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Many things that used to be done in home by hands are now being done by machines . Does it bring more advantages or disadvantages ?

To begin with, technological advancement are accelerating at greater speed than we have ever imagined. As a result, it has helped to improve businesses, economy and educational sectors and has opened doors to many opportunities. Furthermore, health sectors has also bloomed.
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the money was given and the money was paid of a children's charity in USA in the year 2016 have many difference. do you agree with this statement

The rendered pie chart depicted the purpose of using and origins of amount of money owned by a children charity in the United State in 2016
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The traditional life style of local people in developing countries is attracting and increasing the number of tourists to the countries which has the effect of preventing local people changing to modern ways. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The given pie chart provides details of the percentage of Coca-Cola's sales for 5 different countries: namely, North America, Africa, and the Middle East, Asia, Europe, and Latin America in 2000. The line chart gives information about the number of share prices for Coca-Cola between 1996 and 2001. Overall, it can be seen that Coca-Cola was the most popular in North America, and Coca-Cola's share prices had an upward trend.
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one of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. "Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

It is true that the average lifespan of a person is increasing because of the advancement made in medical fields. In my opinion, this is a positive development. Long life does not mean that older people will live healthy. Elderly people can advice to the younger generation and help economically to the government. It has some disadvantages such as more burden on government and resource usages, however these issues can be ignored.
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Since most information about culture and history can be found on the internet, museums are not needed anymore. To what extent do you agree?

We live in an age when many people have an internet and easily can find any information about history or culture without going to museum. However physically people cannot enjoy it’s aesthetics from their phone or laptop. This essay will disagree with this statement.
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Some children start school at 7 while others start school at 4. Does starting school at a young age have more advantages than disadvantages?

School plays an essential role in everyone's life because we learn everything from there and get successful. It depends on the family that when they want their children be at the school because some children go to school at 4 and some of them at 7. In this eassy, i am going to discuss the pros and cons of it.
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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case ? Do you think this a positive or negative situation ?

It is often believed by many people that having a own building is a blessing than staying in a rented flat. In fact, people from old generations always insist on possessing a home, even if it makes them go through the pain of things like mortgages, loans etc. In my opionion, if you have a continous running source of income and enough fund balance to continue and support your family life, then I would definetly vouch for getting a house, else it is big no.
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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case ? Do you think this a positive or negative situation ?

It is often believed by many people that having a own house is a blessing than staying in a rented flat.In fact,people from old generations always insist on possessing a home ,even if it makes them go through the pain of things like mortages ,loans etc.In my opionion,if you have good continous running source of income and enough fund balance to continue and support your family life ,then I would definetly vouch for getting a house ,else it is big no.
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Some people believe that sport has an important role in society. Others, however, feel that it is nothing more than a leisure activity for some people.

Nowadays there has been positive effects that sport has gained inhabitants of society.Whereas, some people argue that the sport is not essential part of our life it needs for leisure activities.    first of all, it is undeniable facts that there are some reasons why sport is vital in society. One of the reasons is that people can be healthier more than ever before. For this reason the doctors are always recommending to people occupied with various types of sports like running, walking, hiking. Another reason is more injured inhabitants more problem for government to cure them so government do not need waste money for injured residents in the free hospital.  Obesit, heart attack, today has been decreased significantly through the world because of sport. These days young generations often tend to sedentary activities such as playing computer games instead of this parent encourage their children to do sport the children can improve their social interaction with peers. ...
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Nowadays, more people are choosing to socialize online rather than face to face. Is this a positive or negative development?

These days, people prefer to spend their spare time in online in spite of going out and
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the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in 2016 is huge. do you agree with this statement?

These 2 pie chart illustrate the differences between the money was given and the money was paid of a children’s charity in USA in the year 2016
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Television entertains, but can it also educate? Do you agree?

In argentina the tv programs are not good at all, they only shows the private life of celebrities. Although we do not have to generalize because there are really good programs on tv, like discovery. I strongly believe that the tv can educate a lot if you find the right programs.
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There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

A several nations have been living the current society and they have traditions, rules and specific music. The music is a very important thing for peoples and will be discussing how is important that for life using below the paragraph.
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An increasing number of professionals such as professors, doctors, engineers, physicians are leaving their developing countries in search of better standards of living and quality of life, higher salaries, access to advanced technology and more stable political and economic conditions in developed countries.

The following reason may cause the situation to happen.
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Television entertains, but can it also educate? Do you agree?

Nowadays many people are used to watching television for entertaining, As a consequence viewers often acquire knowledge. I think that television plays an educational role too.
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It is generally accepted that exercise is good for children and teenagers. Therefore, physical education and sport should be compulsory for all students in all schools. What do you think?

Exercise is important throughout life for all age groups to maintain both physical and mental wellbeing. Hence, making sports activities and physical education mandatory for all able-bodied students is a good idea, because it builds their exercise habits and enhances other aspects of their lives.
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Many working people get little or no exerciseeither during the working dayorin their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem? Give reasons for you answer and include any relevant examplesfrom your own knowledge or experience

The presented three pie charts compromise the amount of Australian people’s after-graduation condition from secondary school in three different categories from 1980 to 2000 in the percentage unit. Overall, the unemployment rate in Sweden had the lowest record during this period while further education and employed rates were competing together and the latter one had the upper hand.
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It is thought that the increase in youth crime rates can be linked to an increase in violence shown in the media. Do you agree that this is the main factor causing juvenile crime and what ideas can you offer to deal with the situation?

Violent scenes in the television programmes and movies are said to be the drviving force of ever-increasing rate of teenage offences. It is not the major reason why youth crime become more prevelant in many countries.
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some high schools require all students to wear school uniforms. other high schools permit students to decide what to wear to school. which of these two school policies do you think is better?

It is quite evident that most schools require students to wear uniforms while coming to school. However there are some institutions around the world that do not impose restrictions on school wears. In my opinon, I believe that a school shouldn't restrict its students to wear only uniforms everyday and should be given a leniency during alternative days.
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Children nowadays spend a great deal of time watching television. However, television cannot replace the book as a learning tool, which is why children are less well‐educated today. To what extent do you agree with this statement ?

Fuel is an essential resource to our living. We use it in many ways in our day today activities. It is a fact that our earths fuel storage is getting emptied in each second. Something has to be done to stop this massive extraction.
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