IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5. Page 167

IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Lives are very complex, and people have many challenges too. Nevertheless, there are bad things that they might experience too. One example is unsatisfactory jobs or a shortage of money. Nevertheless, I would argue that it cannot be avoided and making efforts to improve the circumstances is far better for some reasons which are out below.

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The government is spending a lot of money to discover life on other planets. Some people think that the government is wasting money and should spend more money addressing the problems of the public. To what extent do you agree?

The government is investing a significant amount of funds in other planets to look for possible life. In my opinion, although there are a number of issues regarding healthcare and education that the government should consider, I disagree that spending money on another planet is unnecessary.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In unpleasant conditions, a few people perceive that accepting bad situations, including a shortage of money or unsatisfactory jobs is for the best. Even so, others think that making an effort to improve those circumstances is a better way of handling it. Likewise, I personally believe that trying to fix it is the best option.

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In many countries today, if people want to find work, they have to move away from their friends and their families. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

It is true that people in many nations, more and more people are relocating to a new location far from their close ones to pursue their career. While there are some positive aspects of this trend, I believe that overall the benefits outweigh the drawbacks.

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The best way to solve traffic and transport problems is to encourage people to live in cities rather than in surburbs or countryside. What are the effects of rapid population growth in the city? How can the quality of life of city dwellers be maintained?

Overpopulation is a significant concern in today's world. Many people believe that residents tend to live in cities rather than the suburbs or countryside. The increase in population within cities can lead to numerous issues. In this essay, I will discuss the detrimental effects of overpopulation and feasible measures to address this challenge.

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Some believe it is the responsibility of government to take care of the environment, others think people are responsible for it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people think that the protection of the environment is the duty of the citizens because they can influence other people and make their children have self-awareness, whilst others believe that the government has more tasks which can take care of it. I agree with the second group because the states have the power to reduce pollution and arrange classes for educating citizens.

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Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is a constant argument about whether being competitive in every aspect of our lives or being cooperative outweighs one another. While a competitive mind is necessary in certain scenarios, I believe that everyone should develop the ability to cooperate.

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Animal extinction is one of the biggest environmental problems we face. What problems does this cause? What can be done to deal with this situation?

Nowadays there are numerous environmental problems in the world, and one of the biggest issues is animal extinction. Habitat issues, poachers, and climate have a huge effect on them. People are searching for solutions and already found some, like informing society with red books, social media, or creating reserves for them.For instance -The International Union for Conservation of Nature (IUCN) Red List of Threatened Species, also known as the IUCN Red List or Red Data Book, founded in 1964, is an inventory of the global conservation status and extinction risk of biological species. There are several national and international organizations that oversee the numerous non-profit animal sanctuaries and refuges to provide a general system for sanctuaries to follow. Among them, the American Sanctuary Association monitors and aids in various facilities to care for exotic wildlife.[8] The number of sanctuaries has substantially increased over the past few years.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

A large number of people hold the view that it is vital for kids to learn the definition of right and wrong. Some individuals believe that it is essential to treat them harshly to help them learn this difference. However, I think it is not a good idea because excessive punishment could hinder their development.

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Some people say that experiences a child has before starting schools have the most influence on their future life. Others say that experience as teenagers, especially at school, are more influential. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people might think that children can be influenced by what they experienced when they were infants. However, others believe that an adolescent's experience is more important. In my opinion, I believe the second statement is more accurate.

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It is important for everyone, including young people, to save money for their future. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

We are standing at the new dawn of the developed world. Therefore, some people suppose that saving money for the future is crucial for everyone including young residents. This essay will present some reasons why I am partly convinced by this statement.

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I.Currently, an increasing number of people compete with young people for the same jobs. What problems do this cause? What are the possible solutions for this?

Recently, heightened competition between age groups for jobs has led to the early retirement of capable senior employees and the demoralization of younger job seekers. To mitigate these issues, creating mentoring roles for older workers and implementing systems to provide information on current job distributions are effective strategies.

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Some people buy new models of phones, computers and other technology immidately while others prefer to buy after a while they launch. disuss both views and give your opinion.

Some individuals tend to purchase cutting-edge goods such as mobile and computers briskly when they are released for customers in the market, whereas others prefer to buy them after a while. In my opinion, buying modern goods quickly is not an effective option and people should be patient. Both perspectives require careful evaluation which will be discussed here.

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Some people think that university education should be free, while others believe students should pay for it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Although many people reckon that students should be required to pay for their studies at university, I agree with some groups of society who deny this and think it should be free because fee-based education might ignore social equality.

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Some university students want to learn about different subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Some university students are interested in learning about various subjects in addition to their primary subjects, whereas others think it is crucial to focus on their major subjects and allocate their time and attention in order to achieve their degree. In my opinion, learning about different subjects may lead to increased job opportunities and broaden their knowledge. To begin with, increasing job opportunities play a huge role in our society nowadays. Studying further topics can broaden their horizons, also possibly increasing their knowledge and learning about what people faced previously. All these factors lead to overcoming future mistakes and challenges which impact positively on their psychological well-being and mental health. For example, research has been conducted by Oxford University. If individuals learn about past challenging situations, these will influence significantly the progression of a human being. Focusing solely on main disciplines, and concentrating all effo...

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Robots and AI are being developed to replce humans in workplace. Why is this happening? Do you think this will have a positive or negative impact on society?

Working facilities will be replaced by robots and AI in the future. This is because they provide more things rapidly with their advanced software. This will not have an advantageous effect on society. This essay will explore several reasons with detailed explanations for both questions.

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People should be allowed to continue to work as long as the want to, and not be forced to retire at a particular age such as 60 or 65. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experiences.

In many countries, people are forced to retire after their 60s by the government. Some human beings think that they should be permitted to stay working whenever they want to stop. I totally disagree with this opinion, because they will be tired both physically and mentally, when they are older. Moreover, young generations should have the opportunity to have an occupation.

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Some people believe that public buildings should be moved out of the city, while some argue that the planning will cause more harm than good. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

We are living in a modern world in which we have full amenities such as services, education, technology, etc. However, it’s a fact that as the human world develops more and more, it has brought a plethora of consequences, especially environmental problems. Therefore, plenty of country leaders have devised a plan to move public buildings out of the city. While a lot of people who don’t suppose the idea, believe that the scheme will bring about more negative than good. From my perspective, I do not completely accept the solution and I will explain the reason why I think so.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

These days, advertising become one of the most important parts of businesses. Big companies compete with others to sell more than their competitors by emphasizing how their products are different from others. I am completely in favor of this idea and in this essay, I will talk about my opinion with examples.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Residing in a foreign country where you have to speak a language that is distinct from your mother tongue has several drawbacks. some people argue that this situation has social and practical difficulties. I strongly agree I strongly agree with this view because of the incapacities of finding new friend circles and a glass ceiling.

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