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IELTS Writing Samples Band 6.5

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Some people think that teachers should be responsiblefor teaching students to judge what is right and wrong so that they can behave well. Others say that teachers should only teach students academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion

A well-known adage from India says " ACHARYADEVOBHAVA", which means teachers are next to God.It is a highly debatable topic whether teachers should be concerned with only academics or also teach manners and etiquette to children. in this essay I intend to discuss both perspectives.I, personally side with the former view.

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Some people believe that social media sites, such as Facebook or Twitter, have a negative impact on young people and their ability to form personal relationships. Others believe that these sites bring people together in a beneficial way. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words

The entire world uses social media because now individuals are so advanced and they are mostly using the internet because It's is part of the growth in present date and they have shared something about the soul storeys in Facebook and other internet apps.In my opinion, I consider that that action is the most benefit but as well as some negative issue so I discuss it.

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Many animals are facing extinction in the wild. Why is this happening? What can be done to protect them?

A large number of wild species are vanishing at an alarming rate which could trigger the butterfly effects leading to an imbalance in the ecosystem. There is an abundance of factors attributed to this problem and so are solutions that could be implemented to preserve the natural diversity.

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society. Others, however, believe that the school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give own opinion.

The good individual is one of the integral parts of society. This quality is nurtured from where? Does the parent's upbringing does matter or the school's teaching? There is no or yes answer to it. In my ,opinion indeed, both components have their roles to play with.

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It is as important to teach children to protect the environment as it is to teach them to read and write. To what extent do you agree with this statement? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is generally acknowledged by certain individuals that leaning how to protect the environment is as essential as that of how to read and write. However, I disagree with this assertion as once kids learn literacy, reading and writing have various benefits including reading an article about environmental protection themselves.

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Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.

The twentieth-century's inflation has made the humans to work longer hours and left them with a limited free hours to enjoy their lives. Although this change is compulsory, there are a great number of people who chose this lifesyle deliberately. It is noteworthy to keep in mind that working hard has its own two sides; however, I believe that the negative aspect of it clashes with the positive one. The following essay will overlook at two of these disadvantages.

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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

While some individuals favour spending their lives trying to change as little as possible others opine that change is always something positive. Those views will be discussed in this essay.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic. Whoever controls the media also controls opinions and attitudes of the people and there is little can be done to rectify this. To what extend do you agree or disagree? You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence. Write at least 250 words.

There is no doubt that these days social media is the major platform in the population routine. The question is, do famous people in the media control our minds? In this essay, I am going to discuss both views and draw my conclusion.

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SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THEY SHOULD KEEP SAVING ALL THE MONEY THEY HAVE EARNED AND SHOULD NOT PAY TAX TO THE STATE. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?

A percise proportion of people's income is being given to the government yearly as a tax based on the country. Nowadays, there is much controversy over this obligation. Some people argued that people should own all of their earning and this rule should change. It is noteworthy to bear in mind that people are trying even harder compared to the past for a living and giving taxes is not pleasant for them; however, I believe that taxes have been resulting in a lot of benefits for humans for years. The following essay will overlook two of these advantages.

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Many things can influence the academic achievement and emotional growth of a student. In this regard, peers have more of an impact than teachers do. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is a common belief that a student's school performance and emotional development are influenced more by teachers than by classmates. However. I firmly believe that classmates are more intluential because students are motivated academically by their peers and become more mature by socializing with them To begin with, students are motivated by competing with their fellow classmates. For instance, students usually have a desire to outperform their peers by demonstrating broader knowledge and achieving higher scores. Competition is especially fierce in the classroom, where students study the same material in the same place. According to a recent survey, students overwhelmingly stated that their peers motivated them to study more than their teachers. This is because competition played a key role in their motivation. This study offers strong proof that classmates significantly affect a student's academic achievement. On top of that, socializing at school allows children to gro...

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Do you think it is better to live in the countryside or in a city. Discuss both views.

Living in a village or a city completely depends upon individual perspectives and needs. However, there are several advantages and disadvantages of both. Personally, I believe that there are many benefits of living in metro areas where people can achieve their goals and live a quality life.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

Past has always been a mystery which expected to be solved and one of the biggest struggles of humankind. When any of these old incidents somehow related to someone, it gets even more interesting for him. Nowadays, searching about the background of their homes is a popular trend in some nations. There sure are pretty strong reasons behind this fashion and this essay will not only analyze the causes but also describe the methods to perform that research.

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The use of cell phones (mobile phones) has grown rapidly in the past few years. People use them for both business and personal reasons. What are the advantages and disadvantages of the widespread use of cell phones (mobile phones)? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Over the past several years, Mobile phones become the most usable device of all time. Crowd using them for a company purpose and also for personal reasons. While there are a few advantages, there are also some disadvantages which are worth considering.

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Some people think that children should be taught to be competitive in school. Others, however, say that cooperation and team working skills are more important. Discuss both sides

Education is the paramount aspect of each and every person's life, children are the buds of every nation because they would be built a better society in the future. However, some think that kids to be competitive and school should teach them while others believe that cooperation and group work are more crucial in school days. This essay discusses both viewpoints, I strongly agree with the former opinion for the following reasons.

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Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online. Is this a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays, it can be seen that many universities around the world provide many lessons on the internet. Therefore, people can study online. In my opinion, it gives more positive development on people's life. The explanation will be explained before the conclusion is reached.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Some people think that sports facilities could improve the overall public health, while others believe that it might not be effective. For example, due to some reasons, some people might not be able to manage to exercise. Therefore, only increasing sports facilities to improve public health is not sufficient. This essay will discuss both views and provide other measures to address this matter.

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Universities and colleges are now offering qualifications through distance learning from the Internet rather than teachers in the classroom. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Most people believe that an online college program gave so many opportunities to various communities to gain a higher degree. However, others argue that online classes are not qualified as higher education. In this essay, I am going to illustrate both sides, and why I believe the online course is not the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages.

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One day the world’s oil and gas reserves will run out. The search resources such as wind power, solar power and burning power is causing as much environmental damage as the oil and nuclear power sources they are intended to replace. How far do you agree with this latter statement? What possible benefits do the alternative energy sources bring?

It is estimated that fossil fuels will get depleted by 2060, so several alternate resources have been accepted globally like solar power, wind power. People all around the world protest against using such measures, as they are equally toxic to the society as natural resources and, I second to that opinion. The essay will also illustrate several perks of using these sources.

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Some people believe that social media sites, such as Facebook or Twitter, have a negative impact on young people and their ability to form personal relationships. Others believe that these sites bring people together in a beneficial way.

i gratefully thank you, you always put us in right ways

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

Kids in some traditions are frequently instructed that by putting in continuous effort they can get whatever they want. This essay will shed light on both advantages and disadvantages of such an instruction.

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