IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 199

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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These days, more and more parks and open spaces in cities are being turned into gardens where people can grow fruit and vegetables

In this text I should give my opinion about the opening parks and opening spaces in cities.I think that not worse idea why i will write in next paragraph.

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Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Government must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Nowadays, Some people believe that local authority has investing more money in Arts such as

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The best way to understand other culture is to work for a multinational organization. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent times, Some pupils believe that the best way to know other cultures is to work for a multinational organisation. I am partially agree with this given statement, Because of know other culture or traditions are easily get information through travel. Otherwise, work on multinational organisations through get information about other nation companies.

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Some people think only best students should be rewarded. Others think we should reward students who make progress. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is thought by some giving gift to people who is studious is the greatest way whereas other individuals believe that gift giving students who make develop. I totally agree with two topics.

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Government investment in the arts ,such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Government must investment this money in public service instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Nowadays, most of people have been considering

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Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans face in the 21st Century and sea levels are continuing to rise at alarming rates. What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions.

Global warming is one of the most serious problems in the 21st century. It causes many issues, and one of the biggest is the rise in sea levels. This happens because the ice at the poles is melted, and the oceans are getting warmer. The following essay will discuss the threats that associated to Global warming and possible solutions for these issues.

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Food travels thousands of miles from farm to consumers. Some people believe we should buy food from local farmers to protect the environment and help the local business. Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

As our life expectancy prolonged and new jobs came up to the surface due to the 4th industrial revolution, employees now don't contract with companies on long-term. Now we are going to find out in this essay about the pros and cons of this type of employment.

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Many people think that interviews aren't the best way to assess the suitability of a candidate for a position. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed by some people that face to face interviews are not only an effective way to find the perfection in candidates. I also agree with this statement, other steps should also be considered while selecting a person for a job position.

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In some countries , government likes to spend more money to spent money on art. Some people agree with this. However, others think government should on health and health discuss both sides and give your opinion.

These days, some countries like to spend their treasury on art, but the other wants their government to spend their money on health care. In this essay, I will consider both sides and give my opinion.

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Many people are moving from rural areas to big cities. Why has this happened? To what extent do you think it is a good trend?

People are migrating from countryside to urban areas because of better life style and opportunities. But I believe that this trend has negative aspects for society and people owing to various reasons.

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Some people think that parents have an powerful influence in child's life, while the influence from outside the home plays a bigger part of child's development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People have vary opinion that which factor is more powerful to influence in child's life. Some people suggest that parents have significant impact while other people believe that influence from outside family plays more important role. In my opinion, parents is vital to chindren development compared to other factors,

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Historians and archaeologists now believe that, over time and around the world, the amount of violence in which people are killed has been going down. Why do you think this the case? What can be done to make sure violence stays low?

Throughout history, historians and archaeologists believed that violence percentage was high among people , but now they think that the percentage has lower over time.This essay will discuss the causes of the reduction of the violence percentage and how to ensure remains low.

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Some countries have legal ages at which people can drink. Other countries believe not having strict laws is a better policy. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some countries have legislations that limit drinking age. Thus, drinking alcohol has significantly bad effects health and physical development of people, especially at early ages and laws can regulate these issues. This essay will discuss the bad aspects drinking of underages and mention the valuable role of strict rules.

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Some people think living in big cities is bad for people's health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, certin people believe that living in a metopolises have detrimental effect on peoples health. I agree with that statement, because i have some examples that can prove the drawback of living in a big city.

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

A country generally has large areas, and most of them are divided into smaller regions like cities, suburbs, and countryside. I personally think, the different conditions between areas make people tend to think that moving into cities is a great option for it has better conditions for living, mobilities, work opportunities, and entertainment. This phenomenon would decrease the number of people living in isolated areas.

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People are surrounded by many kinds of advertising which can influence their life. Do the positive effects of this trend outweigh negative effects?

The world is overload by advertising, the booming growth of it is a result of technological explosion, businesses can use social media platforms or media channels to promote their products, services or messages effectively. However, this trend can have positive and negative impact on our life.

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In many countries, people increasingly talk about money ( how much they earn or how much they pay for things) in their daily conversations. Why? is this a positive or negative development?

People's conversations increasingly revolve around their income and how they spend it.While this development can be attributed to social expectations fueled by the recent popularity of social media, it has detrimental effects on people's mental health, making people less happy and contributing to social isolation.

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Nowadays it is very popular to be technology/internet literate. Some people say that these skills will replace the use of books as main source of information and entertainment. Do you agree or disagree?

No doubt that in present-day technology plays an important role in our lives and many folks rely on the Internet. It argued that technology will replace books for search information and for enjoyment. I assert that the Internet will be the most dominant than handbooks. In this essay, I will present my reasons and draw a logical conclusion.

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In some countries university students live at home with their family while they study, whereas in other countries students attend university in another city. Do you think the benefits of living away from home during university outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

Students in some societies prefer to study in their home town while others are eager to leave their homes in order to experience other cities. I utterly believe the advantages of studying away from the family are more than its negative points.

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In many countries, senior positions have higher salaries compared to those of young workers of the same company. Some people think this isn’t justified. Do you agree or disagree?

In many countries, high positions get well-paid salaries contrast to young workers that they work the same company. Seniors positions have many important duties and responsibilities than young workers as well as experience. This essay agrees this opinion.

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