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Many feel that happiness is mainly an individual responsibility while others feel that there are important external factors. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is an common opinion that only a person themselves can make themselves happy, whereas others believe that it depends on others and things around them. This essay will discuss both these points of view and argue in favour of the latter.
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Global warning is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what Measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?

This essay will outline some possible reasons for this,as well as suggesting some solutions. First of all,one of the most important factors is the emissions of greenhouse gases.Like,carbon dioxide and methane.They produce from different resources.For example,two important and serious resources are the burning of fossil fuels and gasoline from transportation,so they distribute to the air and become polluted. Another factor is deforestation.If we cut down the trees, the most habitat will dama...
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Because of the rising cost of the housing, many young people are increasingly being forced to live with their parents into their 30s. Do the advantages of this trend over weigh the disadvantages?

Property prices went up extreamly, it cause young adults to live with their parents even after their 30s. Although there is advantages for this situation but I see disadvantages outweigh it.
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Some people think that the best way to reduce the crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe that there are better alternatives of reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is an opinion that longer punishment periode for prisoner can decrease crime rates.
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Nowadays, more and more children are being brought up in single parents family. What are the cause of this? What effect can be seen as a result of this

In recent times, most kids grow up in a nuclear family, where the only family members besides the kids are the parents. Throughout this essay, I will explore the reasons for this trend and the various effects it can have on the child.
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Some people say it is more important to plant trees in the open spaces in towns and cities than to build more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In our developing century new cities and planted zones are being generated in a open spaces especially in towns. Facing with some natural problems I prefer to increase planting trees, then to prevent housing problems by building houses in town.
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Some people prefer to go to health clubs and gyms for health care, some say the walking and climbing stairs are more effective. Discuss both vies and give your opinion.

Few people think going for health clubs and gyms improve health and some believe that walking and climbing stairs are beneficial.I personally believe that regular visit of health care and gyms increases health.In this I will discuss the both views and give my opinion.
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Some people believe that a county becomes more interesting and develops faster when its population includes a mixture of different nationalities and cultures. Do you agree or disagree ?

The line chart compares the average emissions of carbon dioxide of each people in the UK, Sweden, Italy and Portugal over a period of 40 years.
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Many young people are leaving their homes in rural areas to study or work in the cities. What are the reasons? Do the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?

Most of the youth generation are moving from urban areas to work or study in the cities. While the number of unemployed people very high in villages, they must move to the cities to earn money. The advantages in this situation outweigh disadvantages.
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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The rules of childrens' education has always been a highly debated issue. One of the recent debated issues is that whether oblige adultscents to do voluntary works or not.
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In the future, nobody wiil buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, many books and newspaper are no longer printed due to its’ modernism. From my point of view, i agree with this statement and will provide further details to substantiate my argument.
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Some people say Technology has improved our world. do you agree or disagree with this view?

The graph represents the number of hours of leisure spent by working males and working females in a week during the time period from 1998-1999. So the graph depicts this comparison among various segments-people employed full time or part-time, people who are unemployed, retired, housewives.
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some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. discuss both views and state your opinion?

some people believe that hosting an international sports event bring lot of benefits for countries while other person think that it has some disadvantage . this essay will show both point of view.
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In some cultures, the old age is more valued, while in some cultures the youth is more valued. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Depending on age, some cultures provide younger generation, when others respect more old age people. In my point of view, elder people experienced more and lived longer than younger generation, that is why old age should be more valued these days.
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Bullying is a big problem in many schools. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Bullying - is one of the main problems of all the time. This problems was in the earlier life and still continues to bother modern society.
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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In today's world, it is casual to get the same kind of things easily. Because there is a same kind of development in all countries. Although, all countries are similar, there are some pros and cons. This essay will discuss the both views in the below paragraphs.
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Reading books keeps a person’s mind active, whereas watching films and television is passive and does not require a person to use their imagination. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Books are a man's best friend. Reading books helps to develop one's thinking capacity and intellectual. I completely agree with the statement and the following discussion will support my cause.
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Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph indicates the amount of fish and other kinds of meat consumed by people in a European nation from 1979 to 2004.
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In some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them. Whare are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home?

In some countries, a lot of people would rather rent their houses than to purchase them. In this essay i will be talking about the advantages and disadvantages of renting a house.
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The Government Should Ban Smoking In All Public Places, Even Though This Would Restrict Some People’s Freedoms.

Everyone has the freedom to make their own decision to smoke or not to smoke. However, most people who do smoke know that it is harmful to their health but due to but due to the craving / the addiction they continue the use. Smoking ban in public places severely restricts a person’s opportunities to smoke.
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