IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 110

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Nowadays, many less-known lenguages have been forgotten and some believe that it is not a problem because we can communicate easily using small means of lenguages in the world. I totally agree this because by this way people must learn an international lenguage from scratch and try to reach out more connections to practice, also this will bring save money for the translators, programs and language builders.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes mant health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

"Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems" this definition is absolutely true and I agree with this. But I am not sure about the increase in the price of sugary products for the solution. In this Essay, I would like to evaluate this topic.

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Many feel that happiness is mainly an individual responsibilty while others feel that there are important external factors. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Happiness is essential in human life due to you will not be able to work or study without happiness in other words happiness gives you motivate. The question is, the happiness a human responsibility or there are other necessary sources. In my opinion, The happiness is your responsibility because nobody will help you at this. In this essay, I am going to discuss both views and give my opinion.

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Many people today find they have insufficient time to spend with their families, bacause of pressures of work.What problems does this create for individuals and their families?what solutions can you propose ?which would be the most effective solution, in your view?

Undoubtedly, with the esculation of individuals' stress, people have less time to spend with their families. Although there will be some negative concequences on this trend, society can take some solusions to mitigate these problems.

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Many people have a close relationship with their pets. These people treat their birds, cats, or other animals as members of their family. In your opinion, are such relationships good? Why or why not?

In modern era, the society's norm tends to support the idea of "healthy relationship" with their own pets, peacefully residing at their own homes. This however, is a very controversial topic. Such healthy relationship can be considered good in common sense and logics yet there might be few disadvantages we may fail to see.

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Cooking food is a waste of time in today’s hectic life. Fast food restaurants are helpful in modern living and it is less stressful. Do you agree or disagree?

Cooking food in out time is a waste of time as you can spend time and money on some other things, is that most people think nowadays. On my opinion it's only partially true

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In many countries, young people are choosing to live alone rather than with their families. Why is this ? What problems does it cause?

In recentyears, young people tend to live alone instead of living with their families. Thus is primarily derived from the independence, while it can lead to financial pressure and homesickness.

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How has the contribution of different economic sectors (agriculture, industry, and services) to India’s GDP changed from 1960 to 2000?

The bar chart below shows the percentage of contribution,in India between 1960 to 2000 among three categories namely: cultivation, industry and services.

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In many countries nowadays,more and more women have full-time jobs as men,so there is logic men and women should share the housework tasks equally(like cleaning and looking after children).To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this fast-growing society men and women are engaged in full-time jobs so they can share the family financial requirements. At the same time there is an argument of who will take care the housework. In my opinion, both should share their responsibilities like cleaning and looking after children. In this essay I will explain my opinion.

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Some people say that manufacturers and supermarkets should take the responsibility of reducing the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that customers should take responsibility and avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The excessive usage of plastic packages causes a big concern in society.Some people criticize the entrepreneurs who have a store,while others argue that it depends on the customer’s behaviour in the consuming process.This essay demonstrates the various approaches which are related to each side's preferences.

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Shoppers have too much choice, from chocolate bars to jeans.' What, in your opinion, are the advantages and disadvantages of having many things to choose from?

Being inside of the grocery store, with enormous of products makes the customers feel overwhelmed and spent a lot of money to the things that sometimes is not necessary. In this essay, I will tackle the pros and cons of it. And explain what I think about this situation.

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Some people think that traditional classrooms will be replaced by online learning in the future. To what extent do you agree or disagree

In recent years, there has been a huge increase in the number of individuals questioning conventional education will be converted to online education in the coming years. I completely agree with this statement. Since not only study resources are available in the Internet but also students accessibility to all education materials will be easy.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays, kids spend most of their time in mobile gadgets on a daily basis. The reasons for this are entertaining features and algorithms of phone and apps. In my opinion, it is negative development as it poorly affects their cognitive skills.

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The working week should be shorter, and workers should have a longer weekend. Do you agree or disagree?

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The government's investment in arts, music and theatre is a waste of money. Governtments should invest funds in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

There is no doubt that these days many government's investment in different fields such as arts, music and theatre. However, Several people show that as a waste of budget. At the same time, Others hold the opposite view. The question is, It is consider as a waste of funds?. To be honest, It is essential part of government's money. In this essay, We will discuss this topic.

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Long distance flight consumes the amount of fuel that a car uses for many years and pollutes the air. Some people think that we should discourage non-essential flights, such as tourists travel, rather than limit the use of cars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Long distance flights generate more carbon emission compared to other means of transportation such as car. Some people encourage to reduce unnecessary flights to travel and promote use of other transport.

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Some people think that planning for future is a waste of time. They believe it is more important to focus on the present. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued by some that present time is best to focus on, looking at future and preparing for it is misuse of time. I completely agree with this statement as any achievements perceived are in the current time only, noone receives them tomorrow.

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Some people think young people are not suitable for important positions in the government，while other people think it is a good idea for young people to take on these positions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

A country cannot run without important positions like cabinet rank offficers, defence officials, judicial officials, police officers and many more. These positions play a vital role in development of a peaceful country and officers of every country do their job very well.

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Some people think that the increasing use of computers and mobile phones for communication hurts young people's reading and writing skills. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

There is an argument that, communication through mobile and personal computers may have negative effect on writing and reading skills of younger generation. Although, this kind of communication has some benefits for their skills, I believe that, this trend has become concerning day by day due to it's adverse effects.

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In many countries people have to pay for medical care, but some think that it should be a free service provided by the government. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people in the world are agree that the medical care or some medicins must be free for people. Because they are not able to pay for everything such as care from the doctor and all kind of medicins, so they believe they must get it for free. While others are opposed to this and think, in the world some poeple are really poor and they can not afford to pay for everything and they need help, but others who does not need that must pay for everything. In this essay, I will discuss both of view. In the conclusion, I will clarly state my position on this issue.

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