IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5. Page 659

IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects- Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some individuals believe that History is one of the most valuable classes in school. However, others think that Science and Technology are more useful for the development of society. In this essay, I will discuss both these views and explain why I believe that History has its special value in the education of young people.

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Many companies use advertisements to increase sales. What are the main reasons that make an advertisement effective? Is it a good thing or a bad thing for society.

In recent times, commercial advertisement attracts common people and the companies are seeing a boost in their sales. In this essay, I will suggest a few reasons that production companies use various techniques to make the advertisements effective, also I think advertisement urge consumers to purchase unnecessary products and that have a negative effect on society.

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Bullying is a big problem in many schools. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Bullying is becoming a greater affair nowadays in many educational institutes which can lead to cognitive issues among children and youths. It can be addressed and minimized by taking strict punishment and educational awareness by school boards and communities.

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Working from home benefits workers and not employers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Today's virtual life and the compulsory social distancing due to the recent pandemic revolutionised the working styles and moved employees from workplaces to their homes. It is being said that it has been a positive development for employees while employers are being suffered from; however, I am convinced that this phenomenon has both positive and negative sides to it for both parties.

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the growth of onilne shopping will one day lead to close all shops in towns do you agree or disagree?

From last some years business to consumer become very popular. It is helping small retailers to grow their business also some of their shops are closing down due to B2C. I totally disagree with these statements states and in the next ,paragraph I will discuss both aspects and review them.

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Some people think computers and the Internet are important in children's study, but others think students can learn more effectively in schools and with teachers. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

How students study and learn today, both at home and school, are radically different from the past, thanks to the increased availability and relatively low price of modern technology which is instrumental in this change. However, I strongly believe that while modern technologies are important in assisting a child's learning, this learning should be guided and directed by the experience of human teachers.

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Many young people today know more about international pop or movie stars than about famous people in the history of their own country. Why is this? What can be done to increase young people’s interest in famous people in the history of their country?

In this contemporary era, most youngsters recognise celebraties from movies and pop industry around the world but know very less about the people from the past from their own countries. In this essay, we will discuss the possible reasons and find solutions.

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Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is true that some people are either unaware or not concerned about climate change and the numerous natural calamities that are caused by it. They feel it is useless trying to prevent it and the best option is to live with it. I feel this attitude is absolutely unacceptable. Climate change is caused by humans and hence, it is our responsibility to take the necessary steps to prevent it. In this essay, I will discuss why I feel so, giving examples from my own knowledge and experience.

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Nowadays more and more older people who need employment have to compete with younger people for the same jobs. What problems does this cause? What are the solutions?

Ageism is one of the major reasons why many senior to mid-level working individuals are caught up competing with younger individuals for the same job position. In the following sentences, I will discuss what may cause such a recent trend and any reasonable remedies which might address the necessity of a generational turnover.

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people should recycled the waste and government also have to make a law are you agree or not?

Although many people are inclined to think that mankind ought to recycle the used products and authorities need to impose laws in the community. I, completely agree with this notion. My position is justified further with reasons and examples.

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Some people feel that certain workers like nurses, doctors and teachers are undervalued and should be paid more, especially when other people like film actors or company bosses are paid huge sums of money that are out of proportion to the importance of the work that they do. -How far do you agree? -What criteria should be used to decide how much people are paid?

There are some individuals who think that healthcare workers, as well as teachers, get paid insufficiently and lesser than others such as celebrities or CEO of companies whereas other groups of people believe that the payments of nurses, doctors and teachers are reasonable and filmmakers have the right to have a high salary. From my perspective, I absolutely think that all professional workers should get paid adequately according to their jobs.

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In the future all cars, buses, and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles would be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

In the coming years, transportation like buses and trucks will be driven without drivers. So that passengers can be travelled with driverless vehicles. In this essay, I will provide both advantages and disadvantages and I argue the fact that the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantage.

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In some countries, younger people are neglecting their right to vote. What problems does this cause and what are some of the possible solutions?

In many countries, presenting of skipping votes is made by young citizens. The primary problems are decreases in countries' developments and corruption among politicians. The most viable solutions are the implementation of new rules and teaching children how important voting is.

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In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Population ageing is a pressing issue for many developed countries. One of the challenges is how to take care of the elderly. In some countries, a nursing home, instead of a family, takes on the role but who should pay the bill? Many people think it is the duty of family members to support their parents, if not personally then financially. Others think, like medicare and other welfare, it should be paid for by the government, which is by the taxpayers. I think the government should pay the bill because individuals cannot fund such a big business and even if they can it only widens the gap between the rich and the poor.

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Some people think the money spent on developing technology for space exploration is not justified. They are more beneficial ways to spend this money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The precedence of expending wealth on space exploration which was always a hotly debatable topic has now become more controversial. The copious folk petition that capital should be consumed on the paramount and fundamental needs of humans. I firmly believe and withstand the given view. This essay will further elaborate on my views in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Some people say that the is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Other say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both view and your opinion.

"What to do to enhance the health level of the public?" This question has been a major concern for many. While certain individuals might think that the most effective way to tackle this problem is to increase the number of sports facilities, I generally tend to believe that more efforts should be made.

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Some people believe that children should be given some freedom to make mistakes, while others argue that adults should prevent them from doing so. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

A number of parents do not allow their kids to experiment while on the other hand plenty of them think otherwise. In my opinion, I strongly believe kids should be given the liberty to make mistakes however, it should be done under parent's observation. There are also drawbacks to such freedom as it may cost a serious threat to a child's life.

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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

For the last two ,years prices of fossil fuels are constantly increasing. It became a major issue in public. Individuals thought that if the value of combustion increases then normal people will minimise their usage but I am fully against the statement and in the next ,positions I will discuss both aspects and provide a useful solution.

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Some people think that the fast-food industry has had negative effects on health issues, the environment, and family eating habits. Do you agree or disagree?.

Some people contend that the junk food industry causing detrimental effects on consumers’ health and this negative development has impacted not only the environment as well as it has changed drastically the way family members eating habits. I advocate these viewpoints and I will argue in this essay on what are the consequences that lead to health deterioration, and environmental problems and demoralize the values of the families feasting together and preferring ready-made unhealthy food items.

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The recent popularity of online shopping will result in the end of the high street shops. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Online shopping is the newly flourished trade business in society. Its popularity will affect the retail shopping streets and may obsolete it over the high street market in near future. I firmly disbelieve in it, even though the online market is indeed convenient and cost-effective, however, local markets will remain demanding and more sustainable.

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