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IELTS Opinion Writing Samples Band 6.5

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Some people think that it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person need to be a good parent.

It is the general perception of some people that teenagers should be taught the skills for good parenting in schools to prepare them for the real-life challenges. I believe that individuals become good parents with experience, however, I agree with the view that schools should educate their students the required traits of good parenthood, so that they can effectively deal with the stressful situations.

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Many people think that zoos are not good enough for animals and they should be improved or animals must go to natural life. What is your opinion ?

Most people believe that today's zoos are not good enough for wild creatures and they do not meet the demand. Firstly, they can not eat as much as they want and they can not enjoy freedom. In addition, the public does not look after them very well and the conditions created for them are not satisfactory. So zoos should be developed and then animals can live well.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In the modern world, more and more people who have health issues would rather take alternative medicines and treatments than consult with their usual doctor. In my opinion, this should be viewed as a positive situation because this tendency is beneficial to both people with health problems and governments.

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In many cities, planners tend to arrange shops, schools, offices, and homes in specific areas and separate them from each other. Do you think the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages.

In modern times,the devisers are more inclined to plan shops,colleges,working places and homes in certain places and locate them in different zones.This situation happens in most towns.I believe that the advantages of this planning surpass its disadvantages.

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Some believe that schools should reward students who show the best academic results, while other think it is more important to reward students who show progress. Discuss both views and express your own opinion?

Appreciation of students in the school will motivate them when moving forward in all aspects. Rewards and appreciations are memorable remarks in students during their school life. However, there is a discussion based on two different viewpoints as students have to be rewarded based on their academic results or based on their growth. We will discuss both views from the following and I would share my personal viewpoint on the same.

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Some employers are giving more value on hiring people with good social skills apart from good qualifications. Do yiu agree or disagree that social skills are just as crucial as good qulification for success work?

Nowadays, most companies recruit people which have better soft skills rather than education.some people think that social skill plays a vital role in future as compared to experience and qualification. I am favoured this point of view because today's technology has spread in the world, and it is equally important to education. My explanation is in the following paragraphs.

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Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?

Enormous wages is over more vital to work satisfaction. It is often argued, that high salary is much more important than the sence of job satisfaction associated with the career. I definitely disagree with the statement, will provide further details in the course of the essay.

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Some people think that the government should give money to creative people,such as artists and musicians.to what extend do you agree?

It is an extremely undeniable fact that nowadays art is becoming more and more famous and people begin to explore artistic things.Is believed some individuals that the government should provide some financial support for talented people.it will beneficial for those people but the government have some major issues to deal with such as,many public facilities,health care facilities and many more.considering today’s circumstances and consequences of this view,I partially agree with the given statement and this essay will discuss the view in the following paragraphs.

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International tourism is now more common that ever before. some feel that this is a positive trend, while others do not. what is your opinion on this?

Currently, world exploration has become regular and essential compares to the previous century. Many people believe that it is a positive side, however, few say this is not a positive side. I partially agree with both statements because global travel is good for learning new things. Nevertheless, it may have a chance of worldwide fraud

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PEOPLE WHO GO TO LIVE OTHER COUNTRIES SHOULD FOLLOW THE CUSTOMS AND TRADITIONAL OF THE NEW COUNTRY. AGREE OR DISAGREE.

It is an undeniable fact that fashion and customs have changed compared to the past time. Nowadays, a different communities of people migrating to other developed countries and I personally believe that people have to respect and follow, the traditional and recreational activities of the new nation.

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Traffic and housing problems could be solved by moving large companies factories and their employees to the countryside Do you agree or disagree?

It is an undeniable fact that traffic congestion and residential problems are booming day by day these days. To tackle this issue, it is suggested that change the location of the huge firms, factories and their labours to the outskirts of the city. I completely disagree with this statement because of the scarcity of skilled workers in the countryside and the lack of better infrastructure to set up a large company or a factory.

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Some people believe that a person's intelligence is inherited from the parents, while others believe that their environment is the main factor. Discuss both views. Which factor do you think is mostly responsible for intelligence.

Some people believe that a person's intelligence is inherited from their parents, while others believe that their environment is the main factor. Discuss both views. Which factor do you think is mostly responsible for intelligence.

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Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people think that having gender-based schools is more beneficial than mixed schools to educate children. In my opinion, mixed schools are more beneficial as it reflects a real-world scenario than a separate school, where everyone is of similar sexual orientation.

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Popular events like the football world cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way To what extent do you agree and disagree with this opinion?

Nowadays, World Cup is a hugely popular issue that people always talk about it. Like World Cup, other international sporting occasions are beneficial to improve relationships between countries. Thanks to these activities, people can travel abroad, visit other countries, as well as learn about the culture of countries. My opinion, I strongly believe that there are several events that lead to a release of emotions between countries.

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People say that it is a waste of time for high school students to learn literature such as novels and poems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that educating literature like poems and novels is not necessary for learners in high-grade classes. I completely disagree with this statement, the impending essay will discuss the same with a logical conclusion.

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Many food and drink prodcuts contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary Products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Several eating items contain increased levels of sweetness that result in various physical illnesses. As such many claims to make sugary food and drinks costly to motivate society to use them less often. I completely agree with this movement, as it affects people negatively.

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Tourism has increased so much over the last 50 years that is having a mainly negative impact on local inhabitants and the environment. However, others claim that is good for the economy. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of tourism and give your own opinion.

It is true that the increase in the touristry industry, today, affects local residents and the environment. However, some people believe that improvement in tourism could be beneficial for the economy. In this essay, I will discuss both statements and give my personal opinion.

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Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is true that schools can teach young people a great amount of knowledge. While some people tend towards the viewpoint that conducting courses on good parents’ skills in school would be a waste of time, I would have to support the idea being taught to be a good parent is beneficial for us.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

The world of advertising is bombarded with millions of products and every product owner claims the originality of their product by using different methods. I believe this is a positive development and essential to persuade the customer which is necessary for the life of any cooperation and meet the people's demand.

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Some people think that travelling abroad is necessary while others believe it's not because TV and the Internet can give people the same information. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is true that virtual tours have already provided abundant information for people who are interested in foreign cultures. The debate if travelling to foreign places is necessary remains heat.

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