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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7

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In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

Before college, many young people are advised that a year of working or travelling may be a good option. This essay suggest that experience gained and money saved are the biggest advantages of this, but delaying careers and reducing motivation to study are the primary disadvantages.

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The advantages of the spread of English as a global language will continue to outweigh its disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, the English language is considered an international language. I agree, that English knowledge is rather beneficial in case of cooperating between countries and opportunities to study abroad.

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Many think that religion should be taught in schools while others think it should be avoided. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

While some people argue that religion should be established as one of the courses in schools, many take the view that it is inappropriate. This essay will discuss both these points of view and argue in favour of the latter.

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Companies should encourage old employees (55 years old) to retire, in order to give opportunities to the new generation. Do you agree and disagree?

Over the past few decades, there is a significant change in the job sectors. It is a public opinion that organizations should motivate people who reached 55 should relieve the workplace by giving new openings to the upcoming generation. I vehemently disagree with the statement. This disquisition delineates the reason for my disagreement.

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Some countries invest in specialized sports facilities for top athletes but not for the average people. Is this a positive or negative development?

It is true that some countries support professional athletes by investing in dedicated sports facilities such as gymnasiums, fitness diagnostics centres and training camps, though this privilege does not extend to everyday people. In my mind, this development is generally desirable, though ,ideally,everyone should receive equal attention on matters of fitness and sports.

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Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robot. What is your opinion?

Robots will eventually replace humans specifically, in relation to work, which is one of the widespread notions. However, some believe that this intelligent machine can only replace some aspects of the job where thinking and emotions are uninvolved. Thus, I do not support the notion that technology will completely take over human-centred work. This essay will further explain with logical reasons why I support this.

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In some countries, most people prefer to rent a house rather than buying one. Describe the advantage and disadvantage of renting.

It is quite common these days for people in many countries to rent a house rather than buy one. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

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All children should learn to speak a foreign language as soon as they start school.’ How far do you agree with this proposal? How important is it for a child to learn a foreign language?

In today’s World, people communicate with each other on a global level, for this purpose, it seems advisable that all children should study at least one foreign language in addition to learning other subjects at school at an early age. This essay will discuss the importance of learning other languages.

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Some people think that parents have a great influence on the children`s growth but influence from outside plays a more important role. Do you agree or disagree?

Looking at the task below, which is concerning the way how some people believe that children's growth is influenced by parents, but also deeply by outside environments, it's evident the way in which two severals views try to prevail over each other, giving the opportunity to admit a personal idea after having made a comparison.

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in many countries paying for things using mobile phones (cell phone ) apps is becoming increasingly common .Does this development have more advantages or disadvantages ?

In a rather futuristic world, e-commerce is growing day by day. People are inclined towards paying online rather than giving money in cash. In my opinion, there are far more advantages than disadvantages.

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Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

Globally, crime continues to be a pervasive problem. To tackle it, some support longer prison terms, while others feel that alternative measures, including rehabilitation and education, are better options. In this essay, I will examine both views and explain why I feel the programs in prison are the key to crime prevention.

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Some people say that the best way to improve the overall general health of the public is to offer more sport facilities. Others say that this would have little effect and other measures are necessary to improve public health. Discuss both views.

A major problem societies face in the twenty-first century is the decline in the level of public health, due in large part to sedentary lifestyles and poor eating habits. While some feel that this can be best tackled by the provision of more sports facilities, others argue that there are better options. I will examine both and explain why, despite the appeal to some people, simply promoting would not be effective in improving people’s health.

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Some people believe physical education classes should be mandatory for all school aged children. Some people argue children should use their spare time on academic purpose. Discuss both point of views and give an opinion

Some argue the fact that physical education should be an obligatory subject for all schools level and ages. Others believe that the time dedicated to this subject should be used for more useful arguments. In my opinion, sports must be included in the subjects list, and I will explain why.

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In many countries, traditional foods are being replaced by international fast foods. Some people believe this exerts a negative effect on both families and societies. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Nowadays, it is becoming common for people to consume fast foods. Some people believe that this trend has a negative impact on both families and societies. However, I firmly agree that replacing traditional food with international can bring a negative impact on families and societies for 2 main reasons.

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that university students should be given the freedom to choose the subjects they want to learn while others think it’s better to prepare them to be job-ready by introducing science and technology-related subjects. In my opinion, it would be more beneficial if students studied subjects, they are interested in.

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The increasing use of credit cards has led to a rise in personal dept. Some people argue that this is a problem that needs to be addressed, while others argue that it is a necessary part of modern life. Discuss both sides of this argument and give your own opinion.

The increasing use of credit cards has led to a rise in personal debt. Some people argue that this is a problem that needed to be addressed, while others argue that it is a necessary part of modern life. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of this argument and give my own opinion on the issue.

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In some countries, more and more people are hiring a personal fitness trainer, rather than playing sport or doing exercise classes. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or a negative development?

The rate at which the public patronises and uses trainers to acquire fitness is on the increase as opposed to how they play sports and take exercise classes. In my opinion, this is a positive trend and this essay will discuss the reasons extensively.

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Many famous athletes advertise different products. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, different brands are advertised by a considerable number of athletic celebrities. In my opinion, I consider that being an ambassador for a brand can bring about more advantages for famous athletes compared to any issues it might present.

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Some people believe that its best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.

Some people think that accepting a hard situation such as unhappiness with occupation or lack of capital is the best way of acting. Others can not agree with it and think that we should try hard to make our lives better.

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some perants buy their children a large number of toys to play with. what are the advantages and disadvantaged for the child of having a large number of toys

In some families, purchasing their toddlers' multitudinous toys is a daily routine. Behind this, there are some merits and demerits which can be addressed. As a way to explore more this issue, I will initiate to detail several pertinent explanations on both sides in the following paragraphs.

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