IELTS Writing Samples Band 7. Page 835

IELTS Writing Samples Band 7

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Competitive sports have been argued to have a positive effect on child education by some, while others oppose to To what extent do you agree or disagree

It is often argued, the curriculum of young ones has been positively impacted by participating in competitive activities, whereas a fair proportion of individuals disagrees with the notion. I strongly believe that these are pivotal for the children's education as they assist in developing certain characteristics even though over competitiveness can create a detrimental impact on a children’s education.

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In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative developments

In this recent world, there is an increased number of people who choose to live alone than in the past. In my ,opinion this is a negative development.

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Most people do not care enough about environmental issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Even though governments and media are emphasizing such vital environmental problems, still most people are ignorant towards this issue.

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Nowadays many young people are drawn towards dangerous sports. What makes them so attractive? What measures should be taken to regulate such sports and minimise the risks?

It is an undeniable accept that people, speciously youth are going crazy after adventurous and thrilling. Youngsters have mostly attracted to these plays without being aware of the dangers involved. This essay focuses on a few measures that sports agencies under warn.

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Increasing numbers of students are choosing to study abroad. To what extent does this trend benefit the students themselves and the countries involved? What are the drawbacks?

The world today is more connected than ever owing to globalization. With the ease of access to intercontinental travel or cooperation, many students are choosing to study abroad. Even though they bring many benefits for themselves and the countries involved, there are also some drawbacks at the same time.

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Many museums charge for admission, while for other museums the admission is free. Do you think the advantages of charging for admission outweigh the disadvantages?

Plenty of museums collect an admission fee, whereas other museums allow visitors to enter for free. Although an entrance fee might discourage low-income visitors, in my opinion, it is very beneficial since the money should cover the regular expenditure, and can be used to develop exhibitions and facilities

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the future, the main resean for going to shoping mall will be for entertainment, not to shop. Do you agree or disagree.

In recent years, the shopping centre is popular in our society because it is very convenient and easy to access. People often argue that in the future, the shopping centre will change their main feature from places to buy some items to the centre of entertainment. I agree with this notion for some reasons due to the facilities that the market has and its impact on the population's behaviour.

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Nowadays, children and teenagers spend more and more time indoors. What is the causes of this problem? What measures can be reduce this?

In this fast-paced life, people, especially adolescents and children, prefer to stay at home rather than outdoors. From my perspective, the advent of technology and the numerous furniture development may be the causes of this problem, while outdoor sports and creative picnic areas may tackle this dilemma. Both reasons and solutions will be elaborated on in these forthcoming paragraphs.

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Pollution of air, water and soil has become critical serious in last years and it takes millions of years to recoup. What are the main causes of pollution? How can we tackle this problem individually and globally?

In recent decades, various kinds of corruption such as air, soil, and water pollution have become an ongoing and daunting problem. In this essay, I will mention the reasons and then explore a viable solution

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Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion?

In this modern world have changed a lot of things especially technology where we use a computer to work remotely or at the office and communication with people on the other side of the world. Some said that it could bring harm to people's lives but I strongly agree that the benefit of using technology that is easier for communication and collecting confidential data outweigh the apparent drawback of not using it.

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People produce more garbage than in the past. Explain how it is affecting us and the measures that could be taken to address the situation.

The amount of waste produced by an average household has increased dramatically over the last few decades. There are several reasons behind this alarming development, however, it can be addressed with a few strong measures. Both the causes and solutions for this situation are discussed in the further essay.

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Today, many young people spend too much of their free time at shopping malls. This can be considered negative for young people and society generally. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

There are those who opine that the practice of spending too much time in shopping centres could be detrimental for young people and society as a whole. I fully agree with this view. In my opinion, if youngsters spend too much time shopping or in malls, it can hurt not only their grades but also their financial situation because shopping requires both time and money.

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Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. How might having lot of money make people happy? What other things can make people happy?

Having a lot of capital in life provides a way of living happily as many believed. Others may argue this statement. However, this essay will discuss why does money make to be thought people happy and will point out there are other factors still to be made your life enjoyable.

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Some people think its more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football , while others think that taking part in individual sports like tennis and swimming is better. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

There are numerous people who cite that team sports have more advantages than isolated play. However, the issue is not entirely straightforward, and arguments can also be made against the idea. This essay will discuss the debate and give a concluding view.

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The internet contains a lot of information. However, sometimes this information is inaccurate or wrong. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays it is indubitable the most of us use the internet for our needs. But whatever the information present is not always correct. So I associate myself with the given line of thought. Ideas articulated further in this essay will support my stand as misinterpretation of data, false links for phishing and a few more.

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A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is often argued that fame and wealth are considered the most important factor to look at from someone in society nowadays instead of their personality-wise. Although there are still some people who really value the trust and kindness of others, I partially agree that people nowadays are mostly blinded by fame and money. It is obvious that there are still many injustice practices in our society and also how young people follow trends to show off what they have is quite concerning.

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With the increasing demand for energy sources of oil and gas, people should look for oil and gas in remote and untouched natural places. Do advantages outweigh disadvantages of damaging such area?

The demand for energy sources of fossil fuels is continually rising due to the increase in population and industrialization. This definitely results in exploring the sources of oil and gas into wilderness areas. Personally, I think developing energy and collecting fossil fuels are harmful to the world and human beings overall.

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Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks. Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages?

Social networking seems to be fashionable among communities of all ages, even though sharing some vital information on these platforms could give rise to unfavourable circumstances. However , social networking has some positive factors like chances to know other nations' cultures and opportunities to share information with others. Hence , this writer believes that the advantages of social media will be far away from its disadvantages.

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Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to get a satisfying career life than those who frequently change jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Job is a basic necessity for an individual to live a happy and healthy lifestyle. Having a source of income gives a sense of relief to people. However, boarding on a position that satisfies a person is an arduous journey. Some schools of thought say that sticking to the same task for whole life brings satisfaction whereas changing jobs causes disturbances in the lifestyle. I partially agree with this notion. This essay is an attempt to address the levels of satisfaction while doing the same activity and doing different works over a period of time.

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Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. How might having a lot of money make people happy? What other things in life can make people happy?

Citizenry tends to believe that being financially strong makes one's life joyful. However, there are a plethora of things barring the money that make people's existence carefree. This essay will throw light on different ways of being happy including the reason for being rich.

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