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IELTS Opinion Writing Samples Band 7.5

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Parents, usualy mothers, give up work, choose to stay at home and look after family. Some people think that the government should give them salary. Do you agree or disagree. Give reasons from your own knowledge and experience.

Family is vital part of societies. It generally consists of parent and children. Even though it is everybody's responsibility to look after children and home, usually, mothers give up work and get the responsibility. With this help of mothers and also a sacrifice of mothers, families stay together and all member of a family, children, husband and wife, are happy and satisfied. Since there is happiness at home, there will be happiness and peace in society. And nobody can deny the importance of the mothers. So, I agree that the government should give them a salary and the reasons will be discussed.

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In many countries, tourism is a major part of the economy, but it also causes environmental damage and ruins the places it exploits. It is argued that tourists should pay an additional tax to compensate for this damage. Do you agree?

Although tourism industries play a critical role in the growth of the economy, they have an impact on destroying nature and infrastructures. Some believed that it is better that people who travel paying extra payment to compensate those environmental effects, however,I think it is not only the responsibility of travellers but also the authorities who looking after tourist attractions.

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Governments in many countries have recently introduced special taxes on foods and beverages with high levels of sugar. Some think these taxes are a good idea while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Admitted, that rapid increase in health issues like Diabetes and obesity has raised a question on people’s eating habits. As a Preventive measure ministry has come up with an idea of introducing high taxes on packed foodstuff and beverages. Although, the majority of the people believe that it is a great initiative by the power, whereas others do not consider it as a helpful step. This essay will discuss both aspects of the phenomenon and consent with the former idea.

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Some people have the opinion that big shopping malls are expensive places as they offer high costs for the products which can be bought at much cheaper prices from local shops. On the other hand, some people think that such malls are absolutely the best places to visit for shopping. Discuss both the opinions and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

I believe that the advent of large shopping centres has had a detrimental effect on local markets and at the same time it is also contributing to additional spending, and ultimately impoverishing us. Firstly, my essay will highlight the major disadvantages of shopping in a mall and secondly, I will argue why the latter opinion does not hold much significance.

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Some people view teenage conflict with their parents as a necessary part of growing up, whilst others see it as something negative which should be avoided. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

As children grow up to become teenagers, some tension might arise between parents and children. Some people opine that this is a situation that cannot be ignored but others feel that it has no positive benefits and should be avoided. However,I feel that teenage strife is part of growing up and there may be some positive effects on this development.

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Government should spend money on medical research and less on researching the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Scientific researches in diverse fields have made human's life much easier. There has long been a subject of discussion that researches related to healthcare should be more funded by the higher authorities environmental research programs. My view coincides does not coincide with the given proposition as more priority should be given to the conservation of biodiversity as compared to the medicinal subject.

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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that it is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is argued by some people that our lives will be smoother if few languages exist on the earth and it is not an issue id some languages disappear every year. It is agreed that having a few languages in the world will facilitate to make our life hassle-free. Firstly, this essay will discuss the benefits of traders and secondly, will discuss the upside of fewer languages in the students’ career; followed by a reasoned conclusion.

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Many parents today employ private tutors to teach their children after school hours. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Although schools are playing a vital role in academicals development of children, somehow students are lacks to understand the things. Nowadays, the majority of parents believe that hire a private teacher for their kids is a better way to fulfil their educational gaps which are unably filled by educational institutes. I think it is a positive development for pupils to get extra tuition after school.

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Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

The rapid increase in traffic accidents over the last decade has become a serious problem for many people. While some of them believe the solution to this situation is a severe punishment, others, myself included, think there must be another suitable method to reduce the accident percentage.

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Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

The progress of sectors, such as health, education and trade, is important for growth of an underdeveloped or a developing country.Therefore, many believe that the government of developed countries should take responsibility for helping these poor nations. In my opinion, I completely agree that by rich countries support the third world countries can grow at a fast pace.

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Some people feel that the design of newly constructed buildings in big cities should be controlled by governments. Others believe those who finance the construction of a building should be free to design it as they see fit. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is believed by some that, the buildings designed in large cities should follow the rules of the government, while others argue that, the design should be finalised by the one who finances the architecture. In my opinion, the person who is financing the building should have a say to the design of it, however, the final design is to be constructed according to the rules.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In this globalization, many kinds of arts are involved in certain events to blending people that come from different cultures and ages. In this terms, some people say that music is a good way for gathering people from different backgrounds together. In my point of view, I disagree with that statement. Therefore, in this essay, I will explain the reasons why I do not support that idea.

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Some people believe that having interviews is the best way to find new employees for a company. Others say that there are better alternative ways to appoint employees. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is a common way to employ new workers by conducting an interview process by companies. While some people argue that interviewing is by far the best option to appoint new candidates, others believe that there are other ways to employ these people.

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It is often considered that change is more beneficial to people than trying to avoid it and have everything remain the same . Do you think the advantages of changes outweigh the disadvantages?

A change in the everyday lifestyle is a prevailing improvement to humans lives. Although the main avail is that people will gain knowledge of how to tackle a problem and to change according to while on the other side it is seen as running away matter from problems. In my opinion, going for a change is far better than avoiding it and remaining in the same place.

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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Crime novels and TV crime dramas are trending these days in most of the countries mainly because one can relate to it very easily as it is based on current affairs going on in society. In my opinion, it has a kind of negative impact on the minds of the viewers which I will substantiate in the following essay with relevant examples.

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Some people argue children should stay in school until the age of 18 while others think that 14 years is long enough. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many people believe that children should continue their school education until the span of 18 and others believe that 14 years of life in school is more than enough. But I think children are the bright future of their nation and they required learning as per maturity prospects for future growth.

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These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?

At present era, parents roles have been adjusted, such as fathers are associated more in household work and mothers are performing job out of the home. The major reason for the adjustment is the expansion of education. In my opinion, it is a positive development as it promotes the prosperity of society.

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Some people believe that there should be a fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Crime rate among big cities around the globe has become a major concern for the international community. This is believed by many that a fixed punishment must be outlined for any crime committed by the criminals. However, on the contrary, many opine with the statement that the motivation and the reason behind the crime must be considered before ruling out any judgement. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the latter that circumstances and the motive behind the crime must be considered before deciding the punishment for that crime. The penultimate paragraph will explain this in detail with relevant examples.

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Technological development leads to lots of environmental issues. Some people think a simple life style can preserve environment while others argue that technology itself can solve it. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge of experience

In this contemplate era, Advancement in machinery is somehow affecting surroundings in many ways, whether these are positive or negative. While some people consider that a transformation in lifestyle can save the situation, others opine that automation is a solution in itself. Here I will discuss both the views and my opinion in the essay below.

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It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Overall, there is the conventional wisdom that each person was born with outstanding abilities manifested in a certain field and they should discover this gift and develop it throughout their life. However, there is also another opinion that this so-called giftedness does not exist and everything depends on us. Personally, from my point of view, I believe that everyone has an innate aptitude, but to be successful you need a lot of studying and self-improvement.

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