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IELTS Writing Samples Band 8.5

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is common that people may be challenged with certain situations that are not very satisfying in their lives. Some argue individuals should learn to accept those terrible scenarios while others believe a better way is to improve them. In this essay, I am going to debate both views to reach a conclusion.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is no doubt that TV nowadays is available able in every single home and seen by nearly all humans alive. Some people now think the advertising process is still essential to convince someone buys a product, on the other side, others see that it became an old fashion and must be replaced by new methods. Nevertheless, I personally see that advertising is no longer required and can be easily replaced in our time because it becomes no longer useful. This essay will discuss this issue with all aspects of views regarding it.

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In many countries, today crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

Drama as a genre has always been the favourite of the audience. Nowadays, the crime type of drama is rising between the tv audience and readers. In this essay, I will elaborate further in regard to the reason for the popularity in addition to stating my point of view about this matter.

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Housing and waste disposal are major issue in cities. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

Recent advances in globalization and modernization have resulted in cities being occupied by the vast majority of the population. This has resulted in various issues among which housing and the problem of waste disposal are the major ones. I totally agree with this statement and will present my reasoning in support of this in the subsequent paragraphs.

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Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not the local people. Why is this the case? What can be done to attract more local people to these museums?

While these museums and historical sites are ubiquitous attractions that draw streams of foreign visitors, they go largely ignored by local people. This trend is driven by several factors and some viable solutions can be implemented to boost local people's attendance at historical attractions.

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the internet has changed the way we communicate. Much communication today happens through social media. Some people support this and think it is a positive development. Others believe that social media have negative effects. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is generally agreed that in recent times, technological advancement has changed the way of social interaction. Social media did bring a change in the world of communication, Although a few people support this development, there are others who do not. However, I consider this a positive innovation.

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Students prefer doing part-time jobs during their studies. What are the advantages or disadvantages of this?

Part-time jobs are becoming increasingly popular among pupils. Besides some of the drawbacks of this trend, I am strongly convinced by its benefits.

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News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this?

Nowadays, newspaper articles and television media are using more pictures to convey the story behind news and people have different opinions on how effective it is. A picture can speak for thousand words, and hence, in my perspective, using more and more pictures can help the media to accurately depict the situation.

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Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People have different ideas about whether having academic knowledge or starting a job right after school can lead to a more successful situation. While going to university is very good and helpful, I believe entering the market sooner could be much better.

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Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Economic progress is considered the most significant aim by many governments. While some individuals believe that there is a wide variety of progress that is at the same level of importance. In my personal view, the latter opinion is more logical.

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Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born. What might be the reasons for this. What are the advantages and disadvantages

Our birthplace has always been a nostalgic place for all of us. Numerous people tend to stick to it and never leave or live nearby. In this essay, I will elaborate further on the valid cause for that and the benefits and drawbacks of it.

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Many people are afraid to leave their homes because of the fear of crime. Some believe that more actions should be taken to prevent crime. Others feel that little can be done. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The anxiety of violating is the cause which Individuals are worried to depart from their residences. To conduct a felony, some people think that further rules should be applied while some consider that a minimum punishment is fine. The aim of this essay is to discuss both views and express my perspective.

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Nowadays many people aim to create a balance between their work and other aspects of their life, however, only a few achieve it. What are the problems in doing this and what solutions can you suggest?

Today, everyone has a hectic schedule for their work so, it is hard for every to maintain work and life balance. Although, some folks easily manage both parts. This creates manifold problems in this doing. Therefore, I will explain the situation and also give a solution to this issue.

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traffic congestion is a growing problem in many of the world's major cities. explain some possible reason for this problem and suggest some solutions.

Nowadays, in some regions of the world, traffic jam is a growing problem. It seems to me that not only do crowded streets waste our time but also steps should be taken to address this dilemma. This issue will be discussed , in this essay.

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Some people argue that , such as paintings and music , are a waste of money , and the government should spend this money on other services. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

There is no doubt about the fact that music and paintings are quite popular among people. However, some masses claim that arts , such as drawings and music , are not a good investment of money so the government should spend the money on other facilities. In a subsequent , paragraph I intend to shed light on the given topic with proper illustration and an appropriate conclusion.

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Scientists agree that people are damaging their health by eating too much junk food. Some people think that the answer to this problem is to educate people. Others think education will not work. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is believed that the community is suffering from loads of health-related issues because of excessive consumption of fast food. Some people hold the thought that literacy should take responsibility for this phenomenon while others have little faith in this solution. This essay contends that education is such an applicable solution, and it will discuss both points of view.

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Very few school children learn about the value of money and how to look after it, yet this is a critical life skill that should be taught as part of the school curriculum. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, at least a number of educational Institutes teach financial literacy to the learner, but it is a very crucial ability for every student, and it has to be taught in every school. This essay will explicate why I agree with the notion.

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In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country , while others believe government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Undoubtedly, there is a wide range of salaries in some nations now. While some people believe that a high salary should be welcomed, others argue that it has enormous negative effects. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument and my opinion that a great amount of income will positively affect the country’s development.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In modern days, the development of technology has rapidly affected commercial businesses all over the world. This phenomenon causes the advertising industry to be more advanced at attracting people to buy the goods. At the same time, the same strategy has been used repetitively. Therefore, it is no longer attentive for some people. There are valid opinions on both sides, which I will discuss in this essay.

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Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages?

In today's world, many people have to work the most of day's hours to provide for their basic needs. therefore, they do not have enough spare time to devote to entertainment. I believe this trend has affected society negatively, and its disadvantages outweigh its advantages.

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