IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5. Page 347

IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The argument about whether education providers must be accountable has been gaining momentum across the world in recent times. While many people argue that guardians should incorporate good behaviour in their children, others believe that school is the most appropriate location for this. Both views of this topic will be carefully analysed before constructing an inference.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

University education offers a plethora of majors and subjects to study about. However, because of that freedom, there are different points of view about whether college students should just dedicate their time and effort to finish what they started, or to broaden their horizons by learning various different subjects than their main one. Both points of view will be discussed further in this essay.

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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent to do agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

Nowadays, the increasing number of vehicles in cities is a pressing issue that must be addressed. While some people claim that a rise in fuel prices would lead to a decline in traffic and pollutant emissions, I totally disagree with this point of view. The purpose of this essay is to express the reasons for my opinion and to present some solutions to this situation.

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Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places?

Many museums and historical sites have become attractions to tourists although they fail to increase the number of local visitors. This essay will analyze some main reasons for this as well as measures to encourage more people to visit such places.

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Some people believe that the best way to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other private vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the contemporary era, pollution is a threat to humankind due to the daily use of cars all over the world. A proportion believe that the increased cost of fossil fuel for motors may reduce contamination issues. The increase in price may not be a good solution however it will not affect rich people instead it may unbalance poor people’s lives, especially those who are using wagons for small businesses on a daily basis. Authorities must opt for other options such as electric and hybrid vehicles. This essay will discuss both views.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In today's world, a plethora of children spend considerable time on their smartphones, and this has become a common trend. While a number of people believe that it's the parent's duty to control smartphone usage, there are also a group of people who think the opposite. I somewhat agree with that, on the contrary, I also think that the internet and communal networks can be good tools for education and broadening horizons.

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Some people think that spending a lot on holding weddings, birthday parties and other celebrations is just a waste of money. Others, however think that these are necessary for individuals and the society. Discuss both views.

Some are of the opinion that parties like weddings, birthdays and other sort of celebrations are important for the person and society. However, there are other kinds of individuals with the opinion that throwing this celebration is a waste of money. This essay will discuss both views.

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Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

One of the most controversial issues in modern society is which platform is preferable for learners for education. There are those who say that being educated in school is more fruitful, while others believe studying through the Internet is a better option. In this essay, I will examine both views and my overall opinion.

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𝘼𝙡𝙩𝙝𝙤𝙪𝙜𝙝 𝙛𝙖𝙢𝙞𝙡𝙮 𝙝𝙖𝙨 𝙖 𝙜𝙧𝙚𝙖𝙩 𝙞𝙣𝙛𝙡𝙪𝙚𝙣𝙘𝙚 𝙤𝙣 𝙘𝙝𝙞𝙡𝙙𝙧𝙚𝙣'𝙨 𝙡𝙞𝙛𝙚, 𝙞𝙩 𝙞𝙨 𝙞𝙣𝙛𝙡𝙪𝙚𝙣𝙘𝙚𝙨 𝙛𝙧𝙤𝙢 𝙤𝙪𝙩𝙨𝙞𝙙𝙚 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙝𝙤𝙢𝙚 𝙩𝙝𝙖𝙩 𝙥𝙡𝙖𝙮 𝙖 𝙗𝙞𝙜𝙜𝙚𝙧 𝙥𝙖𝙧𝙩 𝙞𝙣 𝙩𝙝𝙚𝙞𝙧 𝙙𝙚𝙫𝙚𝙡𝙤𝙥𝙢𝙚𝙣𝙩. 𝙏𝙤 𝙬𝙝𝙖𝙩 𝙚𝙭𝙩𝙚𝙣𝙩 𝙙𝙤 𝙮𝙤𝙪 𝙖𝙜𝙧𝙚𝙚 𝙤𝙧 𝙙𝙞𝙨𝙖𝙜𝙧𝙚𝙚?

In the contemporary world, the virtue of advanced living standards has brought a major improvement in children’s development, leading to a considerable debate about whether the role of external impacts or family importance, plays a more crucial role in a child’s progression. This essay contends that while the family role is significant, outside factors play a vital role in shaping youngster’s growth and perspectives.

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Topic: Spoken communication is always more powerful than written communication. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

In the modern technological era, whereas the majority of people are in favour of oral interactions with each other, written communication has a crucial role among people of all ages. I will highlight both of these views in the following paragraphs.

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Some children spend hours everyday on their smartphones. What is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative developmnet?

Modern kids' smartphone addiction has been progressing over the last ten years. Some people believe this could be a problem for themselves and for the future of our world. It is agreed that mobile phone obsession is a negative trend. This essay will shed some light on the issue and discuss several reasons for its occurrence.

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Some people believe that the best way to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other private vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent decades, environmental degradation has become a major concern for many nations. While some people argue that raising the price of fuel is the most effective way to tackle this issue, I believe that other measures should be prioritized.

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In nations that have already gained great wealth, any additional economic prosperity would not make people more satisfied. Do you agree or disagree?

There has been long a widespread public debate surrounding the effect of extra-economic prosperity on more happiness of civilians. a number of family argue that in super-rich countries, any extra-economic richness would not enable their population to be more pleased. However, I completely disagree with the idea for various reasons.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is being said that the main purpose of exploration is that it should be able to have advantages in society's lives. I completely agree with this statement, because studies are usually conducted with the funds that are collected from the population and it has the opportunity to make various activities in different fields easier to do.

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Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some argue that there should be a standardized punishment for every type of criminal act because it allows the court to have equal rules. Others think that the perpetrator’s background should be considered and this essay believes that some crimes are driven by unfavourable situations thus they do not have other choices.

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Some people think that economic progress is the only way to end poverty while others believe that it is causing damage to the environment and so should be stopped. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some argue that the economic progression threatens the environment and should be ceased. Conversely, others think that supporting economic growth is the only way to put an end to poverty and this essay agrees with this statement because a positive climate provides employment to people.

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Many people find it hard to balance their work with other parts of their lives. What problems does this cause? How can this problem be overcome?

Work-life balance has been a common discussion among younger generations as they have more tendencies to care about their mental health compared to older generations. Alas, a vast majority of people find it hard to find a harmony between job performance and personal well-being. This particular issue may be caused by the intense working ambition which overshadows the need to fulfil other life aspects. In this essay, I will talk about the way to overcome this setback.

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As well as making money, businesses have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

While nowadays, all the companies strive to make more money with the aim of skyrocketing their annual profits, some argue that these businesses must consider the other aspects namely investments in social activities. I concur although the main goal of managers is to improve their financial states, they have to do their social role.

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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some argue that encouraging juveniles to be competitive is important because the sense of competition will motivate them to pursue their dreams. Conversely, others think that children should learn to be cooperative to become useful grown-ups because they will have to collaborate with others in real life. This essay agrees with the later statement.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people argue that in an age marked by unprecedented scientific advancements, the paramount goal of science should fundamentally be directed toward improving the lives of individuals with any aspects to support human life become more convenient and flourish. I completely with this view and will explain in detail on reason supporting this viewpoint.

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