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IELTS Writing Samples Band 6.5

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For centuries important part of education have remaind reading writing and math. with the edvent of computer some people think that computer skill be made as fouth skill to be added to the list of education system. To what extent do you agree?

Since bygone days, education has been standardised on basic few subjects which comprise of reading, writing and math. Though, due to enormous development in technology, a computer has become the gist of every discipline. According to a school of thought, computers should be an essential part of the literacy system. I certainly believe that computer learning should be compulsory.

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Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while others think these are disadvantages to this. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Nowadays, big multinationals advertise their bands by sponsoring sports tournaments and even sports companies. Globalcom premier league, Milo basketball tournaments as well as the Barclays premiership league are all instances of big companies sponsoring nation leagues and tournaments. While some posit that this is a beneficial idea, others opine that there are some demerits of these sponsorship deals in the light of some ethical and religious bases. I will in this essay discuss both of these views and opine that it is both advantageous and disadvantageous.

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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around world still go hungry. why is this the case? what can be done about this problem?

In recent times, technology play a crucial role in the agriculture sector. With the help of ,technology farmers are capable to grow more greenery in one season and it also helps them to improve their livelihood. However, still many people suffer from hungriness. In this essay, I will explain the causes of this obstacle, Also I will suggest solutions to overcome this problem.

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The new media has a strong negative influence on people's live. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

The new technologies have many influences in human life these days and make lots of people consuming news easier with a variety of benefits. Although, there are some case studies of the drawbacks that might impact mankind. Besides, I partially agree with the statement that new media offer negative influences.

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Governments should spend spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

With the development of transportation, some people advocate that it is better to spend more budget and effort on the public transport than on roads. Others, however, suggest that both are essential for traffic development in a country. I agree with the attention on railways. This essay will discuss the causes according to traffic jams and environmental issues.

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Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as novels and poems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is undeniable that education prosperity plays a crucial role in children’s future professional lives. It is argued by some that it is not worth studying literature, like novels and poems, during secondary school. Although such subjects are of profound effect on pupils' speaking skills and boost their imagination and creativity, personally, I believe that they should be educated through the extracurricular programs and the focus of study hours ought to be on practical subjects.

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Honesty is the best policy. To what extent do you agree or disagree with it?

Recently, the debate on whether honesty is the best policy has been heated. While some people claim that numerous crimes can be prevented by honesty, others argue that the policy can be difficult to apply. As far as I am concerned, I agree with this view in a large extent as citizens can obtain well behaviours by honesty.

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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding changes. Others, However, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

During our life, people face a lot of difficult challenges and have to make important decisions out of those. There are some people who believe that it is beneficial to continue doing the same things and avoid changes, whereas others think that bringing change in their lifestyle is always a good thing. This essay will discuss both views and a conclusion thereafter.

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It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology develops. Technology and traditional cultures are incompatible. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology develops. Technology and traditional cultures are incompatible. In my opinion, I think this notion is unreasonable and I will explain why I do not agree with this notion in the following paragraph.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, our globe has been encountering serious ecological problems. While numerous individuals assume that these days, the primary issue that causes problems to the environment is the deprivation of certain parts of flora and fauna, others believe there are more essential environmental matters. In the following paragraphs, I will explain both sides and give proffer justification for my viewpoint on the matter.

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Some people think that hosting international sports events may be beneficial for a country. Discuss both views.

Some people think that hosting international sports events may be beneficial for a country. In the following paragraph, I will explain my reason to support this notion and discuss both views.

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Problems with environmental pollution have become so serious that many countries are trying to solve these problems. discuss cause and effect and Suggest possible solutions and give your own opinion.

In contemporary society, pollution is just ubiquitous. With little objection, we can boldly say that, it happens mainly in the manufacturing phase of goods. This is intensified by inadequate treatment of waste material during the production process due to economic reasons, and it, in turn, leads to the destruction of natural habitats and loss of wildlife animals eventually. To alleviate this, we need to go directly to its root and tackle the economic reason behind.

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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

At this age, everything rarely stays the same and keeps changing and developing. However, some people enjoy doing the same things whereas others choose changes and risks. This essay will discuss both sides of this argument and come to a conclusion.

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Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There has been a heated discussion around art as a subject for students to learn at school. Many people see learning art as equally important as other subjects, while others think it is a waste of time. As far as I am concerned, art is essential and invaluable.

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Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born. What might be the reasons for this? What are the advantages and disadvantages?

Nowadays, people are really mobilised to consider where they lives. Some people might prefer to live close when they were born. We illitrate ireasons, advanages and disadvantages in the below pragraph.

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Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to get a satisfying career life than those who frequently change To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the contemporary epoch, many folks have chosen careers that sustained their livelihood. In view of this, there is an irrefutable debate that people who choose to indulge in an early work path tend to be more successful than people who switch jobs. This essay would exhaustively discuss these points in the paragraphs below while I conclude with my opinion.

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Students perform better in school when they are rewarded rather than punished. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

All children had different actions which may lead to them to pleased or wrong one differs them reprimanded.

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Many people argue that in order to improve educational quality, high school students are encouraged to make comments or even critisism on their teachers. Others think it will lead to loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is irrefutable that quality education is important to everyone. This encourages, certain ,students to comment on their teachers or even criticize them if they aren't provided with the right education. Many believe this to be true whereas, some are of the view that, it may be disrespectful to the professors and reduces discipline.I strongly concur with the latter and in this essay, I will further elucidate my opinion on the same.

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In the request for development, many countries allow their natural environment to be affected. Such a strategy is well worthwhile, an economic development should always be placed ahead of the environment. Argue both sides, and give your opinion.

Many nations today strive for economic growth, their environment occasionally suffering grievously in the process. This is particularly prevalent in less developed countries, but many now question the wisdom of placing such priority on purely economic considerations. My opinion, however, is that this emphasis is well-founded.

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Some people think that it is beneficial for children to do paid work, while others think it can be harmful for children. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

It is the opinion of some people that children will benefit if they work to earn a salary, whereas, others believe that will be detrimental to them. I believe the benefits outweigh the drawback.

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