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Some people think that hard work and determination are the keys to success in life. Some, on other hand, think that there are other factors behind a successful life. Give your opinion.

Honestly speaking, this topic is highly challenging to me. However, I still have attended a monument in Vung Tau, Vietnam which has a profound meaning. Now, let's turn into more detail.
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A significant change in education has led students around the world to obtain knowledge, either in the theoretical or the practical field

A significant change in education has led students around the world to obtain knowledge, either in the theoretical or the practical field. Generally speaking, many universities in the world have provided a good system in education with a purpose to improve the quality of education offered to their students. To make a good system to be more implemented, universities commonly give students the a time to gain experience in the practical field. The opportunity could be a program with the aim to encourage students in applying their theoretical knowledge in practice.
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With a growing world population, one of the most pressing issues is that of feeding such a large number of people. Some people think that GM food offers a viable solution to this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays the modern world is faced with a problem of hunger in some parts of the world and feeding such a large number of people. It has origins in a growing world population during the last centuries. other people opinion that GM foods are possible way to solve this problem with widespread famine due to overpopulation.
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Many people believe that cigarette smoking has had a negative impact for far too long and the only solution to end ot, is to make cigarettes illegall worldwide. To what extent to you agree or disagree? Give explanations and examples to support your opinion.

it is argued that some people think it is better to make cigarettes more banned in nations because of their bad impact on health and increasing the number of smokers.This essay totally agree with this point of view .
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Some people say in order to prevent illness and disease, government should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problem to what extent do you agree or disagree

A wide range of individuals believe that the most effective key to avoid the negative impact of the illness and disease is the concentration of the government on cut down on the environmental pollution and housing effect. This author agree with the opinion and will give and essay to explain why is it?
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People who go live in other countries should follow their customs and traditions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today's contemporary era, the who people migrate to foreign countries, must follow that country's customs and traditions. I strongly agree with the metioned statement. In continue, this essay intends to explain why those people should pursue the custums and tradition of the country where they live? Among a short conclusion.
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The changing rates of crime in the inner city from 2003-2012

The line graph compares replacement criminality which happened in the various regions of New Port city center between 2003 and 2012.
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you recently visited a famous mobile showroom and you are not happy about the service you received from the company and you have decided to complain about it. Write an email to the company in 150- 200 words to complain about the poor service you received from its employee. In your email, express: • why you went to the shop/office • how the employees behaved to offend you • what you expect the company to do

Dear Store Manager, I hope this email finds you well. My name Lisa Akter, a loyal customer at your store, located Dufferin Mall, store no 12. Unfortunately I must bring to your attention a rather unpleasant expericed that I encountered duing my recent visit.
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Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motorbike. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is an opinion that the surefire way to facilitate road safety is to uplift the threshold of legal age for gaini ng a license for driving a transport. This essay agrees with the statement due to the fact that the most car accidents are associated with the youngest driving generation.
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An increasing number of schools provide tablets and laptop computers for students to use in school, replacing books and other printed materials like exams and assigments. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

Throughout world, more and more schools prefer tablets and laptop computers for their pupil rather than traditional learning materials. Although printed study tools have helped us to possess knowledge for centuries, new tech equipment is more useful for today's fast paced world.
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These days young children spend a lot of time using computers, tablet and smartphones. Some people think that introducing children to technology at a young age is beneficial. Others believe that they would benefit more from traditional games. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge and experience.

Children Nowadays are more advanced than our previous generation, a significant population think that it is better not to introduce smart technogies in early age. In my opinion, It is benificial for children to accomodate with currrent technology. To present my opinion I will provide some examples to support my statement
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Nowadays we can watch entertainment performances for the screen and no need to watch in live. To what extent do you agree or disagree

These days majority of people can look at some activities on TV screens or on the computer and mobile phone and they do wanted watch live. I totally agree with this and I will discuss it.
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There are many zoos around the world these days. What are the causes of it? Is this a positive or negative development?

Nowadays there are many zoos around the world. The reason of that from ancient times people tame wild animals. Thus, this tradition saved for these days. From my opinion, for animals better to live in natural environment then to be keep indoors or it should be large area close to natural.
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Multicultural societies, where people of different groups live together, bring more benefits than drawbacks to a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Whith the growth of population, the number of multicultural societies are increasing dramatically all around the world. Societies that people who are from different nations is belived to be more beneficial. I completely disagree with this statment so multicultucultural societies cause not olnly cultural demage but economical issue as well.
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One of the consequence of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

The medical field is expanding and improving over time,and life expectancy is growing and people are living longer,the access to good health care is in the hands of everybody,with the developing technology worldwide and better disease management.While it is now easier to get health insurance the fees could be expensive for some people causing a huge financial stress.
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Some teachers think that international student exchange would be beneficial for all teenage school students. Do you think its advantages will outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It has been an argue that the presence internationall student and their interaction with local students in the school is beneficial or not. while some indicate it as advanterous and beneficial,ohers are not supporting this topic.This subject will be discussed by me in the following essay.
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IELTS Regional household recycling rates

The line graph shows 200 the percentage of levels of regional household recycling in three countries, namely (France, Germany and the UK) between 2005 and 2015.
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Most high level positions in companies are filled by men eventhough the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50%female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain % of these positions to women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays women are equally capable to fit in high level positions in great companies. It's critic to focus on this matter and encourage companies to fit more women in important positions. Also there should be an organization to check companies and their percentages of hiring women for crutial positions. In this procedure, it's good to educate more women mentaly to believe that they are capable to work in big positions. Also, managers need to be trained about trusting women and their potentials on acting in important roles. Every persons potentials are different. That's why we can't say that exactly 50% of women should be hired for important roles. In one company 70% of employees might be women or in another corporate might be 30% women and 70% men. Furthermore, it can be a brilliant idea to encourage employees to study and update their abilities and then compare them with their abilities and their knowledge. It's a better way to find competable people for the right positions and not...
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Some belief that money for education should mainly be spent on better computers while others believe it would be better spent on teachers.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In today's globalised world some consider that money should spent on better modern gadgets, other think that it is better spent on teachers. In this essay I will discus both wievpoint and include my own opinion.
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Some people think that the government should be responsible for crime prevention, while others believe that it is the responsibility of each individual to protect themselves. Discuss both views and give your opinion

It is commonly believe that the government ought to accountable for crime prevention, although some people are of the opinion that the responsibility of the person to take care themselves. I considered that prevent crime should be on government than on individual.
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