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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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research indicate that the people who were convicted criminals would often commit crimes again when they are set free why is this case? what can be done to solve this issue?

nowadays,one of the most controversial issues around the world is about crimes and criminals.Recent research demonstrates criminals have a tendency to commit crime when they are released from prison.According to this ,topic I am going to illustrate why and I will give some possible solutions to solve the problem.

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In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

In a large amounts of areas, new houses are continually required by residents. Unfortunately, buildings for them are limited, and expect to construct properties in rural area. Some claim that is significant to preserve the country region rather than build new houses there. In this essay, I will analyse both sides of this issue, and declare my points completely.

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Families who sent their children to private school not be required to pay taxs' that support State education system.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

Some argue that there is no need to pay tax for aiding state education system if their children study in a private school. I strongly oppose this

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Some people prefer to work for themselves or own a business. Others prefer to work for an employer. Would you rather be self-employed, work for someone else, or own a business? Use specific reasons to explain your choice.

It is true that certain people and myself included are in between two minds whether to work for others, or to work for themselves, such as being a self-employed, working online as a freelance or run their own business. I would prefer to work for myself rather than working for others for many reasons, in the following essay I am going to explain my point of view.

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Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

School is the place of learning. Different subjects are being taught in the schools nowadays. These subjects range from Science, Maths to extracurricular like Dance, Painting and many more. This is a debatable topic that some people consider art subject is of no use while other think it is of utmost importance for the children. In this essay, I will discuss both views to this statement and conclusion at the end.

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Some people feel that fashion is like art and a significant part of society, while others feel that fashion is a waste of time and money. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In the last few ,years fashion has played a key role in modern society. Some people think that fashion can be compared to art, having a pivotal role in everyone's life, while others describe it as a waste of time and money. In this essay I will discuss both opinions and provide some examples of brands as Off-white that made pieces considered art.

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Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age. Some think they should begin at least 7 years old. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Few people believe that children should commence their schooling from an early age; whereas, some argue that they should atleast wait till they become seven years old. In this essay,I will pen down both sides of the argument and give my opinion.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that it is widely recognized that lots of produced food and beverage have high amounts of sugar which is the main reason for many health issues.In this essay,I will shed the light on both views and draw my personal conclusion.

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Some people say that the study of science should be mandatory in schools, whereas others argue that it is unnecessary . Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the contemporary era, modern science and technology have made everything possible and convenient for mankind. Such advancements have boost the economical and social sectors of the country. Some critics opine that academic institutions must consider science as a compulsory subject, while others deny this notion. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational.

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With the development of tourism, more and more cheap and discount fights are made available to holidaymakers. Some environmental groups claim that governments should tax air traffic more because its growth has a tremendous impact on the environment.

In the contemporary world tourism has been growing rapidly and providing many jobs. Inorder to attract customers from this trend airlines are giving more and more discounts between popular tourist destinations, observing this some enviromentalists argue that government should tax air traffic as it hugely results in negetive effects on enviroment. In this essay we shall discuss why air traffic should not be taxed more and how air travel generates less pollution compared to road travel.

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Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than earn a lots of money. Others disagree and think that good salary leads to better life. Discuuss both the views and give your opinion.

Preferable jobs are hotly-debated topics because majority people are divided into two groups when they talk about this. First category believes that workers should relish when they do their jobdesks, while the others have a notion that jobs have to contain huge salary. This essay shall discuss both perspectives while the authors agrees with the first paradigm.

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Health sector in the world is in the path of tremendous progress however, a pandemic or wide spreading diseases can block the pace of the advancement. How it may affect countries in its social and economic development and what are the consequences it can bring into the world.

pandemic is something this world cannot avoid. it may appear anytime and spread really fast. this thing could cause terrible effects in many sectors of the world ,especially in social and economic developments. this essay will give a perspective on this issue.

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Traffic congestion is becoming increasingly problematic in major cities. What solutions can you suggest to help solve theproblem?

It is common knowledge that, in megapolises such as Shang Hai and Almaty have higher number of residents living there compared to the countryside areas which causes heavy problems with traffic. This issue can be prevented by propriate steps of government of developed cities.

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As well as making money businesses also have social responsibilities.

Businesses have vast responsibilities for our society to making money. And also, nowadays they are becoming increasingly the best work to people. Absolutely I agree that they have major obligations.

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Some people think that printed books are no longer necessary in this digital era as all writing can be stored electronically. Others think that printed books still play important roles. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the digital era, some people read and write something on their gadgets or tablets because it brings a lot of benefits. However, others say that printed books feel more real and effective to be used. In this essay, I will go into both views and explain why I feel traditional books are still necessary and play important roles.

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Some people think that young children should be allowed to do paid work, while others think that this should be illegal. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Lots of arguments are thrown with multiple heads that were thought at the young age that working paid jobs is either legal or illegal.Some people have in mind that a proper activity for children excludes work with real paid money. This concept of thinking is shifting through the period of time and age.

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Most people in the world have to work to earn living. However, many people work only for the financial gain that it involves, and not for any other rewards that a job can offer. What do you think the main consideration when deciding what job to take should be?

Whilst the majority of people compete to get proper jobs that offer financial earnings for fulfilling their basic daily needs, there are some employees who seek and perform certain occupations for other reason. Not only for a affordable amount of salaries the companies offer, but these people do that for acquiring invaluable job experiences as well as for pride and satisfaction.

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Some parents say that they should encourage their children to take part in organized group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

The phenomenon of teaching children how to use their free time has aroused wide concern among various circles. Divergent as people's views on this issue in question may be, although there are good arguments in favour of encouraging children to join some group activities, I personally believe that parents should give the right and space for the children to make their own choice.

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Due to the increasing world demands for oil and gas energy, people need to look for new resources of energy in remote and untouched natural places. Do the advantages of locating these sources outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, the energy crisis is becoming the most discussed topic in contemporary society. There is a large number of people believing that we can simply run out an oil field and look for another one. Nevertheless, continuously exploiting nonrenewable sources is not sustainable to the future. This essay argues that extracting these sources will not fundamentally solve the problem.

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The money spent by governments on space programmes would be better to spend on vital public services such as schools and hospitals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this contemporary ,epoch there is the heated argument over the issue that some individuals concur that fund should be spent on slot programmes would be better while others oppose the notion that cash should be spent on public facilities like schools and hospitals.I strongly agree with this mentioned phenomenon.However,supporting points will be discussed in the upcoming paragraph.

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