IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 202

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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In some countries, museums charge people for admission, while in some other countries, people are admitted into museums free of charge. Do you think the advantages of charging admission outweigh its disadvantages?

Some countries charge visitors for admission in museum, while other countries do not charge. I personally believe that while museums suffer from finanacial crisis if they are free, the benefits of this outweigh the drawbacks because free admission to museums allows people from all economic backgrounds to visit free of cost.

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Some people believe that school curriculums should focus more on practical skills, like financial literacy and cooking, rather than traditional subjects, like history and literature. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?”

The majority of society thinks that school program should spend their time on the illustration of practical abilities that will reduce the problem in future of students,colliding with educational program such as financial literacy and cooking. Meanwhile,the opposite side of society believes in the idea of promoting traditional education. I partly agree with this,and in this essay, I’m gonna promote my point of view

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Some people think that technology have a negative side while other think that it makes our life easier. Discuss both opinions and gave your opinion.

Technology is something very important in recent life, but also still there are a lot of people argues about that, one group believes that technology has negative effects on our life, while other think the opposed of that which is it has a better effect on our life and made it more easy, and i agree with this.

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Some people think that adverts control what we purchase, while others think they are useful sources of information on products.

Majority of people believe that advertisement can manipulate what we are buying, meanwhile other believe that advertisement is essential source of information about the product. Below we will discuss both of this views,including my own opinion.

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Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

Climate change is the pervasive global issue. Plenty has done to cope with it. Few people believe that this problem cannot be resolved, humans must find a way to live with it. This essay will discuss this view in detail and will explain why I t completely disagree with this and think that this condition can be controlled with some precautions.

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‘Unemployment remains the biggest challenge to school-leavers* in most countries’ How far do you agree with this assessment? What other challenges face young people today?

The number of job opportunities in the market has decrease throughout the years, while the amount of graduate students rising significantly. This phenomenon remain as the biggest challenge the graduates have to face nowadays. I concur that there is an issue related to this phenomenon which the government should addressed it for the better future of the citizens.

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Some companies sponsor sport as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while others think there are disadvantagesDiscuss both views and give your opinion

people love debating about sponsor sport as a way to advertise themselves. fundamentally I don't know how sports be developement consiously without sponsor. but this essay will discuss both prespectives.

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Some people think that it’s a good idea to socialise with work colleagues during evenings and weekends. Other people think it’s important to keep working life completely separate from social life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Everyone has different opinion on this.Getting along with your work partners during evenings and weekends,while keeping work-life balance is impotant too.I am going to write this essay by concuring with the viewpoint that it is important to have a working life entirely different from your colleagues.There are positive asspects for example, you can spend time with your family and give attention to yourself.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

With the development of technology, access to electronic devices has become an unavoidable fact. Among all these devices, smartphone plays a major role. Unlike years ago, nowadays not only adults, but also children has the access to mobiles. Use of mobile phones among children has a positive as well as negative impact on their development. This essay discusses about the above in detail.

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The table below highlights data on the number of travelers using three major British airports between 1998 and 2003. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The given table depicts a comparison between the three main airports in the UK and the number of passengers per million who used them from 1998 to 2003.

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Many people today are worried about cyber crime such as hacking and identity theft. What problems does cyber crime cause and what solutions can you suggest for ordinary people and business to take

Technology and internet made a huge revelation in human being's life. Those has uncountable advantages but also some drawbacks and cybercrime is one of these. Because of crime by internet peoples are facing terrible situation. Such as, losing money, black mail, and many more. In this essay, I will discuss about the problems of crime by online and how people can overcome from that.

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Many peole think that it is important to go to university while others prefer to start work without getting a universty education. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the last decades, 1 has attracted several arguments and drawn the spotlight. Some people believe that 1 has many benefits, while others argue that 1 has many drawbacks. This essay will explain why 1 is vital for people’s lives and has many advantages.

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Some people think that schools should only teach academic subjects while others believe that they also teach life skills. Discuss both views and give examples.

An increasing number of people today think that some people should teach school subjects while others think that they should teach life skills. There are two completely opposite opinions on this matter.

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In order to study at university students are required to pay expensive tuition fee. Not all students can afford them so some people think that university education should be free for everyone.What extend do you agree or disagree.

Some people believe that one qualifications to enroll in an institution is that one person is oblige ro settle a costly school fee.But others also thought that not everyone can pay for their school obligations.Therefore,several individuals anticipate that education in school should be freely given to all.I disagree with this opinion because since the quality of higher education depends on the amount of money and it should not be free.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough.

It is often argued in some countries juvenile are told that they can get anything if they are struggling enough, Although this might be prevalent convection among some people .In this essay I will elaborate both merits and demerits

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Mmany people are now opting to provide technology companies with their personal data in exchange for access to software. do the advantages of this outweight the disadvantages.

There is no denying the fact that it is essential to protect your personal information. While it is a commonly held belief that in ecxchange for access to software your personal data will be shared with the technology companies, there is also an argument that opposes it.

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Some people think that adverts control what we purchase, while others think they are useful sources of information on products. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

The existence of advertisement for some people consider as to control the purchases of customers, whereas others believe it will be beneficial since it contains sources of information on products. This essay will elucidate both sides and at the end I will give my personal standing.

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Human activities have negative effects on plant and animal species. Some people think it is too late to do anything about this problem. Others believe that effective measure can be taken to improve this situation. Discuss both views and give our opinion

Many people believe that the natural environment can be reversed. While, others think that it's no longer possible due to man made destruction created a opposite impact on flora and fauna. In this essay, I will examine both perspectives and will provide why this is happening as well as what should the government can do about this disaster.

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One long-distance flight consumes fuel which a car uses in several years’ time, but they cause the same amount of pollution. So same people think that we should discourage non-essential flights, such as tourist travel, rather than to limit the use of cars. TASK: To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, we cna see a flight that have a long time use the same fuel as the vehicles in a long run; however, the number of greenhouse gas that are emissioned by both of them are the same. As a result, a group of people believe instead of limit using cars the figure of flights out to be reudced and prevent tourist journey. I do not subscribe to this idea owing to the fact that , today, not only time but also the environment is the most important factor, so airlines have to upgrade their planes and governments create a fast clean transportation systems.

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It is important for everyone, including young people, to save money for their future. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, numerous people including young people is aware and familiar related to financial management. This trend force people to spend their money in a wise amount as well as to save money for their future lives. I concur with this trend since its enhance the skills of self-control and prepare for their future.

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