IELTS Writing Samples Band 3.5. Page 120

IELTS Writing Samples Band 3.5

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Many countries on the world are developing their tourism. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Nowdays so many countries become too dependent on tourism. It becomes a promising economic resources for the development of county. I think it's made a positive impact. The reason will be given in the next paragraphs.

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The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The picture depicts the stark contrast between GARNGE PARK in 1920 and its current state.

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Some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their own health, others believe that government should make sure that their are healthy.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People have different beliefs on whose responsibility it is to take care of their health. While some say it is the individual's responsibility, others believe it is the government's function to make sure its citizen are healthy.

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The plans below show a student room for two people and a student room for one person at an Australian university.

The given floor plans illustrates the layout of 2 distinct student rooms designed for one person and for two people at a particular Australian university.

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People are surrounded by advertising which has an increasing effect on our lives. Do you think the positive effects of this outweigh the negative effects?

In modern times, technology has a strong effect on people's lives. Especially, advertisements which spread in everywhere. Some people believe that advertisement has many drwbacks while, others including myself I opin that the benefits of this trend outweigh the negative points.

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Some people think that sport is very important for society. Others, however, argue that it is nothing more than a leisure activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.（重复2011 年老题）

While it is widely claimed that sport is just a free time activity, some argue that sport is more than an activity and it is significant for a community. Both points of view and the reason why I believe that sport is not just a leisure activity will be elaborated on this essay.

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Nowadays, an increasing number of people with health problems are using alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their normal doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

These days, most of pationts have decided to use medicines on their owns instead of the doctores' prescriptions. From my point of view, using medicines without adequet knowledge in this case can have far-reaching consequences. Thus, it is completely a negative developement, and I will discuss my reasons below.

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Social Interaction is getting destroyed due to technology such as mobile phones. Do you agree or disagree?

Verbal communication between people are destroyed due to technology. I agree with this statement because development of social media platforms and non verbal communication reduce social interaction.

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Some people believe that range of technology currently is increasing gap between rich and poor people. Others think that it is causing opposite . Discuss both views and give your opinion.

According to the statement from the United Nations, especially the UNDP, the gap between the rich and poor widens. From that, I believe that the range of technology gap between the high and low class enlarged. Nowadays, it can be seen that technology varies more, hence the prices of the types of technology increases. For example, the technology named VR cost more than an android phone year 2019, making the tech unreachable for the poor.

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Some people believe that it is better to live in a city, while others prefer countryside life. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People's living places and their preferences varies some believe it is better to live in cities whilst I believe countryside is better for living. In this essay, I discuss both views and give my opinion also.

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People today often use the internet to learn about the culture of other countries. This means that it is not that important to travel to those countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this modern era, online tool has become the most important aspect in today's generation for the purpose of learning western culture instead of personally visiting there. I am totally disagree with the above notion and below I will elucidate my opinion with the support of examples.

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some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary . Do the advantages outweigh the disavantages?

Being a multilinguistic can actually open many opportunities in someone's life. It can also create an additional point in career. A lot of experts believe that the child should start learning a new foreign language in primary class instead of secondary. It is the best and an effective way to learn new thing. This essay will discuss abot some advantages regard to this matter.

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State your opinion. Should kids be given phones at a young age?

In recent times it has been debatable that should young children have access to mobile phones. We are now living in a technological era whereby almost accessible from a click of button, so in my opinion children should be given phones.

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Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say this is a positive trend, while others argue that it leads to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion.

Some people believe computer usage in education leads to negative consequences. Whereas I believe this could create more positive changes in education.

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It is common nowadays for each member of family to have their own peace of modern technology. Some people think that this will lead to a break down in the family relationships and communication to what extent do you agree or disagree.

In our new modern world each person who related to a family have a particular personal technologycal device ; however , a substaintial number of indeviduals guess that this will destroy the family ties. Though , as I agree with this idea , I will explain some views in this essay to make it clear.

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Teenagers nowadays spend too much time on playing video games. Describe the effects on teenagers, families and society. Report the measures to solve the problem.

Video consoles give a strong influence to adolescents and their surroundings. This essay will discuss how this happens and the suitable way to overcome it.

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Studying online is far more effective than studying on campus. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this modern society, there are 2 ways to study which are studying online or studying on campus. Some people believe study with modern way are more effective for some reasons, while others think to go to campus and study there are better ideas. Personally, I agree with this statement and this essay will give an explanation why learning traditionally is much more efficient than online learning.

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Some people think that parents should limit the time their children spend watching TV and playing computer games and encourage them to read books instead. Do you agree or disagree?

Recently, quite a lot of children are keen on spending time on screen, such as playing online games or watching TV. I am convinced that these time should be restricted by their parents, and more time should be focused on readings instead.

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"Is Advertising Still an Effective Tool in Commerce?

It is generally believed that tempting people to purchase things through advertising is a great way to succeed in commerce. Others are opposed to the idea mentioned above that the commercials are becoming an old method to attract people.

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unemployment rate of ireland. please make a summary and compared when relevant

The given line graph illustrates the number of unoccupied people who lived in Ireland. Overall, it is readily apparent that the jobless rate was corresponding to the people departing from Ireland as both showed a similar trend. However, although the latter was moderately higher than the unemployed citizens proportion, the proportion in the last couple of years showed vice versa.

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