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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Opinion In their advertising businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negeztive development?

Nowadays farms, specially new one while launching their latest product ,mention that the product is new in some way and is more effective than those that exist in market already. Many people things things think that it’s a room development. I will elaborate on it in further paragraph with some examples and will give my opinion.

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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In this temporary era, most people declare that promotion push us to buy something that we really do not necessitate. Other people argue that advertisements tell us about new products that may enhance our lives. I really agree to support first statement that say that advertaising encourages us to purchase items that some people do not need. In this essay, I will provide my opinion on the matter.

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Some people believe that a crime is a result of social problems and poverty, others think that crime is a result of bad person's nature. Discuss both views and give your opinion

In today's world,crime rates are increasing day by day due to various reasons.Some individuals say that,social issues and poverty are the main factors of a crime.Others believe that,improper characters is the foremost problemsof a crime. This essay will elaborate both these points of view and argue in favour of the latter.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message ?

There is no denying the fact that the phenomenon of telling the children to do harmful works if they want to achieve everything they want is ubiquitous across the globe due to its paramount importance. One school of thought opine that it is worthless, however others consider that a couple of problems also occur because of the same. Although this has a plethora of merits yet numerous demerits are also there which will be elaborated in upcoming paragraphs.

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Some people think that sports involving violence such as boxing and martial arts should be banned from TV as well as from international sports competition. what is your opinion?

Some peole believe that those sports incuring severe injuries to opponents should be banned from TV shows and international athletic rivalries. I completely agree with this practice because it would affect youngsters badly, and disturb the aim of international competitions.

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lt is suggeted that all young adults should undertake a period of unpaid work, helping people in the community. Does it bring more benefits or drawbacks to the young people?

Some generation of people argue that when all adolescents work for a period of time without recieving money, they can have better community. In my opinion, this way really helpful for beginers to improve some skills and their awareness in work atmosphere. In this essay will discuss about advantages and disadvantages this phenomenon and gives conclusion.

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Some people believe environmental problems require global attention whereas some believe they can be dealt with on a national level. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

Nowadays a lot of people have made an idea of environment problems is needed to worldwide attention and some think that each region can deal by it's own . This is a controversial state to say or discuss , firstly i do believe that environment have cause several problems among us such as pollution and the distrubtion of the nature and causing destructions.For instance , people who believe that environment have caused multiple problems that are required for global and world attention. For example, pollution needs us to be more aware of the harmful things that will be led by it , however some people think it's okay to have problems related to environment , because it's hard for them to see the influence it does . Moreover , there was a conference back in 1999 where it quoted on how to help the global by making civillians more aware of the damage they do to the environment , without a stable environment a lot of issues will be there.Many people are biased wheither it needs recognization...

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Some people believe that zoos are cruel and morally wrong because they only keep animals in captivity. Others think that zoos play a variety of important roles aside from entertaining the public. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Being in captivity, animals are usually become more healthy, than being out in the wild, because their health is thoroughly tracked by workers of a zoo. It allows them to be in a safe zone, and not to be exposed to unsafe wild nature.

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Some people prefer to be during exam days and go through the entire syllabus in the last few days, whereas others have regular habits, studying a little every day. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both studying patterns and choose which one is a better way of action according to you

Education play a vital role in every stage of life. A group of people doing studies few days before the exams nevertheless, others have a habit of dally study. Both have their own pros and cons which I will discuss in this essay.I believe learning before the exam days is best option.

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These days it is neither possible nor desirable for most people to stay in the same job throughout their working life. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Its a interesting question to discuss.In my opinion most of the people are trapped in this matrix but beside, that I belive most of us agree to this and it makes my mind occupy everytime but these days it is neither possible nor desirable for majority people to stay in the same job throughout their working life .In my opinion I personally agree with this statement.

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Many people are choosing to live on their own. Is this a positive or a negative trend?What is your opinion and share your personal experiences? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, a word artificial intelligence is in trend commonly known as AI. It prefers to a software designed by humans. once an a.i software is developed , It can answer to various questions and can do various tasks using its algorithm set by humans. Many people think that development in AI sector could be very beneficial. I will elaborate on it in further paragraphs and give my opinion on this topic.

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Children should do organized activities in their free time while others believe that children should be free to do what they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion. (Discussion)

Free time should allow people to do things they want to do. Some believe children should spend their free time doing scheduled activities to stay organised. Meanwhile, others argue they should spend their time however they want. In my opinion, I believe younger kids should be allowed to do anything during their free time.

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Today many parents force rhier children to study all kinds of courses in the early age . What are the reason behind this.? What effects do you think this practice would bring to gbs children?

These days, most parents tend to put pressure on their children to attend in several courses. This condition seems to have two main causes, and a number of effects, which we will discuss here.

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The shows changes in sea levels over time, with estimates for the past and projections for the future.

The graph illustrates key information about estimated sea level changes between 1800 and 2100, which is demonstrated between past and future. The units are treasured in (mm).

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Historians and archaeologists now believe that, over time and around the world, the amount of violence in which people are killed has been going down. Why do you think this the case? What can be done to make sure violence stays low?

Nowadays some researchers such as historians and archaeologists think that occasionally and around the world, the amount of ruthlessness in which people are being killed has declined. It is occurring because technology enhancement and items such as cameras allow government officials to seek people. If we want to be sure that violence will decrease, people should keep upgrading innovations.

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Argument: Some people think that students in single-sex schools perform better academically. Others, however, believe that mixed schools provide children with better social skills for adult life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

I think single-sex school will produce better students academically. First, because that kind of school provide a better environment for students to study. Students can be more concentrate on their study rather than distracted from opposite sex attraction. This is very important especially in their teenage years such as in high school. Teenagers on their 15-17 years experience a constant hormone influx. Therefore it is normal to begin to pay attention to their opposite sex. In a single-sex school it will not be an issue since there is no opposite sex students for one to attracted to. Eventually, they will pay more attention to their books.

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People think that countries should produce foods their population eats and import less food as much as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Write your response not less than 250 words. You get 40 minutes to complete this task

Food is the basic necessity of human beings and it is very difficult to fulfill the need regarding in the modern eon beacuse population is increasing day by day. Mobs ought that nation should do low glode trade and grow food at their own countries. I will discuss both views and my viewpoint in the upcoming paragraph.

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Some people believe that there will be a reduction in air travel in the future. Do you think that this trend is positive or negative?

In current era,due to technological advancement have transformed many aspect of life and air travelling is no exception.but some group think that there will be a reduction in number of air travel.I think this is the negative treand and my inclination would be justifyied in following paragraph.

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Some people believe that there will be a reduction in air travel in the future. Do you think that this trend is positive or negative?

Technology is growing at the rate of leaps and bounds. As a group of people think in coming days the sky travelling will face a decline. According to my perspective, it is a positive thing in terms of environment and senatorial fuel.

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Some people believe that the only purpose of films is to entertain. But other say film should have educational value. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some individuals think that main purpose of films is for entertainment only ,while others say that it should made with some educational purpose . Both views will be dissussed in the upcoming paragraphs along with my opinion .

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