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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and dive your own opinion.

it is often that children should learn that how to be a good citizen and how to contribute towards the society. some masses think child should learn it from school and some think it is the duty of school because parents are paying fees to school. i will discuss both views in essay include with my opinion.

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some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. why is this the case? do you think this is a positive or negative development?

With the fast development that happened in our lives having a mobile phone become easier nowadays As a result young people around the world have different devices and they spend hours using them every day. I extremely believe that using phone for a long hours is a waste of time that has a negative impact on children.

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Some people say that history is one of the most important subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Now days people are consentrate more on studying, teaching and learning.Also, the word are guding us to learn the Science to improve ourselves. Some people believe the history curriculum is more important than technology.while, other beliefs since and computer subjects are very interesting.In this essay I will discuss both points and in conclusion I will explain my personal beliefs.

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In many urban areas, the rising cost of housing has made it difficult for middle and low-income families to afford a place to live. What are the causes of this issue, and what solutions can you suggest to address it?

There are a lot of middle and low-income families having hard time to afford a place to live in many urban areas since housing cost rising. This essay will examine the main causes of this difficulty and possible solutions to this problem.

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Interviews form the basic selection criteria for most large companies. However some people think that interview is not a reliable method of choosing whom to employ. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, most of the students desire to get a job in a large private company. Most of the times these students need to pass a interview in order to get hire for the job. However, some people think that interview is not reliable method of choosing whom to employ, but I partially think that the interview is the suitable way by which a company can decides whom to select. I will elaborate on it further in upcoming paragraphs and give my opinions.

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What are the advantages and disadvantages of using social media? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.

undoutdly, current time is the era of social media. social media has both negitive and positive outcome and it is depend on the person who is watching the content that how he or she think about that specific news that is broadcasted by any influancer or by media person. also it is depend on the way of broadcasting person tha how that person convey his or her message to the public. in this essay i will explain about the pros and cons of the social media in following paragraphs.

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People have a stronger liking for bad news, such as crimes and wars, than good news. Therefore, many people believe that more bad news should be broadcasted. What is your opinion?

undoutdly, in the era of social media everyone wants to get name and fame. if a person shows only topics that is related to any problem then person cannot get more views as compare to if that person shows any topic related to any controversy and related to any heated topic then video get viral too fast. also it is the believe that heated topics should be broadcasted much as compare to the topics that is good for the society. i believe that topics that is related to the welfare of society should be broadcasted more.

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It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this? - - You should spend around 40 minutes on this task.

Gap year before continuing aducation to a higer education such as university is a contentious issue debate nowadays, as many students prefer for having a year after graduate from senior high school. This esay will examine some key points about benefits and drawbacks of this issue.

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Many people around the world use social media to keep in touch with other people and get the news. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

One use of the social media is to keep the people around the world be in touch and to get updated to the current news. This facts show that there are not only the disadvantages produced from the social media, but also the advantages. I personally think the advantages of this development outweight the disadvantages of using social media.

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The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend. Do you agree or disagree?

Some community believe that staff should job shorter and workers should have much longer weekends. From my point of view, I totally agree with this view and this essay will explain how it can be beneficial for workers.

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Some people think it is more important to plant more trees in open areas in towns and cities than to provide more housing. Do you agree or disagree?

There is an opinion that planting more trees in cities is more significant than building more housing. I personally completely agree with this assertion since it helps the environment and citizens' mental health.

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People doing dangerous sports activities like scuba diving and bungi jumping, they should be responsible for their own life and rescue workers should not risk their lives to save people. Do you agree or disagree?

Humans doing dangerous sports activities should be responsible for their own life and others. I strongly agree that people must be aware of their attitude and how it reflects on other people. In this academic essay will highlight why people should increase their awareness about this topic, provides evidence with examples, and strong conclusion.

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Some peole tend ti take temporary jobs (they only work for few month of year), for they have time to do other things. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

People have different temperament towards life.some of them prefer working part-time over others. I believe it has some advantages but they are temporary and in long-term , It has more disadvantages.

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Some people tend to take temporary jobs (they only work for few months of year), for they have time to do other things. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

It is observed that people tend to take temporary jobs for having own time to do other things.There are both merits and demerits, and I think that the benefits are greater than the drawbacks.

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Today, newspapers and televisions are giving detailed descriptions on crimes. Some people believe such a practice will cause bad consequences and thus media should be restricted. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowdays , newspapers and TV are provied crimes news with discrsip it in details , many people think follow this news everyday Will causes negative consequences, therefore , media must be restricted , however , I personally disagree with the statement for many reason I will present it in two Pointe .

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Some countries have legal ages at which people can drink. Other countries believe not having strict laws is a better policy. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Varieties nations are strict about the limited ages for drinking while some countries think the age restriction will make underage people violating and difficult to control. In my view, it will have a negative effect than when limiting the age of drinking.

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some countries have legal ages at which people can drink. Other countries belive not having strict laws is a better policy. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Varieties nation strict the limited ages of drinking while some countries think the age restriction will make underage people violating and difficult to control. In my views, it will have negative affect than when limit age of drinking.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in additional to their main subjects.Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some undergraduates want to learn additional subject to their main major, whereas others believe that it is more important to give their full attention and time to studying for a qualification.

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As mass communication and transport continue to grow, societies are becoming more and more alike leading to a phenomenon known as globalization. Some people fear that globalization will inevitably lead to the total loss of cultural identity. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement؟

Since entering the age of technology, mass communication and transport has been dramatically changed. Nowadays, international touch easier than before therefore, individuals effect from each other. This situation is called globalization in the modern world. Some people say that globalization will lead to loss of cultural identity. I only agree to some extend to this view and the reason for this will be explained in the following essay.

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Some people say that only reason for learning a foriegn language is inorder to travel to or work in a foreign country.Others says that these are not the only reason why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your opinion?

The importance of occupying proficiency in international language is essential while traveling interationally. which was always debatable has become more controversia with many people claiming that forign accent help to secure an employment need in nonnative countries while other reject this notin. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked controversy over the pontial impact in recent years. In my opinion, former propositon appear to be more rational. this essay elaborate both perspactive thus lead to a logical conclusion.

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