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IELTS Opinion Writing Samples Band 7.5

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage money. Others argue that it is bette to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is thought by some people that they should accept some bad situations such as an unsatisfactory job or a shortage of money while others believe that it is better to find other ways to address these matters. In the following paragraphs, both viewpoints will be discussed before reaching a conclusion.

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Most employees nowadays put increasing emphasis on social skills. Some people believe that social skill are important on addition to good qualifications for job success. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

According to some, social skills are a must to have in this competitive job market. A person with a good social existence navigates complex situations in their role, whereas, a technical know-how person finds it difficult to pass through those positions. Hence, I believe, employees striving for better social skills is a no-brainer and I have the following reasons to support my stance.

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It is inevitable that as technology advances, traditional cultures will be lost. It seems that we cannot have these two things together. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Local customs are vanishing around the sharply developing gadget world. This electronic staff is fulfilling our everyday life, and altering our view upon enormous things. Especially, our traditions were affected by this. Let's consider this question from different sides.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driveless vehicles outweight the disadvantages?

The growing advance of technology these days will transform the transporting systems with the spread of driverless cars, buses and trucks which carry only travellers in the future. I partially believe that there are more benefits than negative consequences brought about by this trend, for the vehicles become much safer thanks to the sophisticated automation regardless of some difficulties in dealing with a sudden change.

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Some people believe that workers have worked in a company for long years should be promoted. What is your opinion.

In this rapidly progressing universe, the advancement in technology is soaring day by day. So it is a necessity to have experienced professionals in order to discover new ideas; therefore, it is essential to provide promotions to individuals in a company. However, few individuals argue that employees who have worked for a firm for so many years must be promoted.

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Some people believe that it is better to live and work in a vertical city with multiple tall buildings, as compared to a horizontal city with fewer tall buildings. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are many considerations that people should give priority to residing and working in tall constructions because of their advantages, while others prefer the low ones. This writer agrees with the former and gives some main reasons to explain both views.

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Some people think that outdoor activities are more beneficial for children’s development than playing computer games. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is said that some individuals are of the opinion that children benefit from outdoor activities more than playing computer games. I strongly agree that outdoor activities are more beneficial mainly because of help physical development.

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3. Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What do you think are the reasons for this? Do advantages of this trend outweigh disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Model Answer:

It has been pointed out that an increasing number of individuals decide to have their first kid in their late thirties or forties. Personally, I opine that the stiff competitive atmosphere in our society causes this circumstance, and this disgraceful trend is detrimental to the development of our country from different aspects.

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Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some argue that youth should serve society for free in their leisure time as this has advantages for building teens' personalities and helps reduce the pressure on the community. I strongly support this idea and the following essay will explain why I hold this opinion.

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3. Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What do you think are the reasons for this? Do advantages of this trend outweigh disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Model Answer:

Today, it is not unusual for individuals to have babies at a later age. There are various reasons for this situation. In my opinion, the benefits of brewing kids in older years far outweigh the drawbacks.

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Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas (in word, picture, music or films) in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Presently, restricting or censoring people who are equipped with superior and creative skills from fulfilling their creations without any consent and through their own personal whim has long been at the centre of discussion for many. It is my contention that as long as the intentions' of art creators are free of any kind of damage whatsoever to anybody, they have every right to go beyond their limitations.

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Student today can access the information online so libraries are not necessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the era of technological advancement, various information available at our fingertips and access to knowledge has been readily available since one can remember. With this in mind, some people argue that there is no need to maintain the existence of public libraries as information is now available online. However, others think that public libraries are still needed. I completely agree with the latter; I believe public libraries are still important for our society.

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Some people believe that workers have worked in a company for long years should be promoted. What is your opinion.

According to some, promotion priority should be given to long-serving workers in a company. However, there is a caveat with this view, as it does not support incentives based on performance. Hence, I have a different view, where in addition to loyalty, performance too should be considered and I have the following reasons to support my stance.

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In many cities, planners tend to arrange shops, schools, offices, and homes in specific areas and separate them from each other. Do you think the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages.

The considerable number of amenities include malls, places of education , workplaces and places of residential in particular zones or unrelated to another in numerous urban city administrations which are trended to.This writer argues that the advantage of this planning surpasses its disadvantage.

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It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environments such as the Soth Pole. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

It has become a reality now that scientists and visitors can visit remote environment areas. From my perspective, this trend has more potential to benefit humanity than it could harm it.

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One of the most important issues facing the world today is a shortage of food and some think genetically modified foods are a possible solution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In an ever-progressive society, one of the major challenges facing all nations is the scarcity of food. Some individuals believe this menace could be curbed through the introduction of genetically processed food. In my view, I contend that it should not because of its health implications and little knowledge about it.

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Education should be accessible to people of all economic backgrounds. All leveld of education, from primary school to tertiary education, should be free. To what extent do you agree with this opinion?

In this modern world, education is the most important tool for children. In some countries, the state provides free education for all citizens, whereas in a few other countries, it comes with a cost. Hence, students from lower strata of society cannot afford it, resulting in many socio-economic problems. Therefore, I believe education should be accessible to all, irrespective of their economic background.

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In some countries young people are not only richer, but also safer and healthier than ever before. However, they are often less happy. What do you think are the reasons for this and what can be done to help?

Today in some countries, although the young generation living a better life (richer, safer, and healthier) than ever before, some of them often feel not really happy with their life. In this essay, I will examine the factors that contribute towards this situation and propose some solutions to help them.

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space exploration is too expensive and money should be spent on more important things. to what extend do you agree or disagree

There are some people who believe that exploring outer space is extremely exorbitant and the budget should be repurposed for other essential aspects. This writer totally agrees with this statement due to the inefficiency as well as the various issues which still exist on Earth.

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Commoners try ti imitate celebrities and other rich people they watch TV or in magzines.What are the causes behinnd this?In your opinion ,is it good or bad idea?

Media has shaped public opinion to the extent that the masses start emulating the personalities they watch on electronic news or print news.I personally,feel it is a bad idea as it is leading to our generation in a dark zone.Though there are innumerable reasons behind this trend,the role of television and luxury lives as the main reasons.The following paragraphs will discuss the above-mentioned notion.

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