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IELTS Writing Samples Band 6

IELTS Writing Samples Band 6

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Should humans adapt to technology or should technology be adapted to us? Is technology making us intellectually weaker or more intelligent? Discuss both views and give your point of view?

Some think that we should adapt to technology and that it makes humans less intellectual, while others believe that it should be adapted to us and doesn't make our intellect weaker . The future paragraphs will make an effort to discuss and examine both points of view and give my opinion at the end .
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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Few people argued that to improve public health providing adequate sports facilities will bring desired results. Whereas another section of society believes that improving hospitals and medical treatment facilities will bring significant changes. This essay will present both views and provide my opinion on this.
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In many countries, a high proportion of criminal acts are committed by teenagers. Why has this happened? What can be done to deal with this?

In recent days, a survey has found that a large proportion of crime in many countries is committed by young people. It is important to understand why this problem occurs and how to fix it.
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Some think the best way to reduce the time people spend in travelling to work is to replace the parks and gardens close to the city centres with apartment buildings where commuters can live, while other disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

With the development of the economy, the size of cities is increasing, leading to more congested road traffic. This, in turn, increases people's commuting time, causing them to spend a lot of time on the way to work. Some argue that converting parks and gardens into residential buildings would solve the problem, while others disagree. In my opinion, changing the land use type is not the best solution.
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Some people think learning history in school is important. Other think learning subjects more relevant to life is important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Recently, a topic about the benefits of learning history or studying subjects related to life has aroused heated discussions in society. Some feel that it is better for their development to study subjects that are more relevant to life, while others believe that studying history is more important. In my opinion, studying history brings more rewards to a person.
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Some people think international cooperation has brought benefits to world environment protection, while some people think more benefits have been brought to international business. Discuss both views and give you own opinion.

In recent days, the topic of whether international cooperation helps environmental protection or promotes international business cooperation has aroused heated debates in society. I support the idea that international cooperation helps countries solve their own environmental problems, while others argue that it promotes business cooperation and thus increases profits.
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Rich countries often give financial aid to poor countries, but it does not solve poverty, so rich countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent days, the topic of whether rich countries should provide economic aid to poor countries or whether other forms of aid can help poor countries solve poverty problems has sparked heated discussions in society. Some people believe that providing economic aid is the key to solving poverty, while others believe that providing other forms of specific aid can better help poor countries solve poverty problems. In my view, providing other forms of aid can solve the fundamental problem of poverty in poor countries.
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Many people today prefer to socialise online rather than spend time with friends in the local community. To what extent do advantages outweigh disadvantages?

In recent days, there has been a heated discussion in society about whether people are more comfortable making friends online than in person. Some people think that making friends online is better, while others hold the opposite view. In my opinion, there are more benefits to making friends online than staying with real-life friends.
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The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease violent crimes in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Recently, a topic regarding whether controlling the number of violent images can reduce violent crimes in society has aroused heated discussions in society. Some people think that controlling the amount of violence in movies and TV can reduce violent crimes in society, while others think that the opposite is true. In my opinion, I am opposed to controlling the number of violent images to reduce violent crimes in society.
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13.Some people believe that it is a good idea to continue to work at their old age. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent days, a topic has ignited a heated debate in the community about whether postponing retirement is a good idea. Some are in favour of delaying retirement, while others hold the opposite view. In my opinion, I support delaying retirement and continuing to work in old age.
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Environmental problems are too big for individual countries and individual persons to address. In other words, we have reached the stage where the only way to protect the environment is at an international level. To what extent to you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In recent days, there has been a question about whether environmental problems are becoming more and more serious and have reached the stage where the environment needs protection at the international level. Some people think that individual countries and individuals are unable to solve the increasingly serious environmental problems, while others hold the opposite attitude. In my opinion, international cooperation is a crucial step in solving environmental problems.
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Some people think the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars and motorcycles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A debate has raged in recent days over whether the best way to improve road safety is to raise the minimum legal age to drive cars and motorcycles. Some people believe that improving the driving age is the best way to improve road safety, while others hold the opposite view. In my opinion, I think increasing the driving age is flawed and not the best way to improve road safety.
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Governments should lower arts budgets to allocate more money to education. Do you agree with this view?

It is believed art budgets needs to be reduced to increase money spending for education. I can not say that ''I completely agree with this opinion'' however, there are some acceptable sides of this recommend. Budgets planning to spend for artificial things should be decreased but it should not spend for any other thing unless governments have to spend it.
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Some people think children nowadays have too much freedom. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent days, a topic has aroused heated discussions in society about whether children nowadays have too much freedom. Some people think that today's children are too free and loose, while others think that children are not free enough. In my opinion, I approve of children having too much freedom.
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Some people argue that it is better to be unemployed than to be employed in jobs they do not enjoy. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent days, there has been a heated debate in society about whether it is better to be unemployed than to work in a job you don't like. Some believe they would rather choose to be unemployed than work in a job they don't like, while others hold the opposite view. In my opinion, I take issue with the idea that people would rather be unemployed than work in jobs that they don't like.
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Employers should give their staff at least a 4-week holiday a year. It can make them perform better in their work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Recently, the topic of whether an employer should provide employees with at least four weeks of vacation every year to make them perform better at work has aroused heated discussions in society. Some believe that offering vacation will make employees perform better, while others hold the opposite view. In my opinion, I am more against this view.
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11.Some people think it is more beneficial to play sports that are played in teams, e.g. football. Some people think individual sports e.g. tennis and swimming are better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In recent days, the topic of whether team sports or individual sports can bring more benefits to oneself has caused heated debates in society. Some people believe that team sports are more beneficial for a person's development, while others hold the opposite view. In my opinion, team sports are especially important for enhancing one's team spirit, confidence, and personal development.
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In some culture, children are being told that they can achieve anything if they work hard.What are advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

In certain societies, adults are assuring juveniles that they can attain anything if they work hard. This essay will first shed light on specific benefits of the aforementioned practice and then discuss its tremendous impediments.
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Nowaday, more and more people commit crimes. What are causes and solutions?

The number of crimes has increased day by day. People became used to the sudden messages telling them about their friends or other relatives grabbed by the police after doing something against the law. Moreover, most of the news recently are including information about new crimes. In my point of view, there are two main reasons for that: unemployment and inequality that happen in culture. However, the problem is not coming without any solution. This essay is written to spoil my offering about that.
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In some countries, younger people are neglecting their right to vote. What problems does this cause and what are some of the possible solutions?

It is argued that in certain nations youth are not using their right to vote. This would hinder the political change, and it would also result in policies made that are not beneficial for these young people. The most viable solutions would be to create awareness among the younger generation and promote them to participate in politics.
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