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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Nowadays some people think that teenagers are not so hard working as they used to be. What solutions can you suggest to deal with this problem?

Nowadays, one of the common issues that youngsters face, is laziness. It may be either due to time spent sitting in front of a screen or demotivation. To solve this issue, suggested limiting screen time and awarding them for achieved results.

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One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expenctancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

In the modern world, an increasing number of people live longer than before thanks to the medical advancement. As consequences, there are several prominent merits emerged. For example, people can now enjoy longer life with more quality time. The amount of knowledge one can pass to the younger generations increased. On the contrary, the cost to support old people is continuously on the rise and the burden to take care of them became heavier to their children and grandchildren. I would like to discuss the longer life expectancy's advantages and disadvantages and finally want to state that I believe its benefits outweigh the drawbacks.

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Some people believe that children should brought up in cities. Others believe that the countryside offers a better environment for children. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, citizens believe that children should be raised in towns while others believe that, a better environment for children to grow up in our countryside. Below, I will discuss both views and give examples.

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All over the world scientists are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults. What are the reasons for this rise in obesity? How could it be tackled?

Its undoubtedly clear that, Obesity has been the extreme concern for scientists and health care professionals since this is creating adverse health issues regardless of age groups. In this essay, I will highlight the primary reasons for it and propose some solutions to overcome its rate of increase.

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We are becoming increasingly dependent on computer-based technology. How do you think it will change in the future? Is it good for us to rely so much on computers?

Computers are the product of the modern world and the rapid technological development we live in. Eventually, we should be thankful and grateful for its possibilities. Today, we find it difficult to get through a working day without it. This essay will extensively explain the usage of PC in the foreseeable future. Besides, we will analyze its negative impacts on society.

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people today find their lives more and more dominated by their jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In this contemporary epoch, job-centred life has become a controversial argument. Whilst some opponents emphasize that employees' lives have become significantly relaxed and free, some proponents and I adopt a diverse stance because the competition level within the work environment has become much harder, and recruits are keen on ameliorating their living standard. In this essay, my contention will be further elaborated.

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Smacking children is the best form of discipline. To what extend do you agree or disagree.

Physical punishment is a good idea to discipline children. It's been applied to make children well-behaved or well-mannered. I strongly agree that giving corporal punishment can produce good outcomes, thus leading to becoming a more successful individual.

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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products any ware in the world. Is it a positive or negative development?

Globalization led to some changes in society. One of them is easy accessibility to the same product in the world. This advencement causes nations are like one other more and more. Although it seems initially a positive development, it is a negative improvment both for today and for the future.

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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products any ware in the world. Is it a positive or negative development?

Globalization led to some changes in society. One of them is easy accessibility the same product in the world. This advencement causes nations are like one other more and more. Although it seems initially a positive development, it is a negative improvment both for today and for the future.

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Some people think that having a set retirement age (e.g. 65 years) for everybody, regardless of occupation, is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age. Do you agree or disagree? Which types of workers do you think should benefit from early retirement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Almost all governments fix the retirement age for their citizens without taking into account how exhausting one’s job could really be. However, there is an opposing point of view, which offers a more individual touch, and says that some professionalists should retire sooner than others. In my opinion, there should be a personal solution for every profession and in some cases the retirement age should definitely be lowered down. This essay will examine that topic and try to point out which specialists should benefit from early retirement.

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Some people say that art subjects such as music, drama and creative writing are an essential part of education and every school should include them in its syllabus.Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

While some children enjoy art classes at school, others might feel frustrated during those activities. Though I do not think that art lessons should be obligatory for every high school syllabus, I am assured that art education might be profoundly benefitial for every child in elementary school. I will support my opinion with arguments and examples below.

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Alternative energy sources that use the natural power of the wind, wave and sun are too expensive and complicated to replace the coal, oil and gas that we use to power our cities and transport. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

The other forms of energy solar , wind and turbine powers are finding expensive to use instead of fossil fuel and it's by-products are which are the main source of power in urban areas to run vehicles and industries. I completely agree with the statement because this form of enegry can be produced in limited places and usage of this form of energy is restricted to applications. this essay will expatiate in further in the following paragraphs.

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People today are not as fit as they were in the past. What are the causes of this? What can governments do to deal with this issue?

Most people are experiencing a drop in their physical performance compared to the past which is highly correlated with their current activities as well as their eating behaviour. Fortunately, the government has the capabilities to tackle these issues and this essay will examine the problems and solutions.

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People today are not as fit as they were in the past. What are the causes of this? What can governments do to deal with this issue?

Most people are experiencing a drop in their physical performance compared to the past which is highly correlated with their current activities as well as their eating behavour. Fortunately, the government has capabilities to tackle this issues and this essay will examine the problems and solution.

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In recent years, many local shops have Closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or a negative development?

Thesedays , It is irrefutable that peeple prefer to purchase anything that really require from huge shopping centres, therefore, cause to close a number of little local shops. In my view, there are multitudinous beneficial in this choice. In the following paragraphs, I shall discuss the issue in depth.

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Some people like to try new new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your opinion

Should I try? or Should I not? This question mostly arises everyday in one's life. Some people fond of giving shots to new and exciting things, however, some are so reserved into their own era. This essay will dicuss both kinds of personalities in detail and will provide evidence why one have to try new things.

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Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Recently there are a number of people who believe that hosting an international sports event takes a lot of advantages, while the other side is that it will bring shortage. This writing will elaborate on both points of view.

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you have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers in your country all look very similar to each other. you don't fully agree with this opinion. say which points in the article you agree with explain ways in which your town center is different from most other town centers offer to give guided tour of your twon to the writer of the article

I am a regular reader of your newspaper called " The Country", the articles published in this newspaper are informative and interesting. I just read an article which you published last week November 6, 2022, about the metropolis centres of AB, Canada. Being a native resident and a travel blogger, I don't agree with some points you mentioned. Although, some information you provided is accurate.

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Nowadays, more number of crimes are done by teenagers. What are the possible causes and steps to prevent this?

in our current time, the statistics reveal that crimes are increasing among young adult age, and there are multiple factors that intervene directly behind this phenomenon. however, there are viable measures that can be taken to prevent our children from the Darkside of crime.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

Strict punishment is essential for the children at a small age to learn about what is correct and what is not. I vote for this notion to a major extent. There can be many types of retribution as physical, mental, and sometimes social, which help educators and parents to use to teach their children how to well-behaved in public. My preference is justified in the forthcoming paragraphs with valid reasons and examples.

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