IELTS Writing Samples Band 7. Page 402

IELTS Writing Samples Band 7

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Competitiveness is generally considered a good quality for people to have in society. Do you think it is a positive development or negative trend ? how does competitiveness affect individuals?

Competition in current times has become a main issue not only on a local scale but also in a global context. This topic seems to bring a positive advancement rather than a negative one. Likewise, people in a society in which they compete over something will likely have a vast amount of good opportunities owing to personal evolution.

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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decision about matters that affect them Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some parents have the assumption that allowing their offspring to their own everyday needs tends to make them just think about themselves, while other parents believe that it is essential to make children learn about decision-making ability in life. This essay agrees that even a little thing choice can affect making decision process; however, this essay will still cover both sides.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing.Do you agree or disagree?

Shopping is a leisure activity which is done by people according to their needs and affordability. The trend of online shopping is multiplying and it is believed that this trend will lead to the closing of all shops in towns and cities. In my opinion, this proposition appears to be rational. This essay will further elaborate viewpoints for favouring this notion and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.

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𝙎𝙤𝙢𝙚 𝙥𝙚𝙤𝙥𝙡𝙚 𝙗𝙚𝙡𝙞𝙚𝙫𝙚 𝙩𝙝𝙖𝙩 𝙜𝙤𝙫𝙚𝙧𝙣𝙢𝙚𝙣𝙩𝙨 𝙨𝙝𝙤𝙪𝙡𝙙 𝙥𝙖𝙮 𝙛𝙪𝙡𝙡 𝙘𝙤𝙪𝙧𝙨𝙚 𝙛𝙚𝙚𝙨 𝙛𝙤𝙧 𝙨𝙩𝙪𝙙𝙚𝙣𝙩𝙨 𝙬𝙝𝙤 𝙬𝙖𝙣𝙩 𝙩𝙤 𝙨𝙩𝙪𝙙𝙮 𝙖𝙩 𝙪𝙣𝙞𝙫𝙚𝙧𝙨𝙞𝙩𝙞𝙚𝙨. 𝘿𝙤 𝙮𝙤𝙪 𝙖𝙜𝙧𝙚𝙚 𝙤𝙧 𝙙𝙞𝙨𝙖𝙜𝙧𝙚𝙚 𝙬𝙞𝙩𝙝 𝙩𝙝𝙞𝙨 𝙨𝙩𝙖𝙩𝙚𝙢𝙚𝙣𝙩❓

In an age where education is the cornerstone of progress, the debate surrounding government-funded university education is increasingly relevant. Opinions diverge on whether state funding should encompass the entirety of tertiary education fees.

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Some people believe that the increasing use of computers and mobile phones for communications has had a negative effect on young people’s reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, modern technology has been developing and it has changed almost all spheres of our lives. For some individuals, this technological development brings positive results, whereas others consider that it affects the reading and writing abilities of the young generation in a negative way. I partly agree with this statement as such kind of breakthrough in the technological era gives not only educational improvement from one side but also the loss of essential skills for young people.

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The crime rate in teenagers has increased dramatically in many countries in recent years. What are the causes, and what are the solutions?

In recent years, the engagement of teenagers in crimes and robberies has substantially grown. There are several factors that contribute to this issue, however, there are some solutions to address this crisis. In the following paragraphs, causes will be expanded, and also the possible solutions available to prevent the problem.

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Some people say that we do not need printed newspapers anymore. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

As technology is more advanced, newspapers are now available digitally and can be accessed by phone. Because of this, many think that printed newspapers are not needed anymore. This essay will argue why paper-based news is still entirely necessary despite the improving development.

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Fossil fuel is the main source of energy. In some countries, the use of alternative sources of energy is encouraged. To what extent do you think is it a positive or negative development?

The increasing rate of pollution in many nations makes the government focus on using renewable resources such as wind and solar energy instead of fossil fuels. From my perspective, this shift will create significantly positive improvements in expenditure and environmental problems. In this essay, I will shed light on my opinion and give specific examples.

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Success is often measured in terms of how much somebody has earned. Do you think wealth is a good measure of success? How else could we measure whether somebody is successful or not?

It is a popular belief that money equals success. To begin with, I understand that money plays an important role in everyone's lives but I disagree with this point of view. I believe there are other factors that are even more significant than money when measuring one's success.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

In some nations, people argue that leasing a home is less crucial than acquiring it. Owning an accommodation in some countries could escalate the quality of individual social hierarchy to the extent of the prestigious honour. Additionally possessing a residence in some regions is acknowledged as a property investment. I firmly believe this case has led to a forward-looking condition.

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Today, societies face a lot of options in their life such as food we can eat or products we use. People think that it would be too much, but I disagree since many choices help us to accommodate what we want and create competition in the business.

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Financial education should be included as a mandatory subject in schools to prepare students for managing money effectively. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is an undeniable fact that managing money is an important life skill which must be acquired by everyone. Every student should learn and acquire the knowledge and skillset to manage their finances.

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A growing number of people rely on restaurants and convenience food (frozen food and packaged meals) rather than home-cooked food to supply most of their meals. What are the advantages and disadvantages of eating this way?

Food is essential for everyone to survive in life. Nowadays, we have various options for junk meals as the number of restaurants is increasing in all cities. Therefore, most people prefer to eat outside or take the option of packed snacks as compared to homemade cooking. I will discuss the positive and negative points of this trend.

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It is generally accepted that exercise is good for children and teenagers. Therefore physical education and sports should be compulsory for all students in all schools. What do you think?

It is believed nowadays that physical activities are beneficial for children and teenagers. Therefore, it is mandatory for all pupils to have physical education and sports in all schools. This essay fully agrees with this statement because it will benefit their health and widen their life opportunities.

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Public transport is essential but problematic. Describe some of problems connected to public transport and suggest some solutions.

In the millennial era, conventional vehicles still play an important role in society, although their existence is debatable. The main agenda of the impending composition is to elaborate on various drawbacks in the community and a myriad of ideas, which individuals and the government could certainly apply.

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Advertisement of snacks and toys have a great impact on children and their parents. So, the advertisements to children should be banned. Do you agree or disagree?

The ongoing debate surrounding the significant impact of advertising snacks and toys to children and their parents has led to the suggestion that these ads should be prohibited. This essay concurs with this viewpoint due to the challenges it poses in terms of children's self-control and the potential for fostering unhealthy competition among peers.

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he most important aim for science should be impove people's lives. To what extent do you agree and disagree with the statement?

While enhancing human well-being through science is important, I believe that by no means should it be solely the primary goal of scientific endeavours. Equally important are safeguarding the environment and respecting animal rights.

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The most important aim for science should be impove people's lives. To what extent do you agree and disagree with the statement?

While enhancing human well-being through science is important,I believe that by no means should it be solely the primary goal of scientific endeavors. Equally important are safeguarding the environment and respecting animal rights.

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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

It is inevitable that households will produce some waste, but the increasing amount of refuse presents a challenge for governments as historical disposing methods are not practical anymore Some argue a huge proportion of domestic waste can be recycled and reused through setting regulations and rules. I agree that regulation is an effective method, whereas considering other remedies such as education and reward systems have at least the same impact.

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Natural resources such as oil, forests, and freshwater are being consumed at an alarming rate. What problems does this cause? How can we solve these problems?

Resources that come from nature, such as oil, forest, and freshwater, are being exploited at a frightening level. This is something that should be tackled accordingly since some of the energy sources are not renewable. This essay will examine the causes and propose potential solutions.

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