IELTS Writing Samples Band 2.5

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To agree or disagree with the statement that modern technologies is ruining the reading and writing skills of our young people is an important issue. Putting the discussion in a wider context, usage of electronic gadgets is negatively affecting natural skills lie reading and writing, has always been debatable. Even though some people think that technology has nothing to do with reading and writing skills , I wholeheartedly believe that excessive use of computers and smartphones is spoiling natural abilities of children. First I will discuss some arguments supporting my ideas about this statement, after which some aspects against that will be presented.
In the globalisation and liberalization people are engaged with their graveyard shifts, they haven't enough time for doing extra stuff curricular exercise it causes plethora of health impediments. I will discuss the why masses have not timed for exercise or what should they have to do for resolve this issue.
In recent years, people lives have greatly improved thanks to the development of cutting-edge technology. At the same time, citizens still pay close attention to artistic areas. This essay will talk about what arts brings to our lives that cannot be replaced by high-tech development.
The bar chart compares the habits of buying or drinking different types of coffee among the people in 5 different cities of Australia within last 4 weeks.
I am privileged to have an opportunity to share my skills, experiences and knowledge in aquatics sciences, in particular fish immunology and welfare. Zahra Roosta is currently obtained her post-graduate degrees, and have been considered as an expert, in fish skin mucus and aquaculture, who’s published papers in peer-reviewed journals. She has been also worked on fish reproduction physiology with emphasis on skin mucus roles, hormones’ track and gene expression. Zahra is proficient in using biology Software including SPSS, PAST, R, etc. along with histological machines and methods. Not to mention, she' s grateful to participate in some projects with the framework of endangered animal, Sturgeons' species.
It can be said, that the recidivism of convicted people is a growing tendency worldwide. The reasons of this issue derive from society itself. There is one common element among delinquents that all of them had a troubled childhood. Physically and mentally abusive parents often combined with drug addiction or alcoholism, unloving environment, and unrealistic expectations towards their children are often the main reasons why one turns out to be a lawbreaker or in a better case “just” a mentally ill person, who carries its wounds through whole life. These factors can be considered also as the motivations of backsliding but there are several other elements of this phenomena.
It is argued that investing an enormous amount in old buildings is very costly and it is better if those buildings dismantled and construct skyscrapers. In my opinion, preserving old heritage is beneficial for country economy and growth because it brings a lot of tourism and employment.
The table illustrates the information about the percentage of student who attend in 4 various kind of Secondary School from 2000 to 2009
carbon produced [emission], government need[s] to take actions. For instance, government should make [create/pass] a strict regulations to limit the [amount of carbon produced] carbon producer. If they produce carbon more than the limit [threshold], they need [are required] to pay certain amount of money to the government some amount of money . [Otherwise] or the government can also close the business if they break [violate] the regulations in several times. This initiative will scare [deter] the businesses and remind [encourage] them to maintain [sustain] our environment
Many research prove that over consumption of food is dangerous to humanbeing it is injurious to pupils health like smoking. The advertisements of certain for instance burger, pasta, maggie should be banned. Those products increase fatal diseases. I am agree to the notion.
Dear friends, Thank you so much for the wonderful trip to LasAngels of last week and thanks for sharing amazing photos of our splendid tour. I've been delaying this unprecedented visit to this city for quite a long time. It was you all who made this possible. Thanks again for the holiday and snaps you captured in your digital camera. Actually, I couldn't write this letter when I received the most awaited pictures two days ago , because I have had a walking interview yesterday. In fact, it was a sudden plan that came to my mind when I was looking at the newspaper after returning from the USA excursion. Anyway, you guys have to come to my place and we can spend some quality time together. We would also visit the nearby hot spring and South Korean Cuisine centre to enjoy some delicious meals. You people can decide the date tell me so that I can buy some drinks and snacks in advance to make time more memorable. See you all soon. Sunil
Whilst a mixed belief that hard work and determination supersedes wealth and physical appearance to be successful in life. Notwithstanding, some merits of later view, my opinion is that dedication and persistence are the keys to success. Explicated below are my perspectives on both these views and the basis of my belief.
The ubiquity of student's participation in various activities outside the realm of normal school curriculum has become so apparent that some people are questioning its significance on them. In my opinion, such involvement, albeit non-academic, contributes largely to their self-development.
It is important for modern schools to provide not only standard academic curriculum like math and grammar but also some kind of health education which imply the comprehensive teaching youngsters how to manage their lifestyle in the most appropriate way. This is because habits that were developed in the younger age influence the whole future life of people. Health educational program should lead children in a most healthier way and explain to them the harm of using alcohol and tobacco as well as eating unhealthy food and teach them about puberty, reproduction, AIDS, alcohol and other substance abuse, and other relevant issues.
Some people may believe that punishing criminals equally and without considering their crimes can be an appropriate approach to deal with offenders. Let's imagine we have faced with two criminals in a court; first person has charged with murder and the second one has charged with drunk-driving. Should we execute both offenders? Or putting them to prison for couple of month? Absolutely neither. Therefore, if we think logically, we will easily found that crimes must be categorized and a judge should judge lawbreakers according to their crime.
Nowadays people conversation through social media is significantly increasing,as a result of this face to face intraction are being replaced.Onilne conversation made a people life easier than used to be.This have a more pron than cons.
The diagram displays the process of gathering and broadcasting weather related data by the Australian Bureau of Meteorology. This data is collected up-to-the-minute to maintain the accuracy of their prediction.
The given table graph demonstrates us how many people worked on part-time jobs in 1980 and 2010 in each country of the UK
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