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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what is your opinion should be done about it.

Nowadays an increased unemployment rate can be found among graduates. In this essay, I will present some of the reasons for this situation, and then I will suggest what companies and universities should do to solve this issue.

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Multicultural societies, where people of different groups live together, can bring more benefits than drawbacks to a country. To what extent do you agree and disagree?

Globalisation helps in melting the geographical boundaries and brings distinctive societies together. Some people think that mixing different culture has more positive outcomes than negative impacts. I agree with the statement and presenting some points in favour of it.

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Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be? Should governments give more financial support to local film industries?

The recent phenomenon has quite concerned about the fact that a large majority of people choose to watch foreign films compared with domestic produced films. There are several reasons for this trend and why governments should give more financial support to promote local movies associated with tourism sectors, further explained in the following paragraph.

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after Completing High School and Before Going to College or university, some students take a year off either to work or travel. What do you think is better – travelling or working. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both approaches.

TAKING BREAK FROM STUDY AFTER COMPLETING SCHOOL FOR TRAVELLING AND WORKING. WHILE ACCORDING TO MY PERSPECTIVE,THEY SHOULD TAKE BREAK FOR ACADEMIC AND THIS ESSAY WILL EXPLAIN BOTH PROS AND COINS IN FOLLOWING PARAGRAPHS WITH SUITABLE EXAMP

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People have historically attempted to achieve a perfect society. However, it is difficult to decide what a perfect society would be like. What would be the most important element of an ideal society? How can people work towards achieving an ideal society?

It is an irrefutable fact that throughout history, mankind wanted to build a utopian society. Nevertheless, the definition of an ideal society can vary from person to person. Therefore, it has always been difficult to build a perfect place to live. The following paragraphs will analyze the determining elements of a utopia, and highlight actions to achieve it.

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Watching a live performance such as a play, concert, or sporting event is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Live events are gaining momentum and being encouraged in this current generation. Attending live events like music shows, sports have more fun element than viewing the same on Television. I completely agree with this statement as it adds liveliness to the situation and provides more entertainment than the latter. In this essay, I will discuss both views and provide supporting examples to back up my opinion.

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Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are split opinions about the life of teenagers and adult age. Some communities believe that under 18 time is jovial times for most crowd whereas another group of thinkers support above 18 years of age people have more fun in spite of greater responsibilities.

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In many professional sports, there is an increase in the number of athletes using banned substances to improve their performance. What are the causes of the phenomenon and what are some of the possible solution?

Sports’ professional competitions are witnessing a spread of doping amongst players in order to enhance their performance. This could be attributed to the desire of gaining more muscles as well as to speed up an injury recovery; hence, such matter could be tackled by imposing strict laws against steroids and running awareness campaigns of their side effects.

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In many western countries there are an increasing number of couples choosing to have no children. What are the advantages and disadvantages to couples having no children?

It is true that there has been a rise in the number of married couples who do not want to bring children into the world. The main pro of trend is it allows them to live a carefree life; however, it has adverse effects on their future. In this essay, I will discuss the merits and demerits of having no kid; but as per my ,opinion the decision is inappropriate.

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More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?

An increasing number of people are seeking opportunities to moving to cities for better lives. In my opinion, megacities are genuinely full of chances, but also is challenging. Government plays an essential role in solving these difficulties.

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Some people say, that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we do longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

According to certain people promotion used by companies tricks the public into purchasing products. While others believe that due to the reason that we are overwhelmed by ads, they do not affect our buying behaviour. In this essay I will take a look at both sides of the argument, however, I firmly believe that advertisement does not have the same level of impact as it used to.

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Some people believe that a zoo has no useful purpose. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

It is argued that captivating fauna in cages for the public to see them is not justified. I completely disagree with this as a zoo can save endangered species from extinction, in addition to that, it supports states economically and it is a helpful educational tool.

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Some people feel that entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of job should be highly paid? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is true that a person needs to be special, talented and hardworking to become successful in their work or profession. However, there are certain jobs which are paid very high in comparison with other jobs. Famous celebrities like movie actors, singers and sportsperson, earn huge amounts of remuneration. In this essay, we will discuss the reason why some people feel that the abovementioned stars are overpaid and the other type of jobs that deserve to be highly paid.

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University should accept equal number of male and female students in every university. To what extend do you agree or disagree??

It has been debatable for a long time whether should have equal chances to access both genders in every university or not. In my opinion, I strongly agree that both males and females should get the same opportunity since all are human beings.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Being a modern society nowadays, there are piles of new information generated every day. It is not difficult to see the existence of data exchange freely which is happening among the academic and business world. Some think that those stakeholders would benefit from sharing information that contributes to human society. The others, however, worry about the provision of information without charges may give rise to the problem of privacy and copyright.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantage of being self-employed?

In the modern era, a number of individuals opt to become entrepreneurs instead of working for other organisations or companies. This essay shall delve into the causes of the growing trend and discuss some possible demerits of running own business.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

A future filled with driverless vehicles is an inevitability. In my opinion, while there are concomitant moral risks, the practical import for the health of such a seismic shift will be positive on the whole.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary schools.

A school of thought holds that learning an additional language at primary schools instead of secondary schools would bring tangible and immediate benefits for children. This essay would opine that this development would exert a positive impact on the comprehensive abilities of children and their academic background, irrespective of a minor drawback in terms of language-related disorder.

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In recent years, there has been a considerable rise in crimes committed by young people in cities. What has caused this? What solutions can you suggest?

Over the recent years, more and more crimes in the cities have been committed by the youth. This essay will point out that the two main reasons associated with that problem are insufficient parental care and violent content on youngster’s entertainment sites and suggest some of the possible solutions that can be done to prevent it.

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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. why do you think this is happening? what can government do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced. give reason and examples

Waste material generation is a rising concern all over the world and an insurmountable issue nowadays. There are stupendous reasons for this phenomenon, to name a few, mass consumerism and citizens accountability are the critical reasons. The same trouble can be eradicated with the respective government's intervention by introducing recycling methodologies and bringing awareness among the population.

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