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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people believe that the most important skill for nurses is strong medical knowledge, while others think that other qualities are more essential. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The question of whether children should be granted with fully freedom from the adolescence years of the age, was always a topic of debate and now becomes more controversial due to its profound implications on their overall development. Although, Independency plays a crucial role in their lives, In my opinion, limited allocation of freedom to juveniles is acceptable.

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More and more plastic is polluting the city, countryside and ocean. What are the problems caused by plastic waste? What measures should be taken to solve these problems?

Plastic waste becomes the utmost issue in the world whether it is in city, village or in rivers. Although, there are multifarious problems that are occured due to plastic yet it could be combat by taking right steps on time. In this essay, I will explore both the viewpoint that what are the effects of plastic pollution and how it is resolved in the following paragraphs.

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Plastic bags, plastic bottles, and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. What damage does plastic do to the environment? What can be done by governments and individuals to solve this problem?

Through a scientific researches and journals, many scientists have discovered that the usage of plastic products are harmful for the environment. Earth activists have started their campaign widely since a long time ago, following the massive plastic use in the every day life. This finding has led the urgency of every stakeholders to take a stance towards the prevention of the manufacture of plastic-based products.

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It is better for students to know how to solve problems they will deal with in their future life. Other believe students should learn how to find undiscovered problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In this contemporary era few people recon that the issues which will be faced by students,solution should be described to them, while other deem that they should learn the solutions to nonrecogonised problems by themselves.However I believe that learners should learn by themselves about the hidden problems and their solutions. Although both views have their own reason i would like to stay with later view.

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Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

It is undeniable that punishing people who illegal driving ensures the safety of traffic, while many individuals believe measures should be strict. Although I can see convincing arguments behind punishing driver for safety purpose, I strongly opine that suitable system is the best way to decrease crime rates.

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Nowadays, people are moving to other countries to seek jobs. Some people think it affects the children of such home negativity while some others think it is beneficial to them. Discuss both sides and state your opinion

In recent years, many are migrating to various foreign nations for work-life balance. Some advocates that it may make huge differences in relation between family and children whereas most contend that it is definitely a good step towards their future. In my view, it really helps the new generation to achieve their goal.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Students have different views about choices of disciplines what they should do at university. While some believe that it would be preferred for students to pay attention to only the primary subjects, others think that they should study different subjects. I argue that everyone should be able to choose the subjects what they want.

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Many parents today organise extra classes for their children after school and at the weekends. Do you feel that this is a worthwhile thing to do? Or do you feel children have enough education at school? Give reasons for your answer and include any

Nowadays, a vast majority of parents arrange additional classes for their children after school and on holidays. It is undeniable that extra lessons have become an essential part of education, and it is important to have more exercises, but other kids who never participated such classes get higher accomplishments and become successful.

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There are many different types of music in the world today.

There are many types of music in the world according to historian factors of music styles formation and development according to climate, culture aspects, purpose of music and culture maturity level.

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In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays , many countries' population are living longer. Some people claim that the older people create problems for the govenment. But others argue that benefits from older generation outweight the drawbacks for the society. I think that older people does not cause any difficulties for the managment and] yields only advantages.

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In many countries nowadays, consumers can go to a supermarket and buy food produced all over the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

In recent days customer have option to explore many overseas products in near by local stores which produced by other countries. By using foregin products, we have both pros and cons on this development. I will be discussing both points through this essay. However, I believe it a good growth.

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Some experts believe that when a country is already rich, any additional increase in economic wealth does not make its citizens any more satisfied. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The importance of a country's economic wealth has always debatable and has now become more controversial with many people claiming that is beneficial for economic growth, while others reject this option. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational as public's overall satisfaction. In this essay, I will further elaborate on the negative impact of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.

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Topic: Some experts believe that when a country is already rich, any additional increase in economic wealth does not make its citizens any more satisfied. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The importance of country's economic wealth was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that is beneficial as a economic growth, while others reject this option. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational as people's overall satisfaction. In this essay, I will further elaborate the negative impact of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.

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The world has seen an enormous increase in flights for leisure,business and commercial purpose around the world over recent years. What do you think are the main advantages and disadvantages of such flights? Do you think flight should be texted more?

In this technical world, everyone is in rush to gain success and live later life comfortabely. Nowadays, it is a cup of tea to cover huge miles within a short time period with the help of increase number of flights. If something gives benefits to us then we can not denay to face its drawbacks. There are multifarious pros and cons of this air transport and I am going to discuss briefly in upcoming paragraphs. According to me, flying should be sent more texted to overcome their passengers stress level.

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The only way to improve the safety of our roads is to give much stricter punishments for driving offenses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The most possible way to reduce road accidents is by strictly punishing those driving inattentively. I completely agree with this statement. This essay will provide several arguments supporting my viewpoint.

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Some people believe that parks are essential for public well-being, while others argue that land should be used for housing instead.

There is no denying the fact that parks are important. While it is a commonly held belief that there are spaces of land that are used by public places. It is also an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, I consider that we should be using areas to build houses.

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The proportion of income adults and children spent on 4 common items in UK in 1998.

The table illustrates the percentage of earnings spent by grown-ups and kids on 4 frequent items in the United Kingdom in 1998, namely food, electronic equipment, music and videos.

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In some countries young people are not only richer, but also safer and healtier than ever before. However, they are often less happy and more agiatated in actions and behaviors. what do you think are the reasons for this and what can be done to help?

In recent years, younger generation are tend to be financially stable, safe and medically sound than before. Nevetheless, they are perturbed and sad. I believe this is due to employments and emotional struggles, and the best solution is lessen time spent at work and foster family bonding.

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The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The first British car drove on roads in 1888. Since then the ownership of cars have risen exponentially. Ther are more than 29 million vehicles on British roads nowadays. Other forms of transport may be encouraged to avoid congestion but restrictions on car ownership and use should not be encouraged.

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Q. In some parts of the world traditional festivals and celebrations have disappeared or are disappearing. What problems is this causing? What measures could be taken to counter this situation?

Today, most countries are facing with the dissipation of the traditional festivals and holidays and it is becoming worse. It may cause for disappearing of the certain regions and the religions. To solve this issue, governments should set new trends among young generation like wearing traditional clothes once or twice a week in schools and kindergartens, beside of that, they need to inform youngsters in early years by introducing new subjects about traditions.

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