IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 949

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Governments around the world spend too much money on treating illnesses and diseases and not enough on health education and prevention. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is often argued that the healthcare budget is heavily allocated to treating an illness with little focus on preventing one. I completely agree with this opinion and the governments should emphasize more on the importance of illness prevention and well-being education. This essay will extensively explain the reasons to support my opinion based on real-life examples.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many citizens believe that there should be more athletics centres in order to reduce public illnesses while others support that more changes are necessary to achieve this goal. This essay will attempt to explain why I completely agree with the implementation of sports facilities as a method to improve public well-being.

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describe your leisure time and give your opinion about positive side and negative side to have too much leisure time.

Recreational time is a necessity especially in this modern era, where people are encountering a stiff competition, not only in their workplace but also in their daily life.

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People who live in large cities face a range of problems in their daily life. What are the main problems people in cities face and how can these problems be tackled?

Nowadays, more and more people live in cities than in the past and this situation will likely continue in the future. There are several impact problems to them. I believe that, the government should take measures to make living outside cities more attractive.

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Some people believe that all children should learn second language from the time they start school, while others believe that it is better to wait until a child is at secondary school. Discuss both views and give Your opinion.

While some people think that children should learn a second accent early in the primary academy, others disagree with this idea and think that it is appropriate to teach another except their mother tongue voice when they study in secondary school. In the following paragraphs, both of these views will be discussed in detail before the conclusion is reached.

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Most employers nowadays put increasing emphasis on social skills. Some people believe that cocial skills are important in addition to good qualifications for job success. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?

These days many people trust that soft knacks are very important. Some folks opine that social customs are also required along with academic achievement to be on top of your career while others have a contrarian view. However, I completely agree with the given notion. This essay intends to explicate my view by taking instances to demonstrate points and prove arguments.

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Life now is better than it was 100 years ago. To what extend do you agree?

Many people advocate that present life circumstances are better than they used to be a century ago which I wholeheartedly agree with this phenomenon. Thanks to improved technology, hospitals offer better health care for society and faster transportation systems have made travels shorter than before. In addition, the invention of the Internet suggests people to learn everything without spending long hours in libraries and keep in touch without waiting arrival of letters for months.

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Life now is better than it was 100 years ago. To what extend do you agree?

Many people advocate that present life circumstances are better than they used to be a century ago which I wholeheartedly agree with this phenomenon. Thanks to improved technology hospitals offer better health care to society and faster transportation systems made travels shorter than before. In addition, the invention of the Internet provide people to learn everything without spending long our in libraries and keep in touch without waiting arrival of letters for months.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

It is apparent that mobile phone has become an indispensable thing for children. As a result of, they spend much time on their smartphones in daily life. From my point of views, this phenomenon has many negative effects. In the following paragraphs, the reasons to support my opinion will be outlined.

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Many believe that individuals can do little to improve the environment. Only governments and large companies can make a real difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

As human beings have kept exhausitng the resources from nature, serious environmental problems have been occuring like climate change and species extionction. Along these, the importance of improving environment had been increased accordingly. Some people insist that individuals are able to help environment, but others argue that only huge organizations like governments or companies can offer meaningful aids.

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In some countries, young people have become richer, healthier, and live longer, but they are less happy. What are the causes? What can be done to address this situation?

Living standard of young generation has attracted ever-increasing public concerns in many nations. It is obvious that the life of youngster has become much more sufficient when youths have had wealth, healthy, and longly-expectant lifes, but happiness shortages. There are a number of reasons behind this phenomenon and several solutions should be adopted to improve the situation.

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People no longer use newspaper and television. Because the Internet plays the same role as them. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The significance of the Internet has been highlighted over the last decades. From this aspect, questions about whether the public no longer uses newspapers and television are raised. In my opinion, the use of newspapers and televisions has diminished to some extent.

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Some people think that radio is the best way to get news while believe that television is better for this purpose.Discuss both views and give your opinion

Nowadays our life is very modern and creating are new technologies day by day.Because of old people believe that radio is great thing to awering news but young people guess that Technics is well for this prospect.This essay first discuss the given statement for some reason and will give some opinion with justify following sentences.

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Some people think that radio is the best way to get news while other believe that television is better for this purpose. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People of today's society hear a lot of current issues and various news from the radio. However, other people think that television is good for getting information. I think both are enough for information.

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Cities are becoming more and more congested and polluted as the number of private cars increases. What are the advantages and disadvantages of owning a car?

It is an undeniable fact that livig in this modern area everyone like to live in spacious society and house . Nowadays , each and every person migrates to big cities as it gives proactive stand in society as well as in community . Getting understable in society people like to purchase car and having crate makes road and cities more pollutate . This occurenece has both benifits and drawbacks so in below paragraph i would like to put forth my view and opinion in the conclusion .

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Nowadays, many animal species are becoming extinct. Some people believe that countries and individuals must solve this problem, others believe that human beings aremore important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

It is unfortunately true that many species of animals are now on the brink of extinction. While some people believe that the interests of human welfare should be a government priority, I agree with those who argue that urgent action must be taken to prevent the further loss of animal species. On the one hand, everyone who has a social conscience will admit how important it is to bring about major socioeconomic changes to benefit the mass of humanity. Firstly, the effects of poverty, famines and natural disasters across the world are shown on TV screens every day. Therefore, the struggle for a more egalitarian society, in which natural resources are shared, must be pursued vigorously. Secondly, another issue that must be addressed if everyone is to have a decent life is to end wars. The huge allocation of resources to defence budgets - $750 billion annually in the USA alone – could be used to preserve human life, not destroy it. On the other hand, I agree with those in the...

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Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

In recent decades, there are several arguments about whether the violent scenes on television and in computer games exert an adverse influence on the community or not. I will provide my own opinion in this essay before a conclusion is given. On the one hand, many people have a view that violence which involves on television or games can cause numerous negative impacts on our society. It is true that violent scenes that children watch on television are one of the main culprits to some negative awareness and children's thoughts. For instance, when they watch a blockbuster movie with some scene in which there is a fight or war, they may not realize that it is bad behavior. As a result, some of them would try to imitate those scenes and has violent tendencies when they grow up. However, not only children suffer from this phenomenon but also adults who have been affected by these scenes since they were young age. Thus, I believe that children should be controlled strictly in order not to...

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Urbanisation has meant that more and more families are raising their children in the city; however, the countryside is a far better environment tbring up children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

In the modern world, the increase in the proportion of people gives rise to land use in many cities; it becomes urbanise areas which are filled with a lot of facilities and it suits to raise kids. While, the advantage of the environment aspect at rural areas are better to nurture juveniles than the cities. This essay will examine both sides of the opinion and then give a supporting idea to the latter opinion.

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Many people think children should not be punished at early ages. To what extend do you agree or disagree? What sort of punishment may be applied for children?

Handling children is a much-debated topic nowadays,Firstly in my certain opinion treating toddlers with care and teaching them a different lesson if they do any mistake instead punish them, would be amazing for them or they cannot even lose their confidence in childhood. In the above ,report I attempt to explain my view with the same idea and which steps we take when mistakes are done by our children.

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Nowa days it has become incresingly popular to shop online rather than to shopin store. Is this a positive or negative development?

Online shopping has become preferable to in-person shopping in the last decade. This essay analyzes the benefits of online shopping. The virtual platforms are not only convenient but also help in the selection of the best quality products.

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