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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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Nowadays, a lot of offices employ open-space designs instead of separate rooms for work. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

In today's advanced world,science and technology have helped improve all aspects of our life even in the workplace.Yesteryears, most office staffs had worked from a private room;however,at present, the scenario has changed and the entity provides open space instead of a personal cabin.Working from an open area has a myriad of benefits for the employers;however,it can also affect them negatively in certain instances.Even though this trend has both advantages and disadvantages ,the former outshines the latter.

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Nowadays, a lot of offices employ open-space designs instead of separate rooms for work. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Most companies are designed to be open offices instead of separate areas. In my opinion, although an open area environment would have some drawbacks such as a noisy place, its benefits are much greater which provide effectiveness and an airy atmosphere.

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In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Nowadays, youngsters often follow the news on social media rather than in the newspapers or TV. I firmly believe it has happened because social media are more handy and comfortable to use. This essay will examine the causes of this and give some suggestions before conducting a reasonable conclusion.

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Some people believe that individuals who earn a lot of money are the most successful. Others say that the individuals who contribute to the society (such as scientists or teachers) are the most successful. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Presently, there has been great competitiveness amongst different occupations. According to some people, success is only measured by the amount of money being earned, while others believe that professionals such as teachers and scientists who are making a difference in society are the most successful. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument in detail and provide evidence as to why occupations that give back to the community should be considered highly successful.

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Traffic and housing problems in major cities could be solved by moving large companies and factories and their employees to the countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Nowadays the enormous numbers of slow-moving cars in the streets of overpopulated cities within the high rent and low capacity in accommodation have converted life into a nightmare. These complications are mostly caused by huge companies and factories as they required an area for their employees as well as themselves and surprisingly to tackle the issue some have suggested moving out these establishments to the surroundings which is just a temporary approach rather than a permanent answer to mentioned topics.

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Some people argue that air travel should be restricted due to pollution and excessive fuel consumption. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Some may opine that restriction of air travel because of its contamination and fuel consumption should be considered. I completely disagree with this abovesaid since it has adverse effects on the countries' revenue and damages people's quality of life.

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Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in a country’s police force or military force, while others think women are not suitable for these kinds of jobs. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Currently, the role of women in a country's police force or military force has never failed to provoke debates. While some claim that women are not suitable for these kinds of jobs, the opposite makes a statement that women still play an equal role in these fields. This essay is devoted to discussing both views and showing my opinion which agrees with the latter perspective.

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Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?

A lot of the population have a preference for residing in the home, whereas there are many who think that living in rented apartments possess more advantages. Although there are some challenges the society have to face of living in own building, they will also attain significant merits . In my opinion, residents benefit largely from owning houses despite the hardships they have to inevitably face.

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An increasing number of people are changing their careers. What are the reasons? Do you think it is positive or negative?

In the recent era, it is very common that people do not stick to one job over their lifetimes. In this essay, I will analyze the factors of this trend and the effects caused by this phenomenon.

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Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Day by day, the rate of corruption in the world is increasing rapidly and there are many ways both individuals and government should do to reduce the breach in the society. The argument that the best method to decrease the number of transgressions is a long date lockup suffering or many other ways are better is a subject that is both supported and refuted by many. Analysing both sides of this argument will be analysed before a conclusion is given.

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Computers today can quickly and accurately translate languages; therefore, it is a waste of time to learn a foreign language. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Learning of non-native language is not necessary because we have electronic translators that can do it fast and correctly. This is how advanced we have come with respect to using technology to enhance our daily lives. However, I completely disagree that the acquisition of a foreign dialect is an exercise in futility, and in this essay, I will be discussing my views below.

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computers are becoming an essential part of school lessons. discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion

Uniform is considered an important part of any school curriculum in form of a logo or particular colour because it represents a distinctive feature of it. Nowadays Every Insititute prefers to have their dress for their pupils. Some people agree with this statement however, others opine, against it. I am completely in favour of the above-mentioned statement. In this essay, I will explain my agreement with the same with some examples.

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Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Conducting scientific research is a rather complicated process and requires a high degree of attention to avoid undesirable consequences. It is pointed out that when an investigation is initiated in a scientific field, the government should oversee and manage the process, not non-governmental institutions. I believe that this argument is valid in many ways and I agree with it wholeheartedly.

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Some people think that single-sex schools are better than mixed schools. Others believe that mixed-sex schools are the only way for children to learn. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion

It is believed by some people that their children can learn better in single-gender schools, while according to few people, mixed gender schools give a better opportunity to children to learn and prepare for future. In my opinion, both have their own benefits but in the end, our goal should be to prepare our child to withstand in mixed-gender work culture.

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Many feel that happiness is mainly an individual responsibility while others feel that there are important external factors. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Happiness is an important feeling that enables individuals to thrive. While some people are of the opinion that this feeling can be derived and also depends largely on external factors ,others believe that our happiness should be controlled solely by us. I concur with the notion that our happiness is hugely dependent on factors around us. This essay would be discussing the two sides citing relevant examples.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

It is true that recently the number of people who are curious about the history of the place they live in has been increasing. They have different reasons for doing so, and definitely, there are some places that they can find the information they want.

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Children who are brought up in families that do not have large amounts of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children brought up by wealthy parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Children are affected in various ways by the economic conditions of their families. It is suggested that children of families suffering from a range of financial problems are able to overcome adverse circumstances because lack of money leads to some domestic problems and children acquire the ability to cope with problems. Although I agree with this argument to some extent, I would argue that generalization is not the right approach.

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Prision is the best punishment for criminals. Do you agree or disagree?

There are so many types of crimes in our life. Ranging from simple crimes to serious crimes: from theft to murder. Each of which will be punished accordingly. In some countries, anyone who violates the law is punishable by confinement. In this essay, I will try to look at the pros and cons of incarceration as a solution to sanction.

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Art is considered an important part of the society as well as an expression of its culture. Do you think it is important for the children to be taught art? Do you think children should be encouraged to focus on art rather than other subjects?

Art plays a vital role in depicting the culture of its society. It is asserted by some people that learning creative activities for children is of great importance. I completely advocate this assertion based on some rational reasons. However, I opine that children should not pay more attention to this subject rather than other ones.

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Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age. Others think they should begin after 7 years of age. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Commencing the educational age for youngsters has always been a topic of debate. While a decent percentage of individuals insist that it must start at a very young age, others opine that young individuals should begin at age 7 years. Personally, I strongly advocate the latter view as they will be completely developed and well-shaped and most importantly they still have enough time to join schools. This essay will explain more in detail using Iraqi youngsters as an example to demonstrate points and prove arguments.

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