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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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Some people argue that job satisfaction is more important than job security. while others believe that they cannot always expect job satisfaction and a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion

There are tremendously controversial perspectives heating a debate over an ideal job. While some hold a strong view that vocation gratification is of the essence, the opposite makes a statement that a stable job is more crucial. Although each has its own perk, I would contend that it is optimal to combine both mentioned facets

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some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the acedemic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many people in the public think that sharing information with other countries is becoming important, especially in terms of scientific, technical, and academic values. However, it could be argued that others believe that the limited knowledge should keep as a secret. This essay discusses both sides of view.

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Labour-saving devices such as dishwashers and communication tools such as computers are supposed to make our lives easier. However, some people argue that these devices only make them more difficult. Does modern technology reduce or increase stress? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

In the last decade, there have been numerous inventions aimed at making life less stressful. While these have received positive feedback, some individuals believe that they cause more challenges.

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Cheaper food is now available because of greater use of fertilizers and improved machinery. This improved production, however, can be harmful to individuals and the community. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view? Discuss, including examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Nowadays as technology expanded in every field like food , clothes and even machines for house chores. So that some people argue that such machinery and fertilizers make food available at a minimal cost, while other groups suggest that despite having production in food it gives detrimental effects to humans and society as well. I agree with these notions. My arguments can be justified further in the ensuing paragraphs.

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Some people think that children should study in school the subject of science of food and how to prepare it properly. Other think it is a waste of time, because there are more important subjects to study. Discuss both views and give your opinion with reasons and relevant examples."

Some may argue that children should have the subject of the science of nourishment in their study curriculum and they should learn to provide cooking properly, However, others believe that children have more vital subjects to study and it is squandered of time. I am opposed to the latter view and believe students need to learn to cook.

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Some people think that having a set retirement age (e.g. 65 years) for everybody, regardless of occupation, is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age. Do you agree or disagree? Which types of workers do you think should benefit from early retirement?

Nowadays , retiring from a job over 60 years becomes more popular in many countries . However , some people believe that this should have an exception for some employees like doctors and also need to give proper social security system.In this essay , I will explain more details in the following paragraphs and then I will give my own opinion .

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It is generally accepted that families are not as close as they used to be Give some reasons why this change has happened and suggest how families could be brought closer together Include any relevant example from your experience

It is widely believed that people from the same families do not have a close relationship in contrast to the old days. In my opinion, this happens because of the generation gap and time, so the way to solve this problem is that people should find free time to have a conversation or travelling to other places together.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

In today's fast transitioning world to meet the people's needs the industries are formulating new ideas/plans to sustain their position in the competitive market.Amongst that is the increase in the number of online store's and I agree to the foreseeable outcome of the outlet's closure in many part's of the country

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In some countries, there are not enough medical and educational facilities in rural areas. Some people believe newly graduated teachers and doctors should be sent to rural areas to work for some time, while others suggest that people should be free to choose a place to work. Discuss both views and give your opinion."

Due to the lack of specialised hospitals and educational institutions in the rural areas, it is suggested by some individuals that newly fresh out graduates should be sent to these areas for a few years. Others disagree with this notion and say that choice of work should be left on these individuals. This essay intends to discuss both views as well my opinion in the subsequent paragraph. I, however, side with the former view.

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Some people say that travelling abroad is necessary to get knowledge about other countries, while others suggest that TV and the internet can also help people know about foreign countries. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People have distinctive opinions about whether to learn about other regions in the world through televisions and the internet or by trips. While the information on TV and the internet can be helpful, I believe that travelling abroad is a better option for learning about foreign countries.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

Childhood is essential to people. In this period, we build our values. How to educate offspring is widely discussed. In this theme, if the punishments should be applied to children is become a focus. For this focus, I have some opinions.

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Some poeple say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this?

Cleanliness is next to godliness and it leads as a healthy and good life. Although, it is sometimes thought to keep home neat and clean is important and it can be done by organizing things in the correct place. In my opinion, I considered that home and workplace should tidy as it provides immense benefits.

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Some school leavers travel or work for a period of time instead of going directly to the university. What are the advantages or disadvantages?

Deciding career pathways and academic pathways immediately after graduating from high school is a controversial topic in society. Many people hold the opinion that enrolling on further education has many benefits. Others, however, believe that there are many more drawbacks to becoming undergraduate students. Whilst, entering an educational institution soon after year 12 is advantageous in a few aspects, I agree that there are much more positivities of taking gap years for travelling and working because of opportunities to gain life experience and to earn their living.

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In some cultures children are often told that can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

In many traditions, parents always teach their offspring that if they work hard enough, they can complete anything they would like. Although this message can provide a number of benefits, it can also disappoint them.

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Some teachers think that international student exchange would be beneficial for all teenage school students. Do you think its advantages will outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent years, the popularity of international student exchange has increased. While some teachers say that this programme would benefit all teenage school students, others suggest it would not help at all. In this essay, I will examine the possible advantages and disadvantages of the initiative and explain why I think that it would bring more benefits.

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In order to study at university students are required to pay expensive fees. Not all students can afford them so some people think that university education should be free for everyone. To what extent do you argree?

pay for higher discipline are expensive and not affordable for everyone so according to some universities should be free for all people regardless of their background. In my opinion , I agree that educational institution science ought to be free as it will greatly benefit both individuals and society.

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Pollution of rivers, lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment. What are the possible causes of water pollution, and what effects does this have on animal life and human society?

The topic of contamination of water areas becoming increasingly actual nowadays.A lot of people all over the world paid attention to this concern .So let us this topic more deeply .

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Children nowadays watch significantly more television than in the past, which reduces their activity levels accordingly why is this the case? What measures can you suggest to encourage higher levels of activity among children

It is not a secret that since technology has progressed, such phenomena as the sedentary lifestyle spread rapidly among people, and juveniles are not an exception. Thus, the dilemma of what should be done in order to attain a higher level of activity among youngsters. Below I going to explore this thought-provoking topic, underlying the following solutions: sport inspiration and

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More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universitis in foreign countries. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

It is undeniable that many people thought that studying in foreign countries have more potential than studying in their countries, in terms of knowledge and successful career paths because of the quality of the education system in foreign countries. The following paragraph will be discussing advantages that outweigh disadvantages. Therefore, the conclusion has been reached.

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Even Though doctors all over the world agree that fast food is bad for people’s health, more and more people are eating it. Why are more people eating fast food? What can be done about this problem?

We still have more folks consuming junk meals despite the fact that physicians worldwide have condemned it because of its effect on their health. In this essay, we will discuss the causes why more people are eating unhealthy food, such as: it is quite available and affordable. Furthermore, we will discuss what can be done to abate the problem, like increasing the levy and having few opening hours per day.

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