IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 949

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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¿Hasta qué punto está de acuerdo con la siguiente afirmación? Todo lo que es bueno para ti también puede ser malo para ti si lo haces demasiado.

Generar hábitos que nos alienten a sentirnos más felices por las cosas buenas que podemos hacer puede ayudarnos a ser mejores, desempeñarnos mejor y reducir nuestras emociones por las cosas malas que hayamos hecho. Hay una opinión que dice que todo lo que es bueno para ti también puede ser malo si te excedes. Estoy totalmente de acuerdo con esta frase porque algunos ejemplos, como consumir demasiada comida rápida en la calle podría conducir a la obesidad o el uso prolongado del teléfono celular o de las máquinas electrónicas podría dañar nuestra salud mental y visual. En primer lugar, muchas personas no se dan cuenta de que consumir demasiada comida rápida en la calle puede ser perjudicial para la salud, ya que todos los ingredientes pueden contener un montón de conservantes y colorantes, cosas que pueden afectar nuestro cuerpo y llevarnos a la obesidad, por ejemplo. Hace muchos años, vivía solo, trabajaba y estudiaba al mismo tiempo y no tenia tiempo para cocinar y recurrí a compra...

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The percentage of overweight children has increased rapidly in the recent years in several countries. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend.

It is irrefutable that people who suffer from overweightness have tough lives; in addition, in the modern world, humans begin to gain more and more weight. In this essay, I will discuss the reasons of this trend, and give solutions for the increasing numbers of fat people.

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Nowadays university education is considered very important for people's future. However, there are a lot of successful people who didn't get higher education. Do you think that higher education is necessary to succeed in life? Justify your opinion with relevant examples.

It is often believed that the higher the degree of studies, the higher the chance of succeeding. However, many people have been the proof that that is not always the case. In my opinion, that would have been true a few decades ago, but with the advance intechnology and the increasing amount of job positions that do not require higher education, the statement seems to be outdated.

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Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society. To what extent do you agree with this view?

In recent years, many media providers do not think about the ethics and how acceptable advertisements. Therefore, sometimes they use the wrong ways of commercials in their works. Nonetheless, in my point of view,I totally agree with this statement as many content creators create work by rejecting the viewers feeling and also lying to the viewers.

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Some people believe that schools are no longer necessary because students can study well at home through the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued by a substantial proportion of individuals claim that, educational institutions are no longer mandatory because pupils can effortlessly complete their education at the birthplace. I partially agree with the given statement.

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Science gives people life expectancy of close to one hundred years or even more. Some people view it in a positive light, but others believe it creates some problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many people are of the opinion that due to the development of science and technology in the near future humans will have a longer term of life. In my opinion, I wholeheartedly believe that 100 years of lifespan brings both pros and cons to society.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives

Some people beliebe that taking risks for any decision of career-paths and private lives can give more benefits than the drawbacks. In this essay I will explain people will be more succesful reaching their goals because the fact that people can be wiser and have more experiences rather than comfortable in their zone.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. What might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

It is generally accepted that many people decide to do self-business or freelance more than work in company in this time. However, I agree with the statement in the task. I think many graduated student or first time jober had confuse to choose their first job. In some person made dicision to do like that.

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Television dominates the free-time of too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socialising with others. Do you agree or disagree?

People tend to choose to spend their free time in a different way. Some people prefer to stay at home and spend their extra time binge-watching television. In this essay, will discuss why I agree, because, some people are already tired at work and others do not have extra money to go out.

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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time , and have health problems as a result. Why do many people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem ?

Nowadays, people are not doing enough workout either during their working day or in their leisure time. This is due to heavy workloads at their jobs and expensive gyms ,while this issue can be solved by reducing work pressure on employees and by cheaper availability of fitness centers.

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Nowadays, many people move away from places where they grew up to find a job. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvatages?

Migrations among job seekers to another city or even country in order to work are common. Moving from the hometown increase the opportunity to land a job, but it also comes with several drawbacks for the job hunters and their hometown. In my opinion, people should stay in their city to find or create a job as it will lead to their town betterment.

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Shops should not be allowed to sell any food or drinks that have been scientifically proven to be bad for people’s health. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Nowadays, most of people carefully select some products. In 21-century people faced with a lot of problems, for instance some new viruses, covid-19 and etc. so people try take very good care of their health. some of them really thinks that shops should not be allowed to sell any food or drinks that have been scientifically proven.

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Counties such as China, India and Japan have unsustainable population growths. In fact many experts are of the opinion that the population ‘explosion’ which is now a very worrying concern, is the most serious threat to life on this planet. Give some suggestions to address this problem.

The problem of population was always debatable and has now become more controversial. Few people claim that it is beneficial. While others reject this notion with believe potential terrible impacts of this dilemma. In my, opinion the position of massive growth in the quantity of humans appears to be more rational. In this, essay we will further elaborate on the negative effects of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.

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Some governments have banned smoking in all public places. Do agree or disagree?

Smoking is well-determined documentation the health issues. In recent years, the increasing number of smokers which leads to many detrimental effects. Some people concur that smoking should be banned in all public places. However, I quibble with them and propound that the statement appears to be more rational. In this essay, I will elaborate on the beneficial aspect of this trend and thus lead to a logical conclusion.

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Many children these days face difficulties to concentrate or pay attention at school. What are the causes of this situation? What could be the possible solutions?

It is known that a number of kids can not focus or pay attention at school in recent days. There are some reasons to cause this problem and also different ways to resolve it.

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Technology is becoming increasingly prevalent in the world today. In the not too distant future, technology will completely replace the teacher in the classroom. Do you agree or disagree with the statement.

Nowadays, technology are more and more important. It is often said that technology will supersede the role of teachers in the near future. In my opinion it is not possible. We have a lot of job when people can be supersede easily, but the teachers are not in this group. The role of teachers are too important to be performer by robots.

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The best way to make the road transport of goods safer is to ask drivers to take a driving test each year. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays transport is the invention which help us move around or move our ищщл. Actually almost every person can drive a car. But if talk about the road transport, less people can drive it. Because it is really hard, the road car huge and heavy. If the road transport has a baggage it is harder than without baggage. People who learn to drive the road car, study and practice such a long time.

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Stress-related illness are becoming increasingly common. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

In this era, mental illness is a big problem in our community, especially for students. the majority of them feel like no chance and no solution for their task. as the result, this situation makes they were stressed.

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Some people believe that research into family history is useful for the next generations, while others claim that present and future are more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Certain ethnicity in the world have an obligation to acknowledge their familys' background in the terms of continuing the traditions or take a lesson of how they did in life. It is argued by others that the outweight thing is trusting their own life and enjoy every process day by day. I believe it is still relevant to learn from our older generation but only the individual itself can make a decission on their life.

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Nowadays in many countries, both men and women work full-time. Logically, women and men should share household tasks equally. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the early days, men used to work while women spend time in the house doing day-to-day work. With the development of the world, both husband and wife doing jobs have become compulsory. Traditionally household tasks like cooking, washing garments and taking care of children were women's functions while men work for the there family but now it has changed completely. I strongly agree with this statement. There are some reasons and drawbacks.

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