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IELTS Opinion Writing Samples Band 6.5

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Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they are released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What possible solutions can you suggest?

In the modern era, the crime rate is increasing tremendously all over the world. It is higher among the people who are released from prison. The following essay will discuss reasons such as the lack of jobs and acceptance by society and the introduction of skill training and rehabilitation are possible solutions to decrease the crime rates.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative develoment?

These days, the phenomenon of several people with health issues trying to buy usual drugs and remedies instead of going to the doctor has been growing in popularity. This change can be led to major effects, and I consider this a negative development.

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some people say that big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. do you agree or disagree ?

It is undeniable that salary is the main factor and more influence important role play for surviving individuals' perspective in society nowadays. Although, job satisfaction is essential for work to happiness and enjoyment for effective. I strongly disagree with this opinion as income is not factor ways for successful people in their jobs.

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Topic: Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in the countryside. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays, there are many large companies which have their business in the city. So, young people have no choice but to leave the rural zones and move to urban zones to seek job opportunities and have a better standard of living. And, no one looks after the old folks, and this is causing them health issues.

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Some people think that schools should select students according to their academic abilities. Others believe that it is better to have students with different abilities study together. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The phenomenon of whether academies send out admission offers based on students' grades has aroused wide concern among various circles. Divergent as peoples' views on this issue in question may be, I believe that academies depend on students' marks to evaluate their abilities and select those who are capable to understand their courses better for student development.

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Most people do not care enough about environmental issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Environmental issues have been a well-discussed topic recently. Many people think that nobody takes care about pollution or weather in our world, and they claim more actions from national governments. Nevertheless, others explain that society is already aware about these problems and is it not necessary measures from the states. I agree that people are not care enough of environment and in this essay I am going to examine the reasons.

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In many countries students are engaged in some sort of paid work . Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibilities. What is your opinion?

In countries like Canada, the USA, England, and Australia students are working to earn money which is very important to survive here. Some people think it is not valuable but others think that they can gain experience and learn more hand skills and they can support their families. In my point of view, it is quite beneficial to get employed and pay for your own expenses.

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Some people think that developments involving the internet have brought people closer together while others think that people and communities have become more isolated. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some would argue that improvements in technology such as the internet made it possible for humans to stay in touch while others think that such inventions contributed to social isolation. Although physical contact between people became unnecessary in many situations, because of the internet, I believe that the digital revolution made our communication much more straightforward by providing many alternatives.

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Some countries are considering imposing curfews in which teenagers will not be allowed outdoors at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this policy? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Recently, much polarization has arisen over whether a curfew, in which adolescents going out at night are required to have an escorting grown-up, should be implemented. While there are obvious demerits to such a policy, I believe it is of more good than harm. This essay will explore both sides of the argument and highlights justifications for my perspective.

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There is an increasing amount of advertising directed at children, which encourages them to buy goods such as toys and snacks. Many parents are that these advertisements put so much pressure on children, while some advertisers claim that they provide useful information to children. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In this modern era, advertisement are the most influential factor in people's life due to advances in technology. Advertisement is on everywhere on TV , Websites and so on. Some people harbour a belief that advertisement companies are majorly targeted on children which directly puts pressure on children, while other people are opposed to this notion. In this essay, I will elaborate on the positive and negative aspects of these trends and thus lead to a logical conclusion.

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"Prevention is better than cure."' Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Most governments are using a massive amount of money on health section: giving free treatment to cancer patients or free health services for retirees instead of investing in research that can tell us the causes of those deadly conditions. I agree that the government should use a large proportion of the health budget on preventative measures and health knowledge.

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Several languages are in danger of extinction because they are spoken by very small numbers of people. Some people say that governments should spend public money on saving these languages, while others believe that would be a waste of money. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

It is true that some minority languages may disappear in the near future. Some people argue that spending taxpayer’s money on saving those languages would be a waste of money and are many sectors that need investments. This essay will discuss both views and outline why I feel governments should at least try for saving those languages from extinction.

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The media should include more stories which report good news. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, public debate has been going on about whether media should include more good news stories. Some believe that news outlets put out too many negative articles and they should include more good feelings evoking stories. On the other hand, readers believe that news should depict real life for that reason journalists must not look at the world through rose-tinted glasses. I partially agree with both sides of the aisle.

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Ordinary people try to copy famous people either magazine or watching tv.why do they do this?do you think its a good idea to copy famous people?

"luminary always a role model for normal people" people like to reflect to the renowed persons who are the most liked persons due to an ordinary person admires to the beloved personage thtas why he copies other persons' characters or way of style. In my opinion about this this is a good idea for normal people copy to their ideal hero. This essay will discuss it briefly for teh following reasons.

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SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT SPACE EXPLORATION IS A WASTE OF RESOURCES, WHILE OTHERS THINK THAT IT IS ESSENTIAL FOR MANKIND TO CONTINUE TO EXPLORE THE UNIVERSE IN WHICH WE LIVE. DISCUSS BOTH SIDES AND GIVE YOUR VALUABLE OPINION.

It is an undeniable fact that different space researchers love to explore things, which is related to astrology. Also, it is good to research various space-related stuff such as resources and atmosphere,but in this space exploration, scientists have been using large sums of money to evaluate their tasks, while from this huge amount of money people fulfil their basic needs, which improves working life as well as good for mankind.

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There is a considerable amount of evidence that increasing car use is contributing to global warming and having other undesirable effects on people's health and well-being. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

Ample evidence shows that the rise in vehicle usage leads to global warming besides its untoward detrimental effect on human health and well-being. This essay totally agrees with this statement because the crude oil extracted from fossil and the carbon dioxide emitted by cars cause atmosphere pollution that damages both life and mother nature.

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Some people think that parents have the greatest influence on their child’s academic development, while other think that a child’s teacher has more influence. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Relationship with parents is fundamental to becoming increased development for their children associated with education and relevant in real life. Although, some people believe that child teacher have exactly important to them as well. This essay will provide some benefits and drawbacks to discuss both individual opinions.

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Less and less parents these days are smacking their children. Some people think that this is leading to a generation of misbehaved children. Do you agree or disagree with this view?

Nowadays, parents are likely to educate their children by not hitting them physically. This probably leads to an assumption in a society that this method is creating a misbehaved generation. I completely disagree with this statement because there are indeed many ways besides using physical activity to teach children how to be good.

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Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal of money than people in other professions. Some people think this is fully justified while other think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, as the national sports competitions are more and more popular, the wages of professional athletes become higher. Some claim that they do not deserve to earn that much money than other professions, while others think that this is fair enough. In the following essays, I will show both sides of this situation and conclude by explaining my own view.

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Many Food And Drinks Contain High Levels Of Sugar. Sugary Products Should Be Made More Expensive | Agree Or Disagree

A number of produced eatables and beverages consist of a large quantity of sugar these days that acts as the major culprit behind plenty of health troubles. Thus, a section of society believes that the government must make these items costlier so that consumers consume them at a restricted level. I strongly condemn the given notion since by doing so, these products will be confined to the elite class only which will invite discrimination.

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