IELTS Writing Samples Band 3.5. Page 132

IELTS Writing Samples Band 3.5

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in the modern world, the photograps or films is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, the interactions between people are mainly dependent on sending pictures or videos to each other rather than using written words. I agree with the above mentioned notion and a concrete answer is given below in subsequent paragrapshs.

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In some countries، owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. why might this be the case? do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

We should not provide universal basic income because it will make the government poor. The government needs to spend a lot to fight with economic downturn, unemployment and social injustice. So we need to save money for necessities, not for poverty. According to a research, introducing the provision of universal basic income will lead to an economic crisis which will take around 100 years to recover. More, this policy will make inflation inevitable.

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Some people believe more actions can be taken to prevent crime, while others think that little can be done. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, tackling crime is one of the most virtual issues that the society has to deal with, besides , that it is possible to introduce the effection. This essay will illustrate that more action should be taken so as to create a safety public.

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People in big cities are facing many health challenges due to a high level of air pollution. What causes air pollution in big cities? Can you suggest some ways to deal with this situation? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In contemporary society, air pollution has been one of the biggest issues to concern. As more and more people have to face it everyday, we need to have awareness and how to deal with it as soon as possible.

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Some people say that adverting is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Others think that advertisement is common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss the both these views and give your opinion.

It is true that advertisement has become an essential part for businesses in all areas of marketing. However, while some people tend to consider them as tedious and annoying, I do not completely agree with this idea.

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Some people thinks computer games have negative impacts on children. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Nowadays, it has been a growing concern that children are becoming addicted to online games. Many individuals argue that this trend is having a negative effect on children's overall development. I completely agree with this notion and thus give my stand with a pertinent argument in the upcoming paragraphs.

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Some peope argue that many rural people are leaving countryside recently. I strongly believe that most people hope to live in cities. that will be no good effect for us.

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Some people decide to start their own business instead of working for a company or organisation. Do the advantages for people working for their own business outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent years,there has been a noticeable trend in starting a business. The reason is independence and flexibility, suitable for the amount of people who seek novelty and self-command at work. And it is also the independence that brings a lot of challenges. From my point of view, the disadvantages of owning a business do outweigh the advantages.

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It is better for students to study from home rather than go to school.Do you agree ordisagree with this statement?

Currently,people's life is developing in the way of technology and it also has a big impact on studies of students.This essay will disagree that students will better when study from home.

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According to this bar graph,we can see the difference of weekly spending by families between 1968 and 2018. Reporting the main features and differences

Overall,families’ costs changed in these years.Firstly, I want to start with food.Families spent 35 % of their income on food in 1968.But, this percentage changed in 2018,it was be average of 17 %. The second one is housing. It consisted of 10 % in 1968.However, this percentage increased about 9 % in 2018. The third one is the spending on fuel and power,which is necessary at every time.The rate of this is 6 %.But it decreased in 2018.The other comparison about Clothing and footwear, in 1968 spending more than in 2018. It’s interesting that the cost rate of household goods was equal in 1968 and 2018.Also, the information about personal goods is also noted. It is less than in 2018.The other one is the transport fee.It was only 8 % in 1968.But, this percentage changed in 2018.Eventually, the last one is leisure.There was a big difference in this field. So, the percentage in 2018 was approximately three times more than in 1968.This research displays us with more interesting facts about it.

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It is better for student to study from home rather than go to school . Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, everything is very modern and technology is developed. So students learn at home are better than going to school. In my view, I agree with this statement and I will explain the reason why.

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Some people believe more actions can be taken to prevent crime, while others think that little can be done. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Many indivituals think that additional measures should be introduced to reduce crime whearas other people believe that nothing can be done to change the the current situation. This essay will show that mor can be done to tackle the crime problem and will outline the main reasons how this can be achieved.

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Successful companies use advertisements to make more sales. What can make an advertisement effective? Do you think advertisemnts are a bad thing or a good thing for the society?

In this modern era advertising play important role in making companies successful. Strong companies use advertisements to increase their percent of sales. In upcoming paragraph i will suggest some ways to make an advertisement creative and i think it is a good thing for society.

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the family values are deteriorating ,what are the positive and negative changes? what is your opinion

In this modern era family values are disbalanced nowadays due to overuse of gadgets and drug addiction . I will discuss both positive and negative thoughts in the upcoming peragraph. I think it is a negative development.

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Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think it is important for children to go to school. Discuss both the advantages of each method and give your own opinion

Given are two graphs concerning the use of the internet in Europe. While the first table reveals the figures for internet clients in various European countries in 1995, 2000, and 2004, measured in million, the second pie chart indicates the popularity of online purchases in those nations. Overall, there was an upward trend witnessed in the number of internet users in every country researched, with the most significant changes belonged to that of the UK. Meanwhile, an overwhelming majority of online shopping was accounted for by France.

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some people think that public health is responsible of the government while others think that individuals are responsible for their health Dicuss both views and give your opinion.

Given two graphs concerning the using the Internet-> issue. While the former table reveals the number of people connected to the Internet in five main nations namely Switzerland, Germany, France, Spain and the UK, from 1995 to 2004, measured in millions, the latter pie chart demonstrates the figure of using the Internet for shopping online in these countries in 2004. Overall, almost all nations had a growth progressive pattern of shopping on the Internet in France was the most significant.

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It is better for student to study from home rather than go to school. Do you agree or disagree with this statement

While many people believe that learning at home is more effectively than learning at school, in my opinion, I believe that studying at school is more better than at home.

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It is better for student to study from home rather than go to school. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The majority of people think that studying at home is better than going to school. This writer disagrees with this statement and will explain why in the essay below. Firstly, it can be seen that all children in over the world have to go to school when they are 6. This rule is published by the Government and people must do it in order to increase the education for children and help them to have knowledge. Secondly, teachers at school have abilities to help students gain knowledge. It can be observed that before becoming a teacher, people have to pass a lot of testsmoreoverthey have to have some quality responsibility, love their job and so on. So we can easily recognize that when students go to schoolthey can have a lot of benefits. Thirdly, going to school helps children to avoid illiteracy . In Vietnam people did not go to school so the result was illiteracy and they found it difficult with news from another place so some patriots opened classes for all ages to cut off illit...

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the plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.

The given maps compare the facilities and their locations in a public park at first opening in 1920 and today.

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Some people believe hat dogs are batter than cats, as a vers In the winter's perspective, dogs are the best partners in life

One reason to support dogs can protect the owners better than eat. That is to say, because of dog's appearance looked strong and aggressive nature can be easy to protect the owner and abo with this shape, dogs help their owners stay away from danger. As a result, the owners will be protected by highly self-defence

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