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It is no longer necessary that animals should be slaughtered and made into either human foodstuffs or non-foodstuffs, such as fur and medicine. Do you agree or disagree?

The line graph illustrates every year's income on average in four nations from 1995 to 2019. Overall, wage changes in Japan could hardly be seen, whilst Greece presented a sharp increase and decrease over the period. Moreover, there was constant growth tendency between New Zealand and Poland.
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Some people think that children should be taught to be competitive in school. Others however say that corporation and teamwork in schools are more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

A section of society holds a belief that children need to be adapted with competetive surrounding in school. On the contrary, some opine that corporation and teamwork are more imperative during learning in schools. In this essay, i will outline the both issues, as well as, my point of view regarding this matter.
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Improvement in health, education, science and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations however the government or richer nations should take responsibility for helping the poor nations. Do you agree or disagree?

In this modern era, many poor countries suffered from many problems such as health , education , science and in businesses this all problems are very major to every countries therefore many well developed countries come for the help. I completely agree if this will happen.
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Nowadays many people choose to be self employed, rather than to work for a company or an organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of self employment

Nowadays many people take the path to self-employment instead of having a job, which is dependent on a large company or an organisation.
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Doctors, nurses and teacher make a great contribution to society and should be payed more than entertainment and sport celebrities. Do you agree or disagree?

Education and health services, are the most essential factors in todays world because of the distributions of technology and deaseases. I strongly agree with the theory of replacing the salary amount of doctors, nurses and teachers with the celebrities in other firms.
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Many people fell it is waste of money to try to save endangered animal species , for example the tiger or blue whale . To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement ?

In this contemporary era, people become very clever on using money also they feel that saving wild animals and sea species are waste of the money so that i against this statement therefore i completely disagree with this matter and I would give reason why it is important to save animals in upcoming paragraphs.
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In order to solve traffic problems, governments should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation. Do the advantages of such method outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, problem of traffic jams is increased dramatically all over the world so government should take some actions against this problem such as increasing tax amount also government start new routes ,improve the roads and develop transport system. In this essay, I would benefits and drawbacks of this problem.
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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

In most of the world, global warming is rapid to increase in currently, mostly reasons to people abandoning rubbish quantity raising day by day. In this essay, I will discuss a view of the points below.
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You have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course.

Hello, sorry for you inconvenience. I’m a Business Management Diploma Course student. (BM-105) My name is Rose Ng. Student Number : 190875. I inform you I will quit the course next month.
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. some peopre fhlnk sports ond gornes orc importonl for sociely, while ofhers beft'eve they should be foken os leisure ocfivifies. Discuss bolh yiews ond give your opinio

Several individuals select to be self-employed rather than working as a professional. Both of these choices are a personal preferences of an individual. Both these have some negatives and positives. In my personal ,opinion i would choose to be self-employed rather than a working professional.
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Studies have shown that in many countries the income gap be tween the rich and poor is ever increasing. What problems can arise from this situation and what could be done to address this situation?

It is true that the income gap between the wealthy and poverty is ever going up worldwide. Numerous problems have resulted from the phenomenon, and several effective steps should be taken by individuals and the government to tackle them.
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During the last century, the use of cars has increased dramatically. This has caused problems such as pollution and overcrowded roads. Why do people buy cars and what can we do to stop people from buying them?

It is true that because of the increased use of cars, there are more pollution and overcrowded road problems worldwide. There are numerous reasons for the buying car trend, and several steps need to be taken by individuals and the government to solve them.
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The world of work is rapidly changing and employees cannot depend on having the same job or the same working conditions for life. Discuss the possible causes and suggest ways to prepare people to work in the future.

The given line graph compares the smuggle of Australia with other countries namely Japan, the USA and China in percentage between the period 1990 to 2012.
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When talking about success, we often think of people who are rich or famous. In your opinion, what are the qualities that characterise a successful person? Why do you think these should be the criteria?

The given line graph compares the changes in three different crimes namely burglary, car theft and robbery that took place in New Port city centre between the period 2003 and 2012.
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In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe that it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

In some areas , the high speed of population growth is increasing the demand for new places to accomodate the community ,however, it is clear that society is not ready to solve this inflation,and it is inevitable that policymakers have to extent cities within borders ,however, many specialists argue with and allege the size of town must be limited,to illustrate both sides, I will explore in all possible drawbacks and benefits to this issue and give my personal opinion.
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Deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many parts the word, with serious results for the environment. What do you think can be done to solved this problem

plants are the magnification creation of essence.moreover the photosynthesis process plays a vital role in dynamically balance in the environment.Nowadays various human processes directly affect this environmental balance.As a result ,it makes it a more serious problem for mother nature.
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summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant

The bar chart provides data about the residents' percentage in purchasing and drinking habits of tea and coffee in five cities in Australia.
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Some childeren spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or negatif development?

The bar chart compares the proportion of Americans who had meals at fast food eateries in three separate years (2003, 2006, and 2013).
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Full-time university students spend a lot of time studying.Some say they should be involved in other activities as well. What extent do yoy agree or disagree!

Spending more time for college pupils in studying, however several people suggest that they shouls also participate in campus activity, I'm in the point that totally agree with the statemets. The paragraph below are the reasons why I agree with the statements.
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At the present, the population of some countires includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

The mean age of each county is the main factor that will bring pros and cons for the society, however, both young and elderly nations have own advantages vs disadvantages, but, the role of youngers has not uneveitable, alingside, each country needs to olders for transmitting values to next generation, so, I will explore on this issue in upcoming paragraphs.
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