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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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Scientists agree that people are damaging their health by eating too much junk food.Some people think that the answer to this problem is to educate people.Others think education will not work. Discuss both views and give your opinion.?

Scientists believe that consuming fast food excessively has deleterious effects on consumers' health.While some people assert that to address this problem effectively,individuals should be educated as they are not aware of the negative effects of eating junk food,others,including me, consider that education may not be a good option because many people do not have other alternatives.

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Modern societies need specialists in certain fields, but not others. Some people therefore think that governments should pay university fees for students who study subjects that are needed by society. Those who choose to study less relevant subjects should not receive the government funding. Would the advantages of such an educational policy outweigh the disadvantages?

In every country, there are fashions among students about which subjects are the best to study at university. Sometimes the popularity of a subject is determined by how much money a graduate could subsequently earn in that field. Or subjects that are perceived as relatively 'easy' may also become popular, in spite of later difficulties of finding appropriate employment. It is up to governments to give incentives to students to choose subjects that match the needs of their society.

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Nowadays many people eat very badly in spite of the information which is available about ways to have a healthy, balanced diet. What could be the possible causes of this? Suggest some solutions which may improve the eating habits of the young.

In today’s fast-paced world, a variety of food choices which can cause health problems has been introduced to the public. This essay will first suggest that the main reason caused by this phenomenon is the lack of time and then argue that taking some actions in order to tackle this issue is the most viable solution.

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Some people believe that having sports in schools is a waste of time and resources, while others believe that sports in school are a vital part of education. Discuss both of these views and give your opinion

So many people believe that the main goal of going to school is to study different theoretical subjects and master them. They claim that playing sports is a waste of time. I completely disagree with this belief because the benefits of playing sports are vast. In this essay, I am going to explain why playing sport is important.

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Some people claim that there are more disadvandages of car ownership than advantages. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of having a car.

Few Individuals believe that using a car In day to life has more drawbacks than benefits. This essay will discuss the advantages along the disadvantages of this notion In forthcoming Paragraphs.

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Some people believe that allowing children to make their choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes, and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is an argument that children should participate in their daily matters however, some others assume that it makes kids individuals who just care about themselves. In this essay, I will debate both points of view and reveal my opinion in the conclusion part.

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Some people think that students should study in their own city. However, many students prefer to study far away from their home. Do the advantages of studying away from home outweigh the disadvantages

There is no denying that after finishing schooling, students pursue their higher education overseas and this trend is followed everywhere. Many students support this idea as it provides great benefits for their overall growth. On the other hand, some folks think they should stay in their city and study. In my perspective studying away from home brings numerous advantages. In the upcoming paragraphs, I am going to talk about both aspects.

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Many people say that the only way to guarantee getting a good job is to complete a course of university education. Others claim that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world of work. How far do you agree or disagree with the above views? It is probably true to say that most people believe that a university degree is the only way to get a good job.

I think this is true in certain areas, while in other areas, a degree is not as useful.

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Some people think that government should control the amount of violence in the films and TV programs, in order to reduce the crimes in the society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

New content is flooding out every day from each and every part of the world. Thus, producers are making content more provocative to attract people's attention over other productions. As this phenomenon is getting worse, some people argue that the government should regulate content. Others insist that this is the freedom of the production team and it should be respected. This essay will discuss this issue from a balanced perspective.

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Some people say that it is better to work for a large company than a small one. Do you agree or disagree?

Few people are inclined towards joining a bigger company than a small one. In my opinion, I disagree with this stance because, from an individual perspective, an employee will have more career growth and promotional opportunities in a small firm as their work will be visible to a greater extent.

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Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think consumers are influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect them?

Nowadays, there are a lot of competing companies leading to increasing numbers of advertisements, which can impact customers. In this essay, I will outline some reasons for this phenomenon, and discuss solutions to prevent customers from advertising competitions.

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People in some countries owning a home rather than renting one is considered very important. Why might this be the case? Is this a positive or negative development?

According to certain people, living in a temporary house is preferable to owning one in some countries. In this essay, I will discuss why renting can allow for a more flexible lifestyle but why it can eventually be financially disadvantageous.

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The government’s investment in arts, music and theater is a waste of money. Government should invest these funds in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

State's promotion in plays, songs and artifacts instead of people welfare is drain of wealth. Nations using it's resouses in arts, music and drama's is way of directing the nation's tresury into vain. On the contrary, Government should use the money in it's subject's interest. I do not agree with the statement . Following essay will explain how countrie's culture is promoted through songs, dramas and artifacts. Furturemore, essay will showcase emergence of unique talents through these promotions.

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In some part of the world, women are not allowed to vote. What is your opinion about this ?

While most countries permit women to cast a vote, few countries deny the right to female citizens. I completely disagree with this approach as it violates the basic rights of a citizen as well as disturbs the equality of a nation.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, people are more aware of the fact that the labour market is becoming more competitive than ever before. It therefore leads to the question of whether or not we should expect children to learn at a younger age, especially a foreign language. In this essay, I will discuss both views and give out the reasons as well as show my opinion on the topic.

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In the modern world there is a movement away from written exams to more practical assessment. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

Testing students and workers takes various forms including written, oral and practical assessment. However, although written tests are still the most popular way to check achievements at work and university, a range of alternative methods like problem-solving, role-play, oral presentation and work-based assessment are becoming more common. Both approaches to evaluating student attainment are valid, but each tests different things.

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Many people believe that today there is a general increase in anti-social behaviour and lack of respect for others. What might have caused this situation? What solutions can you suggest?

In today's world, negative behaviour towards social issues and a lack of respect for others have been observed on a substantial scale. In my opinion, less parental involvement in teaching children is the key cause behind this trend, while my possible suggestion involves raising awareness about respect.

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It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environments, such as the South Pole. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

Secluded and distant territories, such as the South Pole, conceal massive undiscovered mysteries and phenomena that captivate the scientists to investigate. Not only do scientists find it appealing, but its magnificent landscape and wildlife diversity also draw numerous voyagers. This situation obviously engenders potential consequences if left unsupervised.

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Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like soccer while other people believe that taking part in individual sports is better, like tennis or swimming. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In today's society, the debate between the merits of team sports versus individual sports is a topic of considerable discussion. While some argue that team sports foster camaraderie and cooperation, others advocate for the personal development and self-reliance promoted by individual sports. This essay agrees with the latter because it is more beneficial.

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Some argue that there is no point in spending money on wildlife protection because we humans have no need for them. I totally disagree with this view.

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