IELTS Writing Samples Band 6

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In the modertn era, fast-food restaurants are ubiquitous as they are indispensable for busy people. Regarding this, there are pros and cons to eat fast food. However, I strongly believe that the drawback of eating fast food overwhelm the benefit.
The education of young people is highly prioritized in many countries. However, educating adults who cannot write or read is even more important and governments should spend more money on this.
In this contemporary world, people are working from dawn to dusk for disposable money; however, there are a few who are managing to spare their time for leisure activities as well. In this essay, I will discuss how playing a sport or developing an art skill as a part of hobby can be benefitted individually as well as socially in general.
It has been observed that the proportion of elderly persons increasing day by day.Some people have the opinion that these graphs are dangerous for our nation.However, others believe that senior citizen is more important for society.Before arriving at my position both the sides of the argument will be analyzed further.
Nowadays, it is well known that many health issues are caused by overconsumption of sugar, which is on many proceed products. Many people suggest rising the price of these products to discourage consumers from buying them. In my opinion, this will not solve the problem, but the government should focus on people's education instead.
Nowadays, it is well known that many health issues are caused by overconsumption of sugar, which is on many proceed products. Many people suggest to rise the price on these products to discourage consumers from buying them. In my opinion, this will not solve the problem, but the government should focus on people's education instead.
Nowadays it is well known that many health issues are caused by overconsumption of sugar, which is on many proceed products. Many people suggest to rise the price on these products to discourage consumers from buying them. In my opinion, this will not solve the problem, but the government should focus on people's education instead.
Different countries have different legislations. Some countries have a law to restrict people of a certain age to work in some fields. That kind of restrictions may benefit the jobs that require physical fitness, but other intellectual works can have no age boundary, therefore, I believe such laws have positive as well as negative development.
Happiness in human beings is a part of life. Some believe, it comes after getting economically success, but others say that, it can be achieved in different ways. In my opinion, I believe economic success as well as other criterias in a person's life bring happiness.
Nowadays, mobile phones have become one of the essential factors for living in this era. The benefits of using this digital gadget are convenient application, availability and increasing utilities. To cessation mobile phone use might be very difficult, in this essay, the advantages and some disadvantages of mobile phone or smartphone usage will be explained.
Nowadays exploring the galaxy has become increasingly common around the world. However, some people think that the funds used on these projects could be used to strengthen countries. I totally agree with this opinion and believe that governments should use their money to improve their states' Well being care facilities and also improve roads.
In recent decades,its practical functions, which is a way for students to find better employment has been increasing emphasis by the general public.Others,however ,still insist that there should be additional benefits for individuals and society.
People have different opinions over whether music just provides enjoyment to people or not. Regarding this, some assert that music has a great power that influent on society in contemporary society. This essay will outline why they support each side and my view.
The education system should not force our children to learn a new foreign language because not all of them are mentally prepared to learn it. To that extent, I am partly in agreement due to the following reasons that I will explain in this essay.
In these modern days, processed foods and fizzy drinks are quite popular and they contain high level of sugar which can cause multiple health issues. It is argued that their prices should be higher in order to reduce sugar consumption. I totally agree with that as it would help decrease causing multiple diseases as well as make the population pick up better choices for their health.
The issue of smoking in public is constantly raising . Some hold the view that it's so harmful as smokers badly affect the air and the health of humans surrounding them , others have a divers view that they can act the way they want neglecting others needs and situations . In my opinion , I agree that the government should restrict smoking even ban it in parks and public transportation .My convention will be further explained .
In this present world, some children watch films in order to educate themselves in many areas which have many positive effects on them. in my opinion, watching films for educational reasons, appears to have negatives as well as positives. In this essay, we will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of this method of learning.
Students nowadays are under a lot of pressure to achieve academical success in order to get into a good university or secure a well paid job. For this reason some people argue that schools need to focus on academic subjects and vocational subjects should therefore not taught at schools. I would argue that while academic skills are important, schools need to teach a wide range of both academic and more skills-based subjects.
In today's world, crime rates are unprecedentedly high. There can be several reasons behind this, including unemployment and media influence, that I will elaborate on and provide some feasible solutions to in the following paragraphs.
TECHNOLOGICAL DEVICES HAVE BEEN ENTRANCED EVERY FIELD OF LIFE. IN RECENT YEARS, SOME PEOPLE HAVE BEEN ARGUING THAT THIS CHANGE HAS A DETRIMENTAL EFFECT ON PEOPLE'S FAMILY AND SOCIAL LIVES BASED ON THEIR PREFERENCE OF WATCHING TELEVISION INSTEAD OF SPENDING TIME WITH OTHER PEOPLE. I TOTALLY DISAGREE WITH THIS STATEMENT AND THIS ESSAY WILL EXPLAIN HOW TV SHOWS CAN ENHANCE PEOPLE RELATIONS.
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