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IELTS Opinion Writing Samples Band 6.5

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Essay Question: Some people think that to deal with the problem of congestion in cities, privately-owned vehicles should be banned in city centres, while others consider this to be an unrealistic solution. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In order to solve the issue of traffic congestion in cities, some people suggest that private cars should be forbidden. However, some other people think this is not practical. I will discuss both viewpoints and give reasons to explain why I prefer the latter one.

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In many parts of the world kills and boys are educated together in co-educational or mixed schools think that girls and boys benefit from being educated separately in single sex schools towards extend to you agree with this view?

In many countries all around the world, both girls and boys are educated in mixed schools together. However some people suppose that separate education is followed by loads of benefits, I think the drawbacks are more than advantages due to many reasons which I will mention.

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"Prevention is better than cure". Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures. To what extent do you agree ?

Some people feel that the expenditure on healing investigations is considerably high and prevention is a better option to save from diseases. In this essay, I will discuss whether I agree with this statement. Firstly, I will explore how some diseases caused the death of thousands of people in human history. Secondly, I will consider how research will benefit humanity in terms of illnesses.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In the present time, many businesses are involved in the claim about the new one for their products. I believe that affecting sales should have innovation for the products, and this leads to positive impacts for targeted customers.

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In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes?

In modern times, an increasing concern for many people around the world is that the rising crime rates have increased greatly. The causes of this phenomenon are variants and have led to a wide range of effects on human life. In this essay, I will discuss the reasons why species loss is occurring and how we can address this issue for people and the world.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

In modern times, the issue of sugary products’ effect on health has become highly controversial. There are those who say that a high dose of sugar has a significant role in our body as well as health diseases. I completely agree with this statement, and in this essay, I will discuss the reasons for this and provide examples from my knowledge and experience to support my viewpoint.

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Governments should spend more on railways instead of roads. Agree or disagree

It is argued that governments should invest more in the railway system instead of roads. This essay strongly agrees with this view and believes that allocating more funds to the improvement of railroads has several advantages. Firstly, car and road space are not utilized efficiently, leading to traffic congestion. Secondly, public transportation is fast and cheaper than using private vehicles.

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Some people think books are lossing their importance in information and entertainment purposes.To what extent do you agree or disagree.

It is argued that some groups of people say that books have been losing their main purposes. This essay totally disagrees with the statement because I considered there are different genders of books and people can select what story to read according to their interests.

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some government spend a lot of money on exploring space, some feel that this investment is justified while others thinlk that money should be spent on public services like healthcare and education. discuss both views and give your opinion.

The expenditure of a country must have been allocated to any needed sectors, such as education, public services, and scientific discoveries prior to the respective year, maybe even 5 years before. However, many people argue that spending a fantastic amount of the national budget for a sophisticated outer space discovery is a positive thing, whereas others believe that it is unwise knowing that there are more important sectors, namely health and education. This essay will discuss both statements and why I side with the latter.

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Some people say that physical exercise should be a required part of school day. Other believe that students should spend the whole day on academic studies. Which opinion do you agree with? Use specific reason and details to support your answer.

There is a debate over what should be part of a school day. One side believes that it is mandatory for physical activities to be included in daily activities at school, while others say that academic studies should be the main uninterrupted focus of the day. This essay agrees that exercise should be a part of school, because exercise plays a big part in maintaining your health and it is also ineffective to study without breaks.

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Around the world it is likely that more adults will work from and more children will study from home as computer technology become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think it is a negative or a positive development?

Nowadays, with the vast development of modern technology, access to computers has become convenient as they are less expensive compared to the past. As a result, the 'work and study from home' concept is becoming more popular equally among adults and children in society. Anyhow, whether it is a famous idea, there are many drawbacks too. Through this essay, I'm going to justify my opinion with relevant examples.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Have you ever taken medicine without your doctor's advice? A vast majority of ill adults are alleged to take self-treatments rather than visit a doctor. However, this action can be quite dangerous. I, personally find it negative.

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Human activities have a negative effect on plant and animals species. Some people say that it is too late to do anything. Some people think that we should take effective action to improve the situation. Discuss both sides and give an opinion

This has been a perpetual debate that human activities like construction have caused a threat to the vegetation as well as animals. There is a group of individuals who believe that the damage done by mankind to these species is irreversible and there is nothing we can do now whereas a vast majority of people think that positive steps can lead to a better situation and steps should be taken in this regard. In my opinion, we can bring positive changes by mending our ways which include saving the biodiversity by increasing the awareness among the people. This essay discusses both aspects and provides logical grounds for both by stating the facts.

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When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, it is argued that technology is no longer seen as a development factor of society but also treats the traditional abilities that belong to the country. This essay totally agrees with that statement. There is no doubt that a lot of information is everywhere,especially on the web, and accessible due to the widespread of the Internet. In addition to this, I must state that fully automatic production machines are used by many sectors, particularly in the Automotive and manufacturing industries.

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Many people used distance- learning programs to study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the benefits as much as attending college or university. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people like to stay at home rather than go outside. They prefer to get learning programs at home than attend real classes. These two viewpoints have their own advantages. Both will discussed below.

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Having a good university degree guarantees people a good job. To what extent do you agree?

In this modern era , Some people believe that having a degree from a reputed university helps to get a job easily. I partially agree with this statement and In this essay, I will explain apart from education other skills are also required to get a good job in this competitive market .

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In companies, promotions to high positions should be given to employees inside a company and not to someone outside the company or new hiring. What is your opinion on this?

Some people argue that employee advancement to higher role ought to be granted from within the company, not people recruited from outside of the company. I think there are various reasons for the employer will be given and explain in the following essay.

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Some people think that it is best to live in a horizontal city while others think of a vertical city. Discuss both views and give your opinion

There are various models of urban planning devised to cope with the growing human population. Expanding cities thus have a choice: to grow upwards or to grow outwards. These both have their merits and choosing which is best is a difficult task. It depends upon whether you value efficiency or comfort.

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Traffic and housing problems could be solved by moving large companies, factories and their employees to the countryside. Do you agree or disagree?

There is a strong argument that shifting substantial industries and factories to rural areas can be a solver for traffic and housing problems in urban areas. I completely agree with the statement because it can reduce traffic congestion in big cities and solve problems for workers to buy houses. In this essay, I will discuss more details about it.

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Many countries have compulsory military service for young men after they leave school. It would be a good idea for all countries to adopt this system for men, and possibly for women too. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Several countries such as South Korea and Japan require their young men to do military service after they graduate. Some people argue that it is a great idea to be adopted in other countries, not only for males but also for females. However, I disagree with this statement due to several reasons.

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