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Fewer citizens go to their local museums and galleries than ever before. What are the causes of this? What can be done about this?

There has been a fall in the number of people going to local museums and galleries. This shows that people are not interested in their local history and art. In my view, the main reason for this is that new exciting topics are more appealing to people these days and to resolve this issue we can add relevant tours to school schemes to take students to local museums and displays. In this essay, we will discuss the causes of this trend and explain the viable solution to solve this problem.
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Some people think that government is responsible for the rise in obesity in children. Do you agree or disagree?

There is an opinion that authority contributes to the increasing numbers of offspring with overweight. I disagree with the viewpoint because it is impossible for politics to prevent unrelated problems, especially when the causes can come from many directions.
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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not only the reason why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some argue the importance of foreign language learning appropriate only for work or travelling purposes, while others assert that it is more than just work language and serves other purposes. In my opinion, I consider that people learning a foreign language have various purposes besides just travelling or work-oriented reasons.
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In many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that the government should have the responsibility. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, children's obesity is an ongoing issue in different countries all over the world, and this belief has been accepted by a vast majority of people that governments should face this current predicament and resolve it. In my opinion, governments play a crucial role to tackle this problem.
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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic wolrd. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In an opinion of some people, sharing a lot of information in the fields such as science, business and academics is beneficial for the society. But there are other people who think that critical information related to these fields should be kept secret. In my belief, I agree with both the views and I will present both the opinions in this essay.
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the role of women in society has changed dramatically over the last 100 years. Today, however, the burden on women continues to be heavy as a result of the numerous roles women are expected to fulfill. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Women have a role that changed significantly over centuries in communities. Nowadays, women have to fulfill different roles as many expectations which increases the burden on women should hold. However, in my perspective, I disagree with this issue. This essay will represent how my opinions will show.
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Some people think that having a set retirement age (e.g. 65 years) for everybody, regardless of occupation, is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age. Do you agree or disagree? Which types of workers do you think should benefit from early retirement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

According to some people fixed age of retirement for everybody irrespective of occupation ,is not justified as they think some kind of work poses more strain on the mental and physical health of the employee,so they should offer early retirement and pension to compensate for the extra load on health.I will elaborate further on this issue in the forthcoming paragraphs and I think it should be fair for police officers,military officers, teachers,typists and radio technicians.
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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays due to advancements in technology and the internet people can access books and newspapers online for free due to this there will be a decline in the use of printed media but I do not think it will completely wipe out the older form of communication and reading as it is not convenient for all age group and all classes of society and elaborate further in next paragraphs.
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Some people think that government should invest in saving local languages while others think its a waste of money. Discuss both views and your opinion.

In this day and age, a minor language is disappeard once in fortnight. It is generally acknowledged by certain individuals that local languages should be protected by the investment of governments. However, others believe that it is a waste of money. Regarding this, I strongly believe that govenments should allocate state funds to keeping local languages as well as other public services.
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Some people think that all popular TV entertainment programmes should aim to educate viewers on important social issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Without doubt, media analyst have debated whether television has any redeeming social value. It's often argued that famous TV shows must include raising awareness of life challenges. I completely agree with this opinion and I think social hurdles need to be included during prime-time.
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More and more people are leaving the countryside and moving to cities. Do the advantages of this trend outweighs the disadvantages.

In the present time, we can see a growth in the number of people who are moving to the cities from the countryside. In addition, many people in the countryside are more interested in living in the cities these days. I believe that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. In this essay, we will discuss the advantages of living in the cities like job opportunities and disadvantages like the cities becoming unmanageable.
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Some people say that now is the best time in history to be living. what is your opinion about this? what other time in history would be interesting to live in?

Some individuals believe that the current era is the best time period for living life than ever in history. I strongly agree with this statement and I would clarify what benefits this era has brought us.
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Nowdays it is easy to apply for and given a credit card. However,some people experience problems when they are not able to pay their debts back. In your opinion, do the advantages of credit cards outweigh the disadvantage?

Today,any eligible one can easily get a credit card. However, credit cards provide financial support while emergencies,but they also can be a tough time to repay. I strongly believe that the advantages and disadvantages of plastic money depend upon the user's mind.
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In the past, people wore their traditional clothes and followed their culture. These days, most people wear similar clothes and therefore look very similar to one another. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In the past, people used to wear their traditional clothing to preserve their culture which represents their identity and ancestors' behaviors. Nowadays, majority of the people in the world wear the same types of clothes that are difficult to distinguish each others. I also believe this new trend brings us many advantages that outnumber it's disadvantages so I will describe its benefits and argue drawbacks with reasons in this essay.
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More and more people are leaving the countryside and moving to the cities. Do the advantages of this trend outweighs the disadvantages.

In the present time, we can see a growth in the number of people who are moving to the cities from the countryside. moreover, many people in the countryside are more interested in living in the cities these days. I believe that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. In this essay, we will discuss the advantages of living in the cities like job opportunities and disadvantages like the cities becoming unmanageable.
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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people argue that opening a company by themselves is way more important to stay in an institution because they can gain profit from the company. However, owning an organisation is not easy and there are some negative influences.
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Some people think that private schools have many advantages while others think there have many drawbacks for the community. Discuss both sides and give an opinion

As a number of research, as well as any anecdotal evidence,pieces of ,evidence suggests that there are apparent merits of private schools,on the other hand, some people think that it brings demerits for the communities.In next paragraphs will discuss both sides and I think more or less private schools are beneficiary for localities as they provide high standards and competition for government-funded institutions.
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Some parents and teachers think that children's behaviour should be strictly controlled. While some think that children should be free to behave. Discuss both views and give your opinion

In modern times, the behaviour of children keeps changing day by day. Many parents and teachers believe that children's actions should be controlled rigorously. Some think that freedom to act should be given to children. In my opinion, some restrictions should be imposed on children's behaviour. I have discussed both the views related to the above-mentioned statement followed by my own opinion in the upcoming paragraphs.
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in Some Areas Of The US Teenagers Are Not Allowed To Be Out Of Doors After a Particular Time At Night unless they are accompanied by an adults

The Government of the US is concerned for the safety and well being of youngsters which is why they imposed a curfew to ensure the safety of teenagers. I am a strong advocate of this approach and I'll discuss my point of view in subsequent paragraphs.
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An increasing number of people are turning to vegetarians. Some people believe that people are following a vegetarian diet for reasons other than animal right. Do you agree?

Vegeterians are a group of people with a special diet, that mostly consists of consuming green food and avoiding meat or for some of them even all of the products that are being provided by animals. Being vegetarian is a new trend of the twentieth century, which protecting animals is said to be the main reason of choosing this lifestyle. However, it is noteworthy to bear in mind that is not the only factor and I believe the majority of them are pursuing other reasons. The following essay will overlook two of those rationales.
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