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IELTS Writing Samples Band 6.5

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Modern technology, such as personal computers and the Internet, have made it possible for many people to do their work from home at least part of the time instead f going to an office every day. What are some of the advantages and disadvantages of this situation? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, a hot issue of whether working at home through the Internet is better than going to the company or not is being discussed. From my own point of view, I strongly disagree with this issue.

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popular events like football worldcup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In this modern era of globalization, sports are becoming more popular among people all over the world. In particular, football world cups gained huge amount of fame and increased the bonding with competitors' countries.Also, it's increasing patriotism among the citizens in a safe way. Personally, I believe that international events like football world cups are really important to build strong relationships nationwide.In this upcoming ,essay I will examine my agreement and give my opinion.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towans and cities closing do you agree or disagree??

Nowadays,people influence by e-platform such as Amazon,Flipkart,Nykaa,Meshoo and Paytm and many more,they buy from these platforms in the present era. Due to this online shopping become very popular among humankind and they grow quickly like a booming fire while some argue that due to this all outlets in city centre areas and in remote or rural areas will be closed In future. In this essay,I will discuss both viewpoints and give my perspective in the trailing paragraph.

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Teleworking can be considered a flexible form of work organization,

to conclude, although not all types of businesses and jobs allow teleworking, those who adopt this type of work benefit, both employees and employers, can find opportunities for growth, if companies broaden their vision of how they work and consider that there are more things to worry about besides productivity, such as happiness and employee satisfaction, could increase their profits, as people would be more motivated, would work from the comfort of their home and be more responsible for their daily tasks

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Should parents be obliged to immunise their children against childhood diseases? Or do individuals have the rights to choose not to immunise their children? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Parents have the responsibility to make the decision for their children as their guardians. The decision is made based on what action is best for their future health issues and what is the impact if not immunise the heir. In my opinion, it must not be optional and offspring must be vaccinated.

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To what extent do you agree or disagree with the idea of legalising abortion.

Nowadays, people are more concerned about the future, so they need to take wise decisions.

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Exposure to international media, such as films, TV and magazines, has an impact on the local culture. What do you think of these impacts? Do you think that the advantages of these impacts outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

To be a movie star or a baseball superstar could be a dream for most people, but it is very clear that everything has a double edge. It gives you huge advantages and big problems at the same time.

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The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in school curriculum

The number of people who are overweight is increasing dramatically day by day, and as a result, it puts more pressure on the healthcare system. The majority of people consider that one of the ways to address the issue is to implement more physical education classes in schools. I utterly disagree with this statement due to some reasons such as healthy nutrition and psychological factors however it is apparent fact that physical education is significant for our lifestyle.

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some people believe that children should be taught more practical subjects rather than art culture. to what extent do you agree.

The education system around the world has been questioned many times over the years by notable people criticizing the lack of practical subjects for students and I wholeheartedly agree with the critics.

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Natural talents are more important than working hard to achieve success. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, people do a lot of work to become successful in their life and one who is born intelligent are less than one in hundreds. Although naturally talented people can help the communities in various ways, learning is a crucial factor and those who just want to survive with natural skills can not replace hard workers. Therefore, I disagree with the notion that individuals with god-gifted capabilities are essential compared to learners.

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In some nations, the authorities cover the partial or entire educational fees for children in order to make literacy affordable. I believe the benefits outweigh the drawbacks.

It is true that there are still some drawbacks. Some students and parents may not be appreciated free schooling. Some people tend to take free services for granted as well as low-cost education. This can result in exam success rates by students dropping off school, or not taking me seriously on learning. Moreover, the quality of teaching can be inferior. Since schools receive funding from the government, they have limited budgets to hire top teachers. Therefore, students can only get a general-level instructor.

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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

Despite the progress made in agriculture, most individuals around the globe still experience starvation.This essay will first discuss the reasons and will further address what can be done about the problem.

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Scientist ssy that in the future humanity will speak the same language. Do you think this is a positive or negative social development

In the present age, people speak in different languages all over the world. Scientists believe that human beings will speak the common language in the future and the variety of languages will be disappear. From my perspective this trend has more benefits that drawbacks.

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Some think newspapers are the best method for reading the news while others think other media is better. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

It is thought that newspapers are the best method for keeping up to date while some people said that other media is better. Both of them have positive and negative effects, however, I would argue that electronic devices are more advantageous than print media.

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Medical science has greatly lengthened the average lifespan of most people. Some think this is a positive development while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In this contemporary era, science changes every stage of life as it expands the growth of mankind and gives more opportunities to them. As in the medical line scientific research evolved a significant approach to human life expectancy. While, others opposed the statement. I believe that it is a beneficial development in past few years to maintain the physics run longer.

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Some people believe that it is important to spend a lot of money on family celebrations. While others think it is a waste of money. Discuss both views.

In contemporary society most occasions are being celebrated, some folks think that celebrating with family is essential even though it uses up such an amount but creates unforgettable moments, while others believe it is misuse and should spend on more important matters.

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Some people believe that there should be a fixed punishment for each type of crime. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this ?

In today's modern world, crime often occurs in every place and has several types. Some people believe that punishment should be fixed in a stringent way for all categories. This kind of punishment could bring out a smile on a victim's face. In my opinion, I wish this belief will kick back lenient terms and conditions. This essay will discuss the positive and negative impacts of the topic.

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Modern children are suffering from those disease which were once consider to be meant for the aduts only.obesity is the major disease prevalent among the children.what are its causes and remedies?

Obesity has been the current issue for the youth these days, which was actually faced by elder people. This essay will examine the main causes of this disease and the solutions to this problem.

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Many children have become habitual about excessively using mobile application day and night. Why do you think this is so ? What parents can do to avoid this situation declining further ?

Nowadays, the majority of children are able to access the smartphone 24/7, and it directs to the extent of using mobile applications whether it is day or night. This is one of the problems that modern days parents and children have. Since the smartphone became a formal type of mobile phone, the community, including the heir, cannot live without it if they know how it is comfortable and useful for daily activity.

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Some people think it’s better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Others believe that it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, many people agree with the idea of having the same opinion as their friends could lead to a positive relationship due to avoid conflict, while others think in the opposite way justifying their answer by explaining that having differences in their opinions could be a positive way to enrich their friendship and create a strong bound.

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