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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as a human, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including use for foods and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The discussion about animal rights have been separating people since decades. While some people argues that animals have the same rights as human, others think that the sole purpose of existence of animals is to fulfill our needs. In this essay, I will discuss both views and give my opinion on this debate.

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Some people believe that reading stories from e-book better than watching TV or playing computer games for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Modern technology has revolutionize everything in life .some folks think it's better to read electronic books rather than watching something on TV or playing games .I partially agree with this statement and I will explain my view later in the essay

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These days, more and more parks and open spaces in cities are being turned into gardens where people can grow fruit and vegetables. Do you think the benefits outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent times, citizens have been allowed to cultivate plants in local parks and green zones by authorities. While these changes could have some setbacks, I firmly believe that advantages outweigh disadvantages.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people pf different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?

Some individuals believe that music is a wonderful way to bring poeple from different cultures and backgrounds closer to eachother. I think that music is a wonderful way to communicate without language and should be taught in school as an emotional outlet for students.

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Some people think that high-end technology can prevent and cut down the crime rate. Do you agree or disagree?

There is an opinions that the crime rate can be prohibited by technology that be invested huge money. I personally completely agree with this assertion since this technology can find certain evidence about a criminal activity.

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Most people accept that we now live in globalisation world but not everyone agreees that it is beneficial to what extent is globalization a positive or negative development

It is easy to get connected with each other all around the world thanks to globalisation. However, there are arguments about weather we are in benefits of globalisation whereas some other disagree with the positive aspects of globalization. In this essay both positive and negative aspect of globalisation will be discussed.

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In many countries, men and women both work full-time jobs and it is logical that they should share household tasks equally. Do you agree or disagree?

There is an opinion that it is varid that it is valid that household works have to be share to not only father but also mather because permanent jobs account for men and women. I personally completely agree with this assertion since ded and mom have a great responsibility for that.

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Some people believe that the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Education is an essential part for human's life.However,few bodies say that the ambition of higher education is to beneficial for graduation with get improved career.While,others argue that it is give an extra benefits of university education for both such as personal and community. I will explain this essay in below paragraphs along with my opinion.

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Some people believe that natural ability is necessary to be successful at sports. Others believe that hardwork and practice is more important. Discuss both the sides and add your own opinion.

The large number of individuals feel that be more athletic is a important part of success, whereas the opposing stance is that hardwork and prectice is vital for success. The purpose of this essay is to analyse the both views and then i will explain why I believe the idea that hard work and practice vital for success.

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Students generally prefer to choose the period they are supposed to study and the period they are free to have fun. They should be allowed to do their time management. Do you agree or disagree?

Time management keeps the students to be aranged and displin in their daily ruten. It is totally aggred students should have the ability to make their time management between their study and fun time. Allowing time managment for students will develop diffrent factors on them and this will be proven.

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Schools concentrate far too much on traditional subjects which do not adequately prepare students for the realistic demands of the modern working world. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A commen belief is that school main responsibility is training students professional skills for their future work life, therefore their lessons should be updated with the requires of advanced work. I strongly agree with this concept because training students according to advanced job needs wull reduce the society job lost and students more likely success in their future work life.

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It is often argued that it is difficult to get children to read. Why do you think this is? What measures could be taken to encourage children to read more? Give reasons for your answer and any include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The debate regards decreasing interest of children in reading has been a long discussing. well, one cannot deny the fact that nowadays children ability to read across the globe has decline, and these could be due to distractions and lack of interest in topic. therefore, there can be tackle by addresing these issues.

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Nowadays a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicine and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you thinkg it is a positive or negative development?

There is no denying the fact that a large group of people in our world sick with different types of illnesses . While it is a commonly that they are taking pills without a doctor prescription due to that they will make there sickness worst . In my opinion , i consider that it is a negative development according to a variaty of reasons that i will mention in my essay .

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Some people believe the purpose of education is to make people useful to society. Others believe it is to prepare them to achieve their ambitions. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The importance of schooling is essential of development of community and improve foundation of individuals life-style which was always debatable has become more controversial with many people claiming that education is beneficial to mitigates financial and social problem of society, while other reject this notion. The substantai influence of this trend has sparked controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion education influence both personal carrer and supress comminity challanges. This essay further elaborate both perspective thus lead to a logical conclusion.

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The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend Do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, there has been a growing discussion about that should be better extending weekends or not. While some people believe that weekdays might be longer, The others including me think this is wrong and maybe worst idea and disagree with it. This essay will discusses two sides of this proposal.

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Although more and more people read the news on internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news for the majority of people. Do you agree or disagree?

There is no denying the fact that traditional newspaper is still the most favourite method to read news for several individuals. While it is commonly held belief that it will always remain the best source of news among people, there is also an argument that opposes this controversial topic. In my opinion, I consider news on paper is historic and artistic fancy way to get an update about what happing worldwide. Nevertheless, I totally disagree with this pressing idea.

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In many countries nowadays, consumers can go to a supermarket and buy food produced all over the world.Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Nowsday in many nations, people can purchase food that produced all over the world in the supermarket. From my perspective, this statement has both sides, but its advantages are outweight its disadvantage.

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Some peopel believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes ( for example working for a charity, umproving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger childern. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A few people think that doing services for the community without getting paid for it should be a compulsory part of school activities.For instance , cleaning the streets and beaches , helping poor individuals and donating to a charity.I would argue that I agree strongly with students should contribute to these programmes.

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many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Dose this situation have more advantages or more disadvantage.

In the modern world, people are sometimes exposed to working long hours because of changes in working models. Therefore, individuals have no leisure time and they cannot have alot of time passed their families, friends or relevant. They do not even have time for themselves. In my opinion, there are more disadvantages to this situation. Thisthis view will be explained in the following essay.

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In many countries, the number of animals and plants is declining. Why do you think this is happening? How can this issue be solved?

There is no denying the fact that several animals and plants are in danger of extinction. While it is a commonly held belief that there is a decrease in the number of species. This essay will discuss the causes of this pressing topic and what solutions can be taken to resolve this problem. To begin with, there are many reasons why we are losing various animals and crops. In other words, one of the main contributors to this factor is pollution. In addition, there are several types of pollution and each has its own damage. For example, sea pollution is dangerously harmful to species in the sea, while air pollution causes major and long-lasting health issues for animals, plants, and human alike.

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