues and provide my ideas.

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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic? What are the benefits and disadvantages of this?

a lot of people are travelling to the places with extreme conditions like Sahara desert or the Antarctic and it is a benefit as they are able to see some breath-taking scenery our world has to offer but as they are unprepared for change in the climate, few of them suffer serious injury or even death.

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Some people think high-end technology can prevent and cut down the rate of committing crime. Do you agree or disagree?

Several people have opinions that advanced technology can help them to avert and reduce the number of committing crimes. I cannot argue with this statement, because technology can help society monitor their surroundings every time and it can help someone catch the culprit easily.

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The government should allocate more funding to teaching science rather than other subjects in order for a country to develop and progress.

There is a crucial argument over whether authorities ought to provide more capital on eductaing her students on technological courses as compared to other modules with the insight of ecomic growth. I agree partially as there are other viable means to boost up the national income.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems

our world is so beautiful. Yet so fragile. And there is so many environmental problems that makes the earth more and more wrecked.And for 2 reason i think that the main enviromantal problem of our time is the loss of particular species of animal and plants.

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